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Re: "Feedback" By Yung Stunner

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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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20 Jul 2012 03:57 AM
(Verse 1)
- Save the feedback because I don't really need it from anyone
You think that you can step to me, look at your rhymes, man your a bum
Lame rappers are intreaging when they think they can criticize me
But the only thing you need to work on, is the words that come out of your teeth
Man I am tired of these whack rappers stepping up to the plate
When they can't even finish their vegetables, bro you made a mistake
So next time you talk mess that you think that is true
Read your own raps and think for a second "Man I am a fool"
Your breath's not worth sharing, causing all that Global Warming
This little rap right here, yah this is just a warning
Any time I am available for any rap battle
Because I'll strike you where it hurts just like a snake with a rattle

(Verse 2)
- The words that come out your mouth is very lame and disrespectful
Thinking that your rhymes are tight well I think there makes you a fool
I'm tired of your feedback so go cry to you're mommy
But I think she's giving daddy some brain, yah no zombie
Think about it for a second, maybe you'll learn some from this rap
So don't stay at the computer, waisting your time writing all of this crap
Just because you can rhyme doesn't mean that your feedback works
Because if you ask me about your skills. I think that they are the worst.
So please stop all this madness and think about what your doing
Because when your the one that's on that stage, all your fans will be the ones that are booing.


Thank you guys.
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Jul 2012 10:32 AM
"- Save the feedback because I don't really need it from anyone"
and i'm out of here.
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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20 Jul 2012 09:08 PM
Thanks for your help :)
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devildog199 is not online. devildog199
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20 Jul 2012 09:25 PM
It sucks.
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Jul 2012 09:27 PM
@devil he's tired of your feedback go cry to your mommy. OHH SNAP DOPE LYRICS
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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21 Jul 2012 03:30 AM
So go cry to your mommy but shes giving daddy head. Think about it, oh wait I forgot you guys are like ten so you don't know what giving brain is xD
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 04:39 AM
So go cry to your mommy but shes giving daddy head. Think about it, oh wait I forgot you guys are like ten so you don't know what giving brain is xD
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I feel a lot more alienated on here after that. I would say that he's trolling, but he has BC. I don't know where this is coming from.

Yung Stunner? What kind of name is that?
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 04:40 AM
IWF Impact Wrestling Foundation? Really? Just throw in institutionalized racism and compulsive overeating and one has a Yankee stereotype.
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mitch126790 is not online. mitch126790
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21 Jul 2012 06:33 AM
... I feel like whoever Wrestles on Roblox and pretends to be a rapper when you cant hear their voice needs to get out more...
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theflame1234 is not online. theflame1234
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21 Jul 2012 08:46 AM
e _ e Verse 2 was very hypocritical considering you described yourself and tried to call other rappers out.
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 09:26 AM
Why recycle the coital verse for an insult? And why do you write you lyrics in blank verse?
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 09:27 AM
I swear, such long lines, huge stanzas. How fast is one supposed to rap this?
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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21 Jul 2012 09:40 AM
LOOK OUT GUYS HE'S GONNA CALL US KIDS
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 09:48 AM
- The words that come out your mouth is very lame and disrespectful
______
Bad grammar can be used advantageously as a literary technique. Look at Great Expectations or Shakespeare.
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theflame1234 is not online. theflame1234
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21 Jul 2012 10:07 AM
@Jason. Clever. XD
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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21 Jul 2012 04:52 PM
Altar said it was pretty good, so you guys can keep calling me lame, I made this song in two minutes and I don't really care what you think about it, so go ahead xD and I wrestle because it's fun (altar wrestles as well, just to let you know, he wrestled with me and my FEDERATION, not Foundation noob) So go ahead because this is why I made the song anyways :) thanks no lifes who sit at the computer criticising people for their raps :P
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EmancipationSuite is not online. EmancipationSuite
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21 Jul 2012 04:54 PM
"Altar said it was pretty good"

so

"thanks no lifes who sit at the computer criticising people for their raps :P"

but constructive criticism is great

I'd give you some but since you stated you put little effort into it I won't bother

~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~
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AnotherNamelessGuy is not online. AnotherNamelessGuy
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21 Jul 2012 04:59 PM
Great rap, I thought it was an amazing rap, for all of you haters, what kind of rap do you like? "Walking on the moon while beating you with a spoon?" thats what everyone likes, thats famous, what rap good rap have you made?
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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21 Jul 2012 05:01 PM
2 things

1) It did suck
2) I followed you to a game and played the game, i am in no way a wrestler on Roblox nor will i ever be.
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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21 Jul 2012 05:02 PM
Why did you say it was alright in the game then? And you said "this looks pretty fun, can I play?"
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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21 Jul 2012 05:04 PM
I hate the show WWE, but I like to play it on Roblox, is that so wrong? How is that constructive criticism, making fun of someone who likes to wrestle on ROBLOX(A game where you can play stuff-even wrestling)
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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21 Jul 2012 05:08 PM
I said it was alright in the game cause you were really mad at me yesterday when i told you the other rap you made sucked.
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patriotsfan95 is not online. patriotsfan95
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21 Jul 2012 05:09 PM
Then don't lie to me bro...I wasn't even mad, now I'm mad because your being Two-Faced
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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21 Jul 2012 05:19 PM
Well sorry for saying what you want everyone to say to you
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johnb is not online. johnb
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21 Jul 2012 07:41 PM
Oh, did I write "Foundation?" That was my employment of the aforesaid literary technique. I appeared quite common.
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