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meepo44 is not online. meepo44
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01 Aug 2012 11:55 AM

First off. No spam comments. Make them inteligent,
Yes we all know i mean the russian army group.
Its their name. They just suited this place the best.


EXCUSE THE FORMAT PROBLEMS! I had to transfer it from a text doc.
It really messed it up.


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The russian army is a group in roblox. This is just a groups name. And is in no means relivant to the real army.
Craktheravens first mission was a compleate disaster in regard to this story. Thats what the end was about.

Kreiger=Masterkrux
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Chapter One: Base camp.


37 miles from the nearest town, 240 miles from the nearest city. Out in the middle of the Russian expanse.
Date; February 17, 2012, TGI base R-5 is a small military encampment, its purpose was to provide a checkpoint,
to lead assaults on northern bases in Asia. It has 2 temporary admini buildings.
The offices, and the HRs meeting place. Both made of built-for-use steel pieces. It has 8 barracks.
And Barbwire on woodposts fence all around, a heilpad and latrines off to the sides.
Each barracks has a Centurions bunk space. A legionnaires spot just in front of that, and 2 harbingers spots around.
There are 3 vangaurd spaces, and 3 guard/Aux bunks. Auxiliaries get a better coat and a better gun at the arms rack,
The vanguards get a sword, And the harbingers get grenades. There are around 100 men at this base.


General CraktheRaven walked into the meeting room. Addressed the Centurion standing to sit,
he sat down at the desk and looked firmly at the centurion thinking, *This is the man I'm going to send into the cold?"
After a minute he said "Well centurion, you have an excellent record on all the squad tests... Well those tests could be wrong.
So I will simply ask you, Do you think you are ready to lead a recon team into the middle of the Russian expanse?" to witch,
centurion Kreiger replied "If you did not think I could do it sir, why would I be sitting in this office?"
The Field marshal simply glared at him, Gave a bit of a mumble and told him the formalities of the recon mission. Vague.
To put it in real words "We got reports of a base, take a team out into the cold and confirm its purpose and whereabouts."
The centurion left the office glowing. Other then desk jobs, this is the only mission he had been sent to lead yet.


Kreiger immediately went to barracks 3, his old salty friend vanguard bryon65 was waiting for him there.
bryon65 Gave him a look and asked "Well? Are we going or not, I have collected the charts and I'm ready for the trip."
Kreiger just nodded his head and said "Where is Auxilliary DullTitan? He was supposed to be here."
"He was here just a minute ago, he went over to barracks 7 to get his stuff ready.. I will tell him??"
"That I went to barracks 4 to get Guard wd73, we are going to need his eyes." Said Kreiger. 5 minutes later DullTitan arrived.
"Did Kreiger arrive yet sir?" "Yea he was here a few minutes ago, He went over to barracks four to get wd73.
He said to wait here" said bryon65. "By the way Kreiger. That new guard. Asked if he could come with us.
He is new and says that this is a small mission, and he has been dying to get out of base"
"You mean markblob123!? He has a happy trigger finger. We don't need him blowing away trees on this mission."
"Well he is going to ask the centurion. I hope he gets it, I just hope he doesn't pay for it"
said dulltitan. "Well we are going to know soon enough. There comes Kreiger and wd73 now dully"


"Well Guard markblob, I hope you know what your doing. Because once we leave this base there is no going back for over 24 hours."
"I know what I am doing sir. I will try to do the best I can do, if you require a task done. I will do it"
"I don`t know Kreiger. You think it might be a bad idea to bring a newbie out into the tundra?"
"Oh drop it bryon, He is a component soldier. He can handle himself, he might even be useful."
"Can we get on with this? We have to be out of this camp by 9:00 so we can march in the sun" said Auxiliary dulltitan.
And so this little party of 5 set out of basecamp at 8:37 AM on a basic recon mission,
and that's the last Crak saw of them for almost a week.


Chapter Two: Out in the cold.

Supplements=food

9:47 AM. *-12 :Celsius 2 miles out of base camp, our TGI squad is a fifth of the way to the area of the reports.
Kreiger is wearing a TGI deep freeze suit, carrying a Mod AR, and a pistol. And a backpack with a tent and supplements.
Vanguard bryon56 also has a suit, carrying a Sniper, and a backpack with tent and supplements, He also has a sword.
Auxiliary DullTitan wearing his suit too, and carrying a binoculars and a rifle, also a tent and supplement.
Guardman markblob123 is carrying a knife, 2 grenades. And a LMG. And a tent, (forgot his supplements)
Guardman wd73 is carrying a suit, a knife, the radio, a GPS. A hunting bow over his back and his tent/supplements.


The trail began to be less and less discernible on the ground, they were reaching the end of the base zone.
The road here was not cold and the sun was high in the sky, they had high hopes and warm toes. It looked good.
10:14 AM, they passed off what was left of the trail and went cross country, the sun was almost to its peak.
At 10:54 Markblob was scouting ahead and sighted a deer, thinking it was a tank in the woods he opened fire.
In 2 seconds Auxiliary was next to him under a log firing his AR, wd73 ducked and rolled under a big snow lump.
And Vanguard bryon was moving through the trees to the far right when he gave a shout to cease fire.
Kreiger who was rear guarding, moved up and said what had happened. When Vanguard bryon told him mark had opened fire,
he was shocked, then when bryon told him it was a deer, he was red. A lot of shouting and discredit followed.
However, after the action, wd73 found the deer (and its many holes from a lazar gun) And cut off big chucks,
he put them in a sack he was carrying. And some fresh snow. And they kept on moving until 3:47.


3:50. The group had arrived just one mile outside the reported area, the sun was coming down fast and they set up camp.
wd went off to get wood, kreiger helped markblob set up his tent, vanguard bryon was eating and widdleing a stick.
Auxiliary Dulltitan was on watch duty. kreiger said he was going to sleep some, and went into the small tent.
Vanguard bryon just sat around the fire on a bare patch of ground widdleing that stick. And markblob was looking,
for the food he left back in his barracks. T_T Meanwhile. wd, who had been gathering wood near a small river.
Was quite suddenly faced only 50 yards from a cave bear. At the time, he had his hunting bow and a knife. Big help...
He was dead meat if that bear charged him. He had the radio with him. He slowly turned its knob, calling dulltitan.
Dulltitans walki-talki went online, and he heard someone wispering about a bear. Then he realized it was wd. He called mark,
to take his post on watch, and he charged into the forest following wds tracks. When he arrived at the top of the small cliff,
over the river. He saw wd backing his way to the small cliff, the bear was minding little to him. wd began to climb.
Then suddenly realized.. He cannot climb this cliff, then his foot slipped and knocked out a rock that crashed down.
The bear suddenly became disgruntled by them, and charged up to wd, who had slipped off the rocks now,
it jumped on top of wd. who was defending against the blows with the radio, and stabbing at the bear with a knife,
A hopeless battle, but Auxiliary dulltitan, you see, he had a rifle. Witch made quick work of the bear in two shots.
They headed back to base.


When they arrived there was a bit of panic, then it settled down, dulltitan dressed wd73`s cuts, and markblob stood watch.
Bryon56 made a fire and kreiger was inspecting the radio. At one point throwing it down and muttering some obscene words.
Apparently that bear had completely destroyed the radio, and some of wds arm. When markblob came back talking about the sunset.
He was ignored. If they had listened, maybe they would have realized the sunset was so nice because the clouds were a storm.
A blizzard, a very much unexpected one. Around 10:00 the winds blew in and the snow flew. The centurion quickly realized it.
He got everyone up and the tents in, kicked snow over the place where they ate the freshly cooked deer, and left to the trees.
Heading into the blizzard was hard, in the woods they knew they had little chance if any of surviving. Then he had an idea.
He asked wd where the bears cave was, and wd led them off to it. Halfway there they lost sight of Wd.
They called but it was no use. They were lost, cold, and missing a member, and it was a very, long night.
They took shelter in a pack of trees, frostbitten and cold, but they would survive till mourning.


Heading into a blizzard, with 4 people behind you. Going somewhere you only vaguely remember. This is what wd was doing.
Howver, in doing it, he failed to remember the cliff. *SHWOOP* Down he went, slideing tumbleing and rolleing down the cliff.
he reached the bottom with a thud, he got up slowly and called around, but it was no use, the others just did not hear.
He looked back up the slope, and realized. The others might not even know where he went. They might be lost now,
His first impulse was to run to the wall. Then suddenly remember his attempt at climbing when the bear was there.
And realized that if he attempted this at night in a blizzard, It would surely be suisidel. So instead,
since there was no way to get in touch with them (the walki=talki that he had was useless in this storm) That,
he should reach the bear cave and survive till mournings wake. He found the bear cave, it was cold and damp inside.
But it was out of the storm, he managed to get a fire going since he was free of the storm and there was grass inside.
He took out his rations, and ate. He found a good spot, and went for a nights sleep, he must build his strength, he was alone.



Chapter Three: Russian HQ.



Dawn broke over the pine trees in the mourning. Kreiger got up to quickly and supprisingly painfull... And yet numb.
He looked around, most everything was coverd in snow, he was sitting in a small break between a pine trees lowest branchs.
he saw the sun was up, and byron was up, coming back with wood for a fire. And markblob, sleeping next to him.
The Auxiliary was on guard at this hour of the night. He walked over "Titan, When did the storm clear up?"
"Two hours ago, its bryons watch in 5 minutes. And it was markblobs before that. So it cleared up shortly after you left"
"Good, anything to report? Any sighn of wd? Have you scouted around the cliff... My word, you dont think he fell off it?"
"That might well be the case. But i went over there. I did not see him, it seems he left. But i checked the cave.
There was ashs on the floor, seems that he must have slept there last night. He must have left just after the storm ended."
"Why would he not have waited for us?" "Well sir. Since we were not in the cave. To him. We must either be far away or dead"
"I can see how that would be logicel. So i suppose we will mush on to our mission. We will meet him at base camp, or not"
"Then i will get markblob up for his watch while i help bryon with the food" said titan. "Good, we move out in one hour"


After haveing breakfest and getting everyone up. They went into the area of the reports. Then, oddly enough, bryon realized.
They had just crossed over a trail, he went and looked at it. Made by a herd of animals. And, a shepherd. So they followed it.
It was not long before they reached a large clearing, with lots of grass, and lots of... Goats, then they sighted a man.
150 yards off, tending to one part of the flock. The young man was starteled. And grabed a big double barrel shotgun off his back.
He pointed it at them, from such range a pointless threat. Bryon had his sniper cocked and was in prone in 2 seconds flat.
The captain rolled and kneeled with the AR, and Titan didnt move but stood up and aimed his rifle british red coat style.
And mark started loading that big LMG. Kreiger said to advance and he started low walking towards the farmer. Bryon went stealth.
Crawling around the side. And mark covered kreiger, the auxiliary just walked stright towards him gun still aimed and ready.
The farmer chucked the shells and put his hands up. They told him it was alright. He put his hands down and said (In internationle)
That he was bakuganjon. A russian stableman. He lived alone with his flock here in a old stablehouse. The gun he said.
Is for the wolfs and bears that would come around. He invited them in to sit down and warm up with some hot goats milk (ew)
They accepted of course. They were very cold, They took off the wet coats and set them to dry. It was clear the young man,
had a bit of a erking against men in military uniforms. When they asked why he said that he avoided becomeing a conscript.
Because of the underground resistence against the russian army. But he never got into the resistence and desided to live out here.
When they asked if he knew a base around here, he said that he had many times herded his flock past those big chainlink fences.
The base is almost as big as the TGI base. Its purpose is unknown. He said that he could take them there the next day,
they could come with his flock and leave them just before they got to the base so they would not be seen by the guards.
"Very good then, we will set out tommorow when we are ready, now that we know where it is. We can get the info, and go home"
"Yes. And sir, with any luck. Wd73 had the GPS, chances are he is already there. He would go faster then us, we used a compass"


12 hours earlier. Wd woke up feeling horrible, cold and damp, and cranky (Little did he know how much worse the rest were)
Seeing that the storm was breaking up, the others were either far from the cave or dead. And he saw some scavengers lurking,
near his place, No doubt looking to see if that big bear was really dead, this would not be a safe place, he must leave at once.
He gathered up his items. He saw that he had the GPS, he thought of going back, then realized that he would have to cross 20 miles,
of snow and ice. Not a good idea. He must reach the base, if the others are still alive he can go back with them. If not,
he can follow the road back to the nearest city, were he could arrange transport, if its to dangours, he can at least call it in.
That they ran into the storm and he is the only surviving memeber that he knows of, then they would send a bigger party,
find the others, and get him back to base. And compleate the mission, maybe a week late though, and attracting more attention,
then they would like. He set off in the direction of the reports. he climbed a hill, and saw that the best area to build a base in,
was more to the south east. So he set off. When he rounded a tree patch he saw the base. All to clearly, he was to close.
He could not have been more then 300 yards from the fence, he turned around and went back into the trees, to late.
The camaras had seen him and bliped movement, the operator checked it and saw him there. He was quickly ambushed and captured.


Colonel Darkstar of the russian army corps, was sitting at his desk when a major came in and told him there was a prisnor.
"The man was found outside the base, he was wearing a low rank TGI uniform, clearly part of a recon squad. No doubt they mus-"
"Major. We know perfectly well why they are here. They must have heard about the new movement here. If they do not return.
We will have time to move the missle. He must have gotten lost. Post a heavy stealth guard all around the base.
When we have them. The missel is being moved to a new base in 94 hours. And keep the prisnor in enterigation..."


It was a small trail they used following the path of the goats. It was nice to have warm clothes and dry shoes. The road was easy,
they made the trip in little time. Bakuganjon said "We are about half mile from the fence. You should go now, i will not come"
"good. Just keep going like you do each day. Dont act like anything new happens and dont look at the base more often."
"I bid you farewell my friend. I hope your mission is succesfull. I do not like this base." Said bakugan. "Ok lets go,
We have things to do men. And little time. We must see if wd is anywhere around here. See if you can pick up his walki-talki signal"
As they moved around the base they saw into it. It was very well made. But there was alot of interesting activity.
Then Titan said "Sir! We have am picking up a signal from his walki. I am trying to locate it...." "good keep on it,
we are coming up to a small road. Keep it quiet" They emerged from the bushes. Only to see a tank and 10 armed guards faceing them.
"Put your hands up please..." Exclaimed colonel darkstar. Off the path into the woods. The sheperd and his goats,
the tank had forced off the road while passing. Was watching this. Something had gone wrong. He must get help, and he knew how.



Chapter 4: A friend in need.


Markblob groaned as he was pushed roughly into the jail cell. There was only 5 cells in the compound. Their weapons were taken.
And the equipment. Their deep freeze suits and uniforms were taken for inspection. They were all frisked for objects.
All but there undergarments and coats were taken away. 2 of the cells had soldiers of Russia in them. Apparently disobeyed orders.
In cell 3 there was a quiet and very dangerous looking guy. Cell 5 was under maintenance. So they were all in the same cell.
Kreiger was in the corner, thinking about something. bryon was widdling that stick again with a button off his coat (extremely hard)
The compound was heavy blocks. 4 armed guards. All the doors slid upwards to open. Vacuum sealed steel rim and Plexiglas door.
Latest design. The Titan was nursing his bruises, he put up a bit of a fight. And markblob thought *How did they know?
How could they have seen us coming? Unless they have those goats bugged it seems impossible" He wondered for some time about it.
For a few hours they sat around. The centurion had been talking hush with bryon. And bryon seemed interested. Mark was not.
The Auxiliary fell asleep after that. And then kreiger came up to him and said "Mark. Did you get a good look around the compound?"
"Yea you were being hustled but I saw all around, why kreiger?" "Well mark. Did you see those big locked up containers?"
"Mmm Oh right those ones. I got a good look at them, I had a good view of them too. Lots of things on it I did not understand"
"Can you tell me and bryon every word you saw on those crates?" "Well yes.. I remember pretty well, is it important?"
"Only if they are what I told bryon and what he thinks they are" Then they went over to bryon and started talking about the crates.


It was 7:38 when they threw wd into the cell with them. He looked in pretty bad shape. He had been slapped around for quite some time.
They immediately helped him to the bed. If they were going to do this to all of them they better be prepared.
He said little and fell asleep. He was hurt. They had decided what the crates were. After discussing Russian codes, it seems.
Unless they were mistaken, the items being held in those crates were auto-locking missiles for Russian M.I.Gs Quite expensive.
And it makes sense they would store them out in a random base, where they would not be found or destroyed.
The TGI informers must have seen the movements, And called it in. They have to get back to base to report this soon.
Those missiles must be destroyed, such expensive toys would cause a lot of trouble for the empires enemys, including TGI.
It seemed a hopeless task, there only hope was that the Russians would think the danger is over, and keep them here to long.
And that the TGI would send out a bigger squad. Report that we have been taken captives, and mount a assault freeing them.
Not to mention destroying the missiles before they could be moved, they would only keep them here a week at maximum.
It was a slim hope. The TGI might take a whole `another week to mount a attack. It would be to late to get the missiles.
But they would be freed, with a demotion or demerit for failing of the mission, nothing was left to do but wait for their turn,
to be tortured by the Russian commanders. This you might say, is not the intended outcome of the mission.


At 7:24 Am. The alarm sounded in the base. Followed swifting by a breakneck explosion down the hall, 5 armed men stormed in,
immediately killing the armed guards. Broke the prison cell door open with a satchel charge. 2 men came in and told them to come.
It was a prison break, 2 men were firing out the door, and one man standing in the hallway was bakuganjon. He told them that these,
pointing at the men, were the underground resistance, he had convinced them to break you out for a small ammunitions supply.
Agreeing, they realized that wd73 would not be able to come with them, he was to weak, and he refused to wake up. They moved.
Running out of the corridor, one of the men had been shot, not dead. They ran out the hole in the wall, firing at the time.
Running through corridors they saw men assembleing ahead of them. at the next window. They blew it up. But it was a small window.
There was not enough time. The Auxiliary gave the centurion a nod. And the remaining man that had guarded the corridor saluted.
The others jumped out the window. The aux and the other man charged down the corridor in both directions firing.
Both were disabled with a bullet to the legs and were dragged away. Meanwhile. With 2 remaining men and bakugan,
kreiger bryon and markblob hauled it fast out of the enemy base and under the fence. And kept going down the road.
It was still dark and the enemy lost sight of them. Then the Russians turned around and headed to base. They were coming back.
In jeeps. 5 jeeps.


Darkstar jumped into the lead jeep next to the driver. And stuck his head and shoulders out of the gunners turret.
The four other jeeps behind him. They started fast down the road following the tracks. Going to smaller and smaller roads.
The forest grew thicker around them. They were getting closer, The men in the jeeps were loaded. Then they entered a hilly area.
Twisting small roads around them. They almost lost them, They down into steep valley. Getting almost onto the TGIs heels.
They entered a canyon carved by a large glacier near a mountainous area. The going was slow for them enemy. And made little difference,
to the pursuers. Twice they sighted them. And fired. Then they lost them. "You think we lost them sir?" Whispered markblob.
"Shush, I don't know, better be safe then sorry C'mon lets get going in this direction" They headed into the small pass off the road.
They didn't go far before the generals jeeps headlights filled the pass. The gunfire was short and loud. One of the men was killed.
Instantly by the general. Kreiger jumped behind a patch of trees with bakuganjon. The other underground guy was pushed into a crevice.
By bryon. Who jumped after him. They kept going under the cover of the rocks, But kreiger and baku was pinned down.
Markblob, who was higher up the side of the pass, but closer, Saw that kreiger wanted to do a last stand with baku.
Mark picked up his gun walked out from the side of the boulder Grabbed the dead underground guys gun and opened fire,
The generals jeeps tires exploded 70 yards away from markblob, the general stuck his head out and shot his pistol 4 times,
getting markblob once in the leg. Mark screamed and fell down in an odd swingy way. Darkstar told the driver to go forward.
The driver did not move or answer. He was bleeding form one of markblobs bullets. And was in shock from the pain and from...
Darkstar saw the grenade in the jeep, Just a grenade. The pin though, was still in markblobs hand.
The burning wreckage from the jeep made it so the Russians had to leave the jeeps and go up the side of the cliff. Where,
they found another flying grenade. So they had to go up the side and around. By the time they got there five minutes later.
The TGI soldiers. Were gone.



Chapter 5: Reckoning.



The moving across the 5 miles between the mountain pass and the stablehouse was agonizing. Not only was the sun dim,
but it was also that chilly you get only in a alpine mourning. A bittersweet cold to numb your very bones,
Markblobs leg was still bleeding some. They were carrying him in a bearskin with a rope tied at each end,
the skin was thick enough so they could just drag him at some parts. Bakuganjon was in the lead. Bryon and kreiger carried.
And the underground guy broke off and removed the others trail. So to confuse them and give them more targets.
It seemed to have worked, well enough to make by the time they found the real trail it was covered in snow.
By 10:00 they were almost at the stables, they had to make contact at once, bakuganjon said "that the underground,
has been talking about this attack all night. And TGI is probably listening and sending a rescue party. When they get here,
We can tell them about the missiles you told me about, and we can go "rescue" Those missiles from the Russian army"
Just then, they reached a clear in the trees, and they saw the farm. When they arrived. They put marks leg in a cast.
And had some warm goats milk and dried clothes and yet.. For a moment, that little cell in the base was warmer and softer.
The prison made warm, is almost so effective. And that much more effective in the cold.


11:28, they hear a helicopter. kreiger gets up, takes a gun from his pouch. Walks out side and fires it up in the air.
A brilliant flare fly's up to the level of the helicopter and over it, the helicopter pilot sees his uniform and fly's in.
Landing just on the farm grass. 4 TGI guards step out. Followed by 2 vanguards and a dragoon. kreiger gave him the info.
The dragoon looked alarmed, when he asked why. It was because a odd amount of M.I.Gs were being bought by a Russian airfield.
But how could they have enough ammunition to arm those things. Now they have the planes and the missiles. So, kreiger and bryon.
Got into the helicopter with the rest. And told bakuganjon to take the medical supplies we gave him and take good care of mark.
Bakugan said goodbye and the helicopter flew off towards the base.


It was a cramped flight, they were issued uniforms.(the uniform is also body armor)
And guns, and walki talkis, The helicopter flew high, and then went down fast.
Landing on the roof of one of the buildings. A difficult landing, but not the best one he had seen. The dragoon jumped out first.
Throwing a satchel into the corner of the rooftop. Immediately blowing it,There was a decent sized hole now,
the gaurds poured out and jumped in, the vanguards covered the hole from the roof by firing down,
And the dragoon went down next and the other two followed. THe vanguards stayed at the chopper.
They ran in the corridors, with the dragoon in lead. They found the prison. Killed the guards. Took the men they came to take.
2 underground men. And they found wd73, he was in better shape. Taking care of auxiliary dulltitan. He was not in good shape.
Looked like several shots to the legs. It was, two guards picked him up and over their shoulders. Bryon went with them.
wd73 ran with kreiger. They covered each other back to the helicopter. The fighting was intense. One vanguard was down.
The dragoon and the guard ran undercover on the boxes. The guards looked it over. Snapped it open. And there was a lot of missiles in it.
Then they opened another. Just a decoy. The rest were all decoys, there was only this one huge crate. (even that was quite enough)
So they placed a beacon on it. And ran back. One guard was hit and they had to haul him. The fighting on the roof was hard.
bryon had been shot several times, and kreiger once. The other vanguard was pinned down. The dragoon carried the hit guard.
And then covered with the other one. They all got into the chopper, lowered the side shields. Flew over to the crate.
Lowered 4 magnetic grapples. And flew away with the crate.


When they returned to the farm. There was not enough room for all of them. When the shields opened. They practical exploded out,
of the helicopter, The wounded vanguard had died. The guard was not hit bad. But hit in a organ and needed surgery soon.
bryone had minor wounds. And left with the helicopter. They left Dulltitan and wd in the stablehouse with bakugan.
Kreiger reported back to base, in the helicopter, and would send a truck back for them after he returned.
While they waited and healed, they became quite close friends. Mark and baku would sit around for hours.
wd was very silent all the time, and dulltitan could not even speak. So it was usually quiet. It continued like that until,
the truck arrived. They loaded dulltitan in a cot, and wd simply climbed in and sat down, markblob said goodbye,
and left with the truck hanging his legs out the back, And the truck drove back to base.
When they arrived, dulltitan was given a merit of honor for his work, a lifelong career medal.
Markblob was promoted to Auxiliary for behavior above the call of a guard. wd was not promoted. But actually retired to a job,
he was not a career man, and took the salary and put it into a desk job of communications for TGI, simple, And good pay.
Bryon was promoted to harbinger, for exemplary service in the mission, kreiger got to put a (Successful) mark on his first mission,
Witch is the mark of a good officer. And he kept his rank as well. And lastly, bakuganjon became leader of the resistance,
2 years after the mission. And went on to lead a big portion of the military to break ranks and join TGI.


"Well centurion. How was your first mission?" asked craktheraven, "Well sir, it did not go as planned, but, I am pleased to say,
it was not a disaster" "Quite on the contrary centurion, it was a complete success, I could not have asked for a better outcome"
"The ends do not justify the means sir" "You speak truth, if you had completed this in a normal fashion, you would be getting,
a lot more requests to do missions. But no. I think you are worthy of the rank you have, and that is why i have no demoted you"
"thank you sir, I will be off then sir..." He got up, and went to the door. "Sir, What was your first mission like?"
"... Classified. Look it up when you get higher up..." Centurion kreiger left the room, chuckling all the way,
Perhaps craktheraven had hoped he had forgotten basic TGI school. CraktheRavens first mission was required reading.



MUhahahaaha. Thats the end folks. Post your comments belloooww.
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DarkStar505 is not online. DarkStar505
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01 Aug 2012 12:01 PM
Awesome :D
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Strieken is not online. Strieken
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01 Aug 2012 02:07 PM
Several grammar mistakes.

Try to watch out for that next time.
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01 Aug 2012 02:32 PM
What Striek said but good story for your first one, I think.
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01 Aug 2012 02:52 PM
Epic
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01 Aug 2012 03:12 PM
Coolstorybro
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01 Aug 2012 04:03 PM
I know striek. I used the grammar checker. But i had to skip some of the words because i spelled them so wrong they didnt have the correct word in the list. And since i dont know the correct spelling. The ammount of work to root out all those minor grammar mistakes would outweigh the benifits.
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MasterKrux is not online. MasterKrux
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04 Aug 2012 05:33 PM
Lol grammar man. So many details mah head exploded, but good story :3
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04 Aug 2012 05:36 PM
That is long. Good story, but, check your spelling and grammar.

Also, fix your font. I need to know if you paragraph your dialogue or not. Because if you don't make a paragraph everytime someone speaks, the story goes badly.

Keep up the good work.
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