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| 20 Jul 2012 03:57 AM |
(Verse 1) - Save the feedback because I don't really need it from anyone You think that you can step to me, look at your rhymes, man your a bum Lame rappers are intreaging when they think they can criticize me But the only thing you need to work on, is the words that come out of your teeth Man I am tired of these whack rappers stepping up to the plate When they can't even finish their vegetables, bro you made a mistake So next time you talk mess that you think that is true Read your own raps and think for a second "Man I am a fool" Your breath's not worth sharing, causing all that Global Warming This little rap right here, yah this is just a warning Any time I am available for any rap battle Because I'll strike you where it hurts just like a snake with a rattle (Verse 2) - The words that come out your mouth is very lame and disrespectful Thinking that your rhymes are tight well I think there makes you a fool I'm tired of your feedback so go cry to you're mommy But I think she's giving daddy some brain, yah no zombie Think about it for a second, maybe you'll learn some from this rap So don't stay at the computer, waisting your time writing all of this crap Just because you can rhyme doesn't mean that your feedback works Because if you ask me about your skills. I think that they are the worst. So please stop all this madness and think about what your doing Because when your the one that's on that stage, all your fans will be the ones that are booing.
Thank you guys. |
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jason8630
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| 20 Jul 2012 10:32 AM |
"- Save the feedback because I don't really need it from anyone" and i'm out of here. |
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jason8630
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| 20 Jul 2012 09:27 PM |
| @devil he's tired of your feedback go cry to your mommy. OHH SNAP DOPE LYRICS |
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| 21 Jul 2012 03:30 AM |
| So go cry to your mommy but shes giving daddy head. Think about it, oh wait I forgot you guys are like ten so you don't know what giving brain is xD |
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johnb
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| 21 Jul 2012 04:39 AM |
So go cry to your mommy but shes giving daddy head. Think about it, oh wait I forgot you guys are like ten so you don't know what giving brain is xD ________ I feel a lot more alienated on here after that. I would say that he's trolling, but he has BC. I don't know where this is coming from.
Yung Stunner? What kind of name is that? |
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johnb
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| 21 Jul 2012 04:40 AM |
| IWF Impact Wrestling Foundation? Really? Just throw in institutionalized racism and compulsive overeating and one has a Yankee stereotype. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 06:33 AM |
| ... I feel like whoever Wrestles on Roblox and pretends to be a rapper when you cant hear their voice needs to get out more... |
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| 21 Jul 2012 08:46 AM |
| e _ e Verse 2 was very hypocritical considering you described yourself and tried to call other rappers out. |
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johnb
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:26 AM |
| Why recycle the coital verse for an insult? And why do you write you lyrics in blank verse? |
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johnb
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:27 AM |
| I swear, such long lines, huge stanzas. How fast is one supposed to rap this? |
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jason8630
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:40 AM |
| LOOK OUT GUYS HE'S GONNA CALL US KIDS |
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| 21 Jul 2012 09:48 AM |
- The words that come out your mouth is very lame and disrespectful ______ Bad grammar can be used advantageously as a literary technique. Look at Great Expectations or Shakespeare. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 04:52 PM |
| Altar said it was pretty good, so you guys can keep calling me lame, I made this song in two minutes and I don't really care what you think about it, so go ahead xD and I wrestle because it's fun (altar wrestles as well, just to let you know, he wrestled with me and my FEDERATION, not Foundation noob) So go ahead because this is why I made the song anyways :) thanks no lifes who sit at the computer criticising people for their raps :P |
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| 21 Jul 2012 04:54 PM |
"Altar said it was pretty good"
so
"thanks no lifes who sit at the computer criticising people for their raps :P"
but constructive criticism is great
I'd give you some but since you stated you put little effort into it I won't bother
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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| 21 Jul 2012 04:59 PM |
| Great rap, I thought it was an amazing rap, for all of you haters, what kind of rap do you like? "Walking on the moon while beating you with a spoon?" thats what everyone likes, thats famous, what rap good rap have you made? |
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altar30
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:01 PM |
2 things
1) It did suck 2) I followed you to a game and played the game, i am in no way a wrestler on Roblox nor will i ever be. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:02 PM |
| Why did you say it was alright in the game then? And you said "this looks pretty fun, can I play?" |
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:04 PM |
| I hate the show WWE, but I like to play it on Roblox, is that so wrong? How is that constructive criticism, making fun of someone who likes to wrestle on ROBLOX(A game where you can play stuff-even wrestling) |
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:08 PM |
| I said it was alright in the game cause you were really mad at me yesterday when i told you the other rap you made sucked. |
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:09 PM |
| Then don't lie to me bro...I wasn't even mad, now I'm mad because your being Two-Faced |
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altar30
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| 21 Jul 2012 05:19 PM |
| Well sorry for saying what you want everyone to say to you |
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| 21 Jul 2012 07:41 PM |
| Oh, did I write "Foundation?" That was my employment of the aforesaid literary technique. I appeared quite common. |
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