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| 22 Jul 2012 06:06 PM |
(Keeping it all on one forum, if you're not in this story when you signed up, you're in the next)
Chapter 1: The kidnapping.
Victoria was quietly snoozing until her alarm clock, abruptly, ringed. She punched it off her bed side table and got up to get ready for school. Victoria had a quick shower and washed her hair, she then put on her casual clothes. Her school had no uniform, but it was a big high school with lot's of bullies. Victoria did have a best friend of course, Iegato. Victoria continued getting ready for school. She went downstairs in a rush but stopped when her dad yelled, "Stop running down the stairs! One day you'll break your pretty leg!" Victoria replied with a mumble, "Yes dad.." Victoria walked to the kitchen where her mum was making pancakes. Victoria was very fond of her mother, her mother loved her very much and acted like she was a princess. Victoria ate her pancakes quickly and yelled to her dad, "Bye dad!"
Her dad say good-bye back and gave her mum a quick hug and a kiss on the cheek. Her mum said to her, "Be a good girl." Victoria walked outside with her backpack on, her backpack didn't contain much. Only a few books for school and a pencil case. Victoria went pass Iegato's house and ringed the doorbell, the door opened at once and there was Iegato himself coming out to walk with Victoria. They walked and talked, as usual. But something unusual happened, a black van came down the streets. They were a bit scared but acting intense. Suddenly, out of nowhere the van opened when two men came out and grabbed Victoria and Iegato and dragged them into the van. Victoria and Iegato were already tied up by 2 minutes, Victoria yelled, "WHO ARE YOU?" The person replied with a smirk and said, "Koalaofwonder" |
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| 22 Jul 2012 06:07 PM |
| The next chapter will be made soon. |
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| 22 Jul 2012 06:52 PM |
| When I mean soon, I mean later :/ |
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agotart7
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| 22 Jul 2012 06:54 PM |
| It's daytime for me though >:D |
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agotart7
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| 22 Jul 2012 06:56 PM |
Cool story bro.
Tell it again. |
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| 22 Jul 2012 07:05 PM |
Nou cheese.
You insulted lobsters. |
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| 22 Jul 2012 08:12 PM |
Chapter 2: Confusion growing
Victoria was a shocked as a pineapple, koalaofwonder was a leader of a terrorist group called Shadow Squad. Victoria didn't even notice there was people in the van besides her and Iegato. She looked at them carefully, she saw another two boys and a girl. She reconsigned them easily, they were from her school too. The two boys were Gargix and coolboy, and the girl was midnightsparkle, one of the most popular girls in the school. Victoria nodded at them as a hello and they nodded back quickly. Victoria finally spoke up to koalaofwonder, "Why do you want us?! Where are you taking us?!" The leader replied quickly,"You'll see soon, ah, were almost here." Victoria didn't even know where she was, only that they were driving for 6 hours now.
Victoria looked out the window and saw sand, lot's and lot's of sand, it was also extremely bright outside. They were in the desert arriving at a small army base. Victoria gulped, so did everyone else besides the kidnappers. Suddenly, they arrived and the back of the van opened, men in uniform were taking them out and dragging them to a building and then to a room. They were told to sit down so they did as they were told, koalaofwonder came up and stood on the table. He smiled and said, "Welcome to training camp, recruits!" Victoria was even more shocked as before! Coolboy and Gargix said, "We didn't sign up, why would we sign up with you! Also, i'm not going to be in a terrorist group!" Koalaofwonder signed and replied, "Were not a terrorist group, were trying to defeat USA to save our country" |
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Outlaw001
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| 22 Jul 2012 10:46 PM |
To cliche for me. Not trying to offend you but read my stories! "When the drop falls..." and "Hope. Its like gravity..." |
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| 22 Jul 2012 10:48 PM |
I can be in it?
~The Official Drone of TER~ |
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| 22 Jul 2012 11:17 PM |
| You guys are baddies, but outlaw is a assasain :3 |
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| 22 Jul 2012 11:18 PM |
| YYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS |
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