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UAF-Captain Academy English Proficient Test.

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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
Total Posts: 277
03 Aug 2012 10:43 AM
Hello UAF! Here is my two paragraph story.

I joined UAF a little over a month ago and I am trying to get to the rank of Major. When I first joined UAF, people were very nice to me. There was a lot of training and I got promoted to Captain pretty quickly. I liked the activeness of UAF because most groups are not active or just do not do anything. Lionblaze1212 held the first training I went to.
I met a lot of great people (by the way a lot of UAF are great people these are a few I met when I first joined) including HatianDragon6400,lionblaze1212, EmptyBaseplates, Shadowswords, tbarpo, and TntBoy2001. I hope if I become a Major people will be glad that I was there to welcome them and help them with training. I also like how former UAF ilikekobe24 even took time to train me with a sword. Once DiscoHeaven became the leader of UAF, UAF became a lot more active and a lot more fun (not saying Shadowswords era wasn't fun or active). I hope that if I become a Major I will quickly advance to Operative so that I can keep UAF active and maybe host a few raids on TRA.

This is my story,
--[UAF--Captain BlackNuke101--]--
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AwesomeMarshmallow is not online. AwesomeMarshmallow
Joined: 28 Sep 2010
Total Posts: 8809
03 Aug 2012 10:44 AM
Can you people please paraphrase, oh my god.

Nice story but it would be better if you did paraphrase.
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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
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03 Aug 2012 10:47 AM
Ok. Thanks for commenting.
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ProAVENGERfromLU is not online. ProAVENGERfromLU
Joined: 04 Feb 2012
Total Posts: 5234
03 Aug 2012 11:55 AM
This would definitely pass in my eyes, one or two slight grammatical errors so it doesnt read quite as smoothly but otherwise very good.

~Pro [UAF-CPT] [Red brick] [Red army] [Academy]
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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
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03 Aug 2012 01:39 PM
Thanks Pro.
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AK47pwned3 is not online. AK47pwned3
Joined: 14 Aug 2010
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03 Aug 2012 01:46 PM
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SirBackspace is not online. SirBackspace
Joined: 28 Mar 2010
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03 Aug 2012 01:49 PM
Wait, he released the academy? I might rejoin.
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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
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03 Aug 2012 01:49 PM
Thanks AK that means a lot.
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djdude12345678 is not online. djdude12345678
Joined: 26 Sep 2010
Total Posts: 413
03 Aug 2012 01:51 PM
Yes he reformed the accademy, Sirbackspace, It's better than EVER.

[UAFOP] Djdude
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Whazoot is not online. Whazoot
Joined: 01 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 302
03 Aug 2012 01:51 PM
For what it's worth, that grammar would pass, in my book, at least.
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Ryanr23 is not online. Ryanr23
Joined: 17 May 2010
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03 Aug 2012 01:51 PM
lol grammar

~umad
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HatianDragon6400 is not online. HatianDragon6400
Joined: 04 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1646
03 Aug 2012 01:53 PM
Thanks for using my name!
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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
Total Posts: 277
03 Aug 2012 02:21 PM
No problem Hat. Sorry I didnt put your name in their AK i forgot cause i typed this quickly.
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Daredevilz is not online. Daredevilz
Joined: 15 Jun 2010
Total Posts: 1231
03 Aug 2012 06:55 PM
Don't become a Operative too quickly. Me and Sk8ter (Two oldest Majors in UAF) Need it bad. And Major's cannot help in training.

~no noob~
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BlackNuke101 is not online. BlackNuke101
Joined: 08 Dec 2010
Total Posts: 277
03 Aug 2012 08:52 PM
Yeah I know Dare you guys deserve Operative. I would like to try my best to get there quickly.
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