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| 21 Jul 2012 09:46 PM |
I held my arm up to my eyes, as the cameras flashed and news reporters walked out of their vans with their cameras and microphones. I stood on the stand, with three microphones, as reporters and journalists asked their questions. I finally spoke, my eyes having adjusted to the light.
"I've decided to donate the Robux and Tix to finish the construction and bump up the secruity in OT City, the newest prison in ROBLOXia..." Before I could finish, a helicopter's spotlight shinned brightly, blinding my far worse than the camera's ever could.
"Marblemaster, don't move! You are under arrest!" The pilot announced, as more helicopters flew in and cars arrived in the area, F.E.A.R guards stepping out, holding guns, and starting to beat the reporters, journalists, and other innocent OTers. I tried to step forward and object, but something flew into my neck, I narrowed my eyes to see what it was, seeing a dart, with enough toxin to wound a Tank Zombie that is constantly spotted in abandoned labs. The darkness closed in through my eyes, as I fell to the ground, passing out.
(More chapters will be posted soon, as I'm tracking this thread.) |
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:47 PM |
| at least you know how to use paragraphs |
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:49 PM |
| I must be planning your doom. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:04 PM |
My eyes slowly opened, only to hear a laugh that could damage anyone's ear drums. I growled, as I knew who it was, right away, nonetheless!
"Good day, young Marblemaster! I'll bet you've been enjoying your freedom and luck ever since you escaped the train to Banland!" I tried to stand, only to be knocked down by a F.E.A.R guard. My eyes were now opened, and I was wide awake. I looked up, and saw MSE6, holding her ever-famous Banhammer.
"Go to hell, MSE6..." I spat, only to be knocked in the face by one of the guards guns.
"I expected that response from you, Mr. Marble. So, do you know why you're here?" She asked, starting to walk slowly in a circle around me.
"I don't know, and I don't care. But I know that I will find out what's going on, and I WILL stop you." I replied, with my famous sense of confidence.
"It's a shame that you should say that. Because you're not the only one in this forsaken city, and at the slightest sign of an uprising...We have bombs placed all over the city! Get him outta here!" She commanded, as one of the guards yanked a chain, forcing me to stand, as they escorted me out of the room. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:12 PM |
I like the first part... why stupid clan related? |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:14 PM |
@lego
Because it's something many people know about, and they're major "armies" in ROBLOX. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:17 PM |
@Fun
Nope. You should've asked when it was still open, now the cast is set, as is the plot. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:19 PM |
| in roblox none of that "Army" nonsense would happen, be easier if it was fake "armies". Just my opinion, but yeah good story. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:23 PM |
MMMOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-=The official cinderblock king of OT=- |
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| 21 Jul 2012 10:24 PM |
| There will be more tomorrow, I'm beat, going to bed. |
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| 22 Jul 2012 06:18 PM |
| This is interesting so far. |
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| 23 Jul 2012 03:02 PM |
(Sorry for lack of activity, been coming up with more side-ideas.)
They dragged me outside, into what appeared to be an abandoned prison yard. There we tall, metal gates keeping me, and the thugs that dare call themselves ROBLOXians. There were a few, other poor ROBOXians that shared my fate. Some of the thugs managed to climb the gates, and stood in the next area, awaiting us. The guards didn't do anything to stop them, but instead through us into the area, and closed the gates behind us. The others cowered, and I turned and scowled at them.
"Don't panic, I have a plan."
"PLAN? Your plans always end up getting some ROBLOXians killed!"
"They don't die. They just end up in the hospital and come out okay."
"Well, get it to work!" He cried, as he was kicked in the face by one of the thugs. Three of them closed in on me. One attempted to punch me in the face, I managed to dodge, and counter by kicking his chest. The other two lunged at me, pinning me to the wall. The managed to punch me in the face, giving me a bloody nose.
"STOP. They will not be a problem. Will they? MSE6 asked, walking up the alley-way. The thugs cowered in fear at the sight of her.
"Through them in the cell. But don't take off those cuffs. We don't want to make it TOO easy for Mr. Marble, now do we?" |
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| 23 Jul 2012 07:55 PM |
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~BROFIST~ |
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