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| 28 Jul 2012 08:53 PM |
We slowly began to decrease due to the war. Our numbers decreased while theirs increased. They came from a different planet. The chance of winning was hopeless. When only hundreds remained, they suddenly died off, leaving our world in ruin. The air become polluted and massive dust clouds surrounded the atmosphere. The tallest skyscrapers collapsed, major cities being claimed by nature. The sky no longer a bright baby blue, is now a crimson red. The survivors struggling to survive in this ruined planet. It seems that there is no hope left. That the past cannot be changed. That we will soon die off, and another species will take our place.
RULES 1. No G-Modding. 2. What I say is final 3. You may have upto 3 playable characters 4. Listen to me. 5. No trolls 6. Have fun.
This RP is a survival styled one.
CS: Name: A.ge: Gen.der: Appearence: Skills: Items: Bio: Other: |
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zommerman
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| 28 Jul 2012 11:03 PM |
CS: Name:Dante A.ge:21 Gen.der:Male Appearence:Dirty blonde, Blue eyes, sports jersey, blue jeans Skills:studied science as a kid, very good with physics and mechanics. Items:Wrench, PB&J sandwich(he got hungry, ok?) Bio:Was a scientist for 2 years, graduated high school early. Other: Fav TV show was Man VS Wild, so he understands how to survive. |
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teaser303
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| 28 Jul 2012 11:09 PM |
RP rating:
Depth: 2/5 (very short) Plot: 3/5 (normal) CS: 5/5 (great CS) Originality: 1/5 (just another survival thread) Detail: 4/5 (pretty good detail) Total: 15/25 |
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zommerman
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| 28 Jul 2012 11:10 PM |
(thats better than mine, I got a 12/25..... I fail) |
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podraptor
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| 28 Jul 2012 11:38 PM |
@teaser
I'll put this bluntly:
please stop. Your ignorant, hypocritical mind has no idea of how to formulate a role-play-- or not one that I've seen, pardon me--yet you go around judging other people. Just don't do that, please. |
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zommerman
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| 28 Jul 2012 11:39 PM |
pod! he's better than Bebi. he doesn't yell. he just wants to share his opinion without yelling at us. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 05:56 AM |
| WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT ME YOU TARD?1?!!?!?!?!? |
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| 29 Jul 2012 07:41 AM |
| Look, it's Bebi again! Why does everything l go on have Bebi.... |
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| 29 Jul 2012 07:43 AM |
| I don't stalk you. I just go on crap and shout at it. THIS ES NOT GOOD I GIVE IT A SOLID GO BATHE IN LYE OUT OF 10. |
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zommerman
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| 29 Jul 2012 09:58 AM |
| Bebi, I wasn't trying to insult you. You have to admitt, you do yell at people with bad roleplays. And for what I know, this seems like a roleplay worth keeping. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:00 AM |
| oh, c,mon Bebi! why can't you spare the OK roleplays? |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:02 AM |
| You make a good rp or you make a bad rp, their is no OK anymore. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:07 AM |
| I'VE SEEN PLENTY OF OK ROLEPLAYS DIE WHEN NOBODY JOINS THEM. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:07 AM |
| giraff! Don't repay evil with evil. Bebi, please don't make this die. I was planning on entering it. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:09 AM |
i am calmly telling him to shut up, which is not evil
you can tell by lack of caps and exclamation points
also the sentence ‘shut up bebi’ is funny to me
probably because it reminds me of ‘shut up baby' |
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zommerman
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:11 AM |
-_-
The point is do not get revenge. Thats like revenge because you are doing it to get him mad after he got you mad.
Thats revenge. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:11 AM |
| This is one of the few times I've seen Bebi misspell several things. |
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zommerman
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:13 AM |
I think Bebi's slipping...... I think he lost his "Critisizing" potential! |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:13 AM |
| I don't have perfect grammar, but it's damn near close. |
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| 29 Jul 2012 10:16 AM |
| I often have that problem, but then again, I don't have mastery of the English language. |
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