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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 57
14 Jul 2012 09:05 PM
Okay so the story is: You were synthesized in a lab. You are called a "test tube" baby. The government gives all babies of your kind to barren mothers with no hope of having children, but as always, there is a price. At the age of 16 you are torn from your family to work in on of their labs. The major problem... you aren't a scientist. You are a test subject. Each of you has been injected with some sort of chemical. Each of you has had unexpected results.

CS

Name:
Bio:
Power/mutation:
Appearance:
How do you act:
Skill:
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
Joined: 13 Jul 2009
Total Posts: 28080
14 Jul 2012 09:11 PM
This could use alot of improvement, the idea itself is pretty bland.
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tehpwner7067 is not online. tehpwner7067
Joined: 16 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 13890
14 Jul 2012 09:12 PM
yeah, and rules
time to make my move
Name:kewl dued
Bio:awm awesum
Power/mutation:awesumnis
Appearance:awesum
How do you act:awesum
Skill:awesum powas

~The Pwner has spoken!~
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drymoneyman35 is not online. drymoneyman35
Joined: 14 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 218
14 Jul 2012 09:15 PM
I'll add my two cents:

The idea itself isn't used up completely, but is almost used up now.

The story needs a little more info.

There is a CS, but it needs to be like most others:

Name:
A.ge:
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:
Power:

And then whatever else.
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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 57
17 Jul 2012 03:12 PM
duly noted thank you for the critisism next one I make'll be better
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kaywell105 is not online. kaywell105
Joined: 08 Mar 2012
Total Posts: 432
17 Jul 2012 03:29 PM
CS

Name: Maureen F.
Bio: Very strubborn and longs to be home with her parents
Power/mutation: Invisibliity
Appearance: Short Dark brown hair, dark blue eyes, tan skin.
How do you act: Feirce, Sharp Tongued
Skill: Strength
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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 57
22 Jul 2012 10:30 PM
accepted
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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 57
22 Jul 2012 10:51 PM
Name: Jenna Millewski
Bio: I always said that there was a price for everything... I just never knew how right I was. The only thing I ever let myself get attached to was my cat lint
He was allowed to come so that I wouldn't feel too uncomfortable. They said that I was an extremely hard nut to crack with the chemicals... yeah I feel real special. But such is life.
Power/mutation: regeneration
Appearance: I am tall with short black hair and intelligent grey eyes. I'm extremely pale and have a cunning smile
How do you act:shy and untrusting but around friends funny and sweet
Skill: Medical practices
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CreativeMystery is not online. CreativeMystery
Joined: 29 May 2012
Total Posts: 18749
22 Jul 2012 10:53 PM
Wolf, could you redo the plot and repost, I would join then, pretty please? It just needs mroe plot, like Where do we start? What is our clarified goal?
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CreativeMystery is not online. CreativeMystery
Joined: 29 May 2012
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22 Jul 2012 10:53 PM
*More*, Sorry I don't have spellcheck anymore...Crappy excuse I know.
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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
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24 Jul 2012 12:03 AM
making new one... better
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kaywell105 is not online. kaywell105
Joined: 08 Mar 2012
Total Posts: 432
24 Jul 2012 03:39 AM
Could you put the link in this one?
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Wolfofwind is not online. Wolfofwind
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
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29 Jul 2012 03:24 PM
eh sure
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