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| 14 Jul 2012 09:05 PM |
Okay so the story is: You were synthesized in a lab. You are called a "test tube" baby. The government gives all babies of your kind to barren mothers with no hope of having children, but as always, there is a price. At the age of 16 you are torn from your family to work in on of their labs. The major problem... you aren't a scientist. You are a test subject. Each of you has been injected with some sort of chemical. Each of you has had unexpected results.
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| 14 Jul 2012 09:11 PM |
| This could use alot of improvement, the idea itself is pretty bland. |
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| 14 Jul 2012 09:12 PM |
yeah, and rules time to make my move Name:kewl dued Bio:awm awesum Power/mutation:awesumnis Appearance:awesum How do you act:awesum Skill:awesum powas
~The Pwner has spoken!~ |
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| 14 Jul 2012 09:15 PM |
I'll add my two cents:
The idea itself isn't used up completely, but is almost used up now.
The story needs a little more info.
There is a CS, but it needs to be like most others:
Name: A.ge: Personality: Appearance: Bio: Power:
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| 17 Jul 2012 03:12 PM |
| duly noted thank you for the critisism next one I make'll be better |
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| 17 Jul 2012 03:29 PM |
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Name: Maureen F. Bio: Very strubborn and longs to be home with her parents Power/mutation: Invisibliity Appearance: Short Dark brown hair, dark blue eyes, tan skin. How do you act: Feirce, Sharp Tongued Skill: Strength
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| 22 Jul 2012 10:51 PM |
Name: Jenna Millewski Bio: I always said that there was a price for everything... I just never knew how right I was. The only thing I ever let myself get attached to was my cat lint He was allowed to come so that I wouldn't feel too uncomfortable. They said that I was an extremely hard nut to crack with the chemicals... yeah I feel real special. But such is life. Power/mutation: regeneration Appearance: I am tall with short black hair and intelligent grey eyes. I'm extremely pale and have a cunning smile How do you act:shy and untrusting but around friends funny and sweet Skill: Medical practices |
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| 22 Jul 2012 10:53 PM |
| Wolf, could you redo the plot and repost, I would join then, pretty please? It just needs mroe plot, like Where do we start? What is our clarified goal? |
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| 22 Jul 2012 10:53 PM |
| *More*, Sorry I don't have spellcheck anymore...Crappy excuse I know. |
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| 24 Jul 2012 03:39 AM |
| Could you put the link in this one? |
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