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ShadowSTR is not online. ShadowSTR
Joined: 08 Jul 2010
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21 Jul 2012 11:57 PM
It was a very cold winter night in the mountains. A new base was being designed by Death2Day, there was a whole squadron to protect her in case of attack, some of the best was there from Eclipse Corp. The icy fortress also held many tech plans and prototypes. Then the ground shakes, and shakes for about five minutes then comes to a stop. Death: What was that? Me: The radar picks up a semi large drop ship with approximation of 100 men on it. Death: Raveparty, call in backup EnergeyFlare: Ma'am it looks like JC. Me: What is that on the radar....INCOMING MISSILES!
I wake up in a hospital beside Death, my head is throbbing,my vision is blurry, and my chest is blood red,. Me: Death, is that you? Death: Yea Me: What is happening? Death: JC attacked, the bombed the base, it collapsed. We lost two agents. Me: How did we survive? Death: Before it collapsed I ran for the plans, you tackled me and we went sliding under the rock where the food cart comes in. Me: Is the JC still there? Death: Yes, a battle is going on now. Me: WE gotta get out there! I roll out of bed, I feel a sharp pain and black out
Pragmatic: Shadow! Shadow! Shadow wake up! I start regaining vision slowly, my chest has a cord sticking out that prag jerked out of me. Me: Uhhhhh Prag: Come on man you can make it. Me: What is going on? Prag: JC are about to breach the shields, they are going for the plans. I am getting you out of here before things get to messy. Me: Prag let me fight. Prag: You cant even walk! Listen, Tober is bringing more men, everything will be fine. Then I black out
When I wake up I feel great, I want to run forever, kill some JC, anything. Nurse: Good morning Agent Shadow, are you feeling ok? Me: Im feeling great, where am I? Nurse: Your in the underground hospital, Fort Mammoth. Me: So we was not over run? Nurse: Haha, no Tober brought some strong men. Me: When can I get out of here? Nurse: I suppose now Me: Great! I walk up the stairs to the elevator that goes up to the trap door. After hearing about a patrol about to come in I decide to climb the mountain a bit and see if I can spot them. I am about to walk out the door when I hear gun fire. The door slams open, death limps in a very dizzy like fashion holding gun wounds, and two dog tags. There is blood gushing every where. Death: Shadow, I am glad it is you. Me: What happened!? Death: Its... Death blacks out


Should I write more?
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Outlaw001 is not online. Outlaw001
Joined: 22 Jan 2011
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22 Jul 2012 12:08 AM
More, please.

But put me in it? :D
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ShadowSTR is not online. ShadowSTR
Joined: 08 Jul 2010
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22 Jul 2012 12:20 AM
I need more people that like it before I write another one.
How good was it?
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TheEqualist is not online. TheEqualist
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22 Jul 2012 12:22 AM
I like it:D
next one put me in>:3
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koopatroopa007 is not online. koopatroopa007
Joined: 30 Apr 2010
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22 Jul 2012 12:23 AM
My turn
Once upon a time
you died
and I lived happily ever after
the end C:
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CheeseyMacral is not online. CheeseyMacral
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22 Jul 2012 12:24 AM
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ShadowSTR is not online. ShadowSTR
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22 Jul 2012 12:26 AM
There was paragraphs.
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CheeseyMacral is not online. CheeseyMacral
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22 Jul 2012 12:28 AM
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Outlaw001 is not online. Outlaw001
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22 Jul 2012 12:28 AM
8/10

Tip: When one person speaks, it starts a new paragragh.
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DrGrizz is not online. DrGrizz
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22 Jul 2012 12:35 AM
can i be in ur story
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Xozes is not online. Xozes
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22 Jul 2012 12:35 AM
Shadow, but me in it :D, I am a former HR I can make a come back >:o
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Anthony023 is not online. Anthony023
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22 Jul 2012 12:36 AM
Shadow, amazing story, continue this great job. We surely want more.


|~|Anthony023|~|(Xanov - Ex-Advanced)|~
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Tasha5266 is not online. Tasha5266
Joined: 23 Jun 2012
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22 Jul 2012 12:48 AM
all i have to say to dis is hail cobras1111
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tayteetot is not online. tayteetot
Joined: 14 Dec 2007
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22 Jul 2012 01:28 AM
I liked it very much, This is much better then the stories I have written.Nice job
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nitroyoshi9 is not online. nitroyoshi9
Joined: 17 Jun 2011
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22 Jul 2012 01:31 AM
cool story bro
tell it again
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SupremeWarrior1878 is not online. SupremeWarrior1878
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22 Jul 2012 01:34 AM
Nice story.

PUT ME IN IT. C:
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