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| 03 Aug 2012 10:43 AM |
Hello UAF! Here is my two paragraph story.
I joined UAF a little over a month ago and I am trying to get to the rank of Major. When I first joined UAF, people were very nice to me. There was a lot of training and I got promoted to Captain pretty quickly. I liked the activeness of UAF because most groups are not active or just do not do anything. Lionblaze1212 held the first training I went to. I met a lot of great people (by the way a lot of UAF are great people these are a few I met when I first joined) including HatianDragon6400,lionblaze1212, EmptyBaseplates, Shadowswords, tbarpo, and TntBoy2001. I hope if I become a Major people will be glad that I was there to welcome them and help them with training. I also like how former UAF ilikekobe24 even took time to train me with a sword. Once DiscoHeaven became the leader of UAF, UAF became a lot more active and a lot more fun (not saying Shadowswords era wasn't fun or active). I hope that if I become a Major I will quickly advance to Operative so that I can keep UAF active and maybe host a few raids on TRA.
This is my story, --[UAF--Captain BlackNuke101--]-- |
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| 03 Aug 2012 10:44 AM |
Can you people please paraphrase, oh my god.
Nice story but it would be better if you did paraphrase. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 10:47 AM |
| Ok. Thanks for commenting. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 11:55 AM |
This would definitely pass in my eyes, one or two slight grammatical errors so it doesnt read quite as smoothly but otherwise very good.
~Pro [UAF-CPT] [Red brick] [Red army] [Academy] |
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| 03 Aug 2012 01:49 PM |
| Wait, he released the academy? I might rejoin. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 01:49 PM |
| Thanks AK that means a lot. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 01:51 PM |
Yes he reformed the accademy, Sirbackspace, It's better than EVER.
[UAFOP] Djdude |
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Whazoot
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| 03 Aug 2012 01:51 PM |
| For what it's worth, that grammar would pass, in my book, at least. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 02:21 PM |
| No problem Hat. Sorry I didnt put your name in their AK i forgot cause i typed this quickly. |
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| 03 Aug 2012 06:55 PM |
Don't become a Operative too quickly. Me and Sk8ter (Two oldest Majors in UAF) Need it bad. And Major's cannot help in training.
~no noob~ |
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| 03 Aug 2012 08:52 PM |
| Yeah I know Dare you guys deserve Operative. I would like to try my best to get there quickly. |
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