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Re: The Deadly Challenge

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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:01 PM
INTRO!!!!!

There Was This TV show called The Deadly Challenge, Where you Had To Survive Deadly Challenges. Its Was Many People Put to The Test To Survive. It Was Your Favorite Show. One night, you Were watching The News, and men Came at your Door, Saying, "CONGRATS! YOU WON IN THE CONTEST!" You Say,
"I Never Entered Into Anything. One Guy Says, Sleep Powder Him, And They Make You eat the sleep Powder. You Wake Up, With other people, And You Notice, There Are Three Bowls On A Table, And A Note That Says, "You Are In The Deadly Challenge. You Must Find A Key In One Of These Bowls, So You Can Free Your Chains On Your legs. the others.... have a Very VERY bad ending. Now Good Luck, And Put On A Show."

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Rules:
1.No Godmodding.
2.Its Not in the rules Never works.
3.No Trolling Please.
4.You Cant Kill Any other Person There.
5.No Admins Please.
6.I Say What The Traps Are.
7.Good Luck, And Have fun.

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CS

Name:
Gender:
A.ge:(14-23)
Personality:
Bio:(Your Life Before.....)
Looks:(Clothes/And Things you were born with, or gained. scars, dimples, etc)
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my CS.

Name:Mike Hails
Gender:M
A.ge:20
Personality:Funny,mean,smart,Annoying
Bio:He graduated School A little While ago, And His Mom worked As A Chef, So He Learned To Cook, And His dad Worked At A waste Factory, So He Knew If there was Poison, Or If it was Bad. Also Something Else Happened....
Looks:A Blue Jacket,A Red and black Shirt,and A Scar on his cheek
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:18 PM
(Anybody? please? i worked hard on this! Please, if anything is wrong tell me, But DONT BE LIKE BEBI WITH CRITISM!!!!!!! I Tried hard on this. please make A CS.)
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HamsDrek is not online. HamsDrek
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18 Jul 2012 07:19 PM
I recommend adding more details and getting better spelling and grammar. You don't capitalize every word of the sentence. Plus, try to be more descriptive. Give us the story before this happened. Tell us more about the show, what contestants do. Add some twists, maybe some mystery or horror. All in all, needs a good amount of work and a repost once it's all fixed up.
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HugeBlackbear22 is not online. HugeBlackbear22
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18 Jul 2012 07:22 PM
CS

Name: Dan King
Gender: M
A.ge: 20
Personality: Cheerful, Funny,
Bio: Grew up at an aquarium, dad worked there, learned to care for fish and types of fish
Looks: Black Hoodie, and a Vans shirt.
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:22 PM
Alright. Thank you for not using critism and i will try to fix this up, So Ya. Let THIS DIE. the next ill try Harder On. and Again, THE CAPS ARE A HABIT!!!!!! PLEASE STOP TELLING ME TO STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how many times did i ever do tell you guys.......
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:23 PM
(NVM Ill just add the Rest After This Hits About Page 2 Or 3. Ok? :P)
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:24 PM
(Huge Accepted Nice RP actually :P)
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HamsDrek is not online. HamsDrek
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18 Jul 2012 07:26 PM
Well, the capitalizing can be a bit of a nasty habit. Just a tip, but you'll be taken much more seriously if you have excellent grammar and spelling.
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HugeBlackbear22 is not online. HugeBlackbear22
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18 Jul 2012 07:28 PM
(Can we start the RP? Please?)
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:29 PM
Yes, I know, I Wish I Had It more Better, But anywhy, im Just bored, and I Just want to RP so Ya sorry. :P
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:31 PM
(With A Couple More People, Like Maybe two Or Three That Ok?)
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goku435 is not online. goku435
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18 Jul 2012 07:39 PM
CS

Name: Kio Tailru
Gender: Male
A.ge: 17 (14-23)
Personality: Is Quiet And anger Can make him insane When is Sad dosent speak,Is a very shy person And ussely during danger Isnt worried
Bio: Lived a life had a house And Did some Sword training.Until was selected to The Deadly challange(Your Life Before.....)
Looks: A Black Training Gi (From swordsmen Training) Black pants and Brown sneakers,Spikey brown hair.(Clothes/And Things you were born with, or gained. scars, dimples, etc)
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:49 PM
(Oh Well, Im Just Gonna Put Up The Updated Plot Ok?

UPDATED PLOT:

Somebody, Thought About Making This Show, For money. One Of Them, was The most terrible. That Was The First. There Where Five Of The People, They Had to Get Up, And Get out of the room, because it was About to Be filled With Poison Gas. Two Of Them Had Died. There Name's Where Hank, And Lily. Then, There Was A Room, Where They Had To Run And Jump Over Saws. One, Died, With There Bloody Guts Flying EVERYWHERE! His Name Was Danny. He Screamed, Till There Was Nothing Left Of Him, Not Even Chunks. The Last Room, Was Filled With Explosives, Only One Person Could Have Made it. They Had To Race To The Elevator, And The Slow One, Died, Actually Screaming. Her Name Was Samantha. The Last One, Had NEVER made It out. They Dont even Know there Name, Or Gender. There Is A Secret Going Around, That The Next Course, Where Haunted, And The Next Match, Some Of Them Even TURNED INSANE. Everybody Was Scared, And they Wished They Never Got Into There. Some didnt Get There wishs........ The Last People Alive, Had Been Famous, With Wealth, and SO MUCH MONEY!!!!!!!!!!! But They Never forgot about it, And Neither will anybody Else...
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:50 PM
(Goku Is Accepted In this.)
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gwebster2 is not online. gwebster2
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18 Jul 2012 07:52 PM
(God,I hate the fact that you captilize every word. Its annoying to me,and probably is to other possible joiners. Also,what Hams gave you was infact constructive critisism.)
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goku435 is not online. goku435
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18 Jul 2012 07:53 PM
(so Can we Begin?)
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:53 PM
(Can people stop telling me this..... I might form into a Hater Troll.)
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 07:54 PM
(A Friend Of Mine Will Join, Then We Will Start.)
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Mantracker5 is not online. Mantracker5
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18 Jul 2012 08:08 PM

Name:Carter Lane
Gender:M
A.ge:20
Personality:Funny,rude,smart,like to troll
Bio:He graduated School A little While ago, And His Mom worked As A Teacher, So He Learned hard mathematics, And His dad Worked At A chocolate Factory, So He Knew If so he had a sweet tooth.
Looks: puffy brown hair, scar over eye, freckles all over face
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HamsDrek is not online. HamsDrek
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18 Jul 2012 08:09 PM
This could still use improvement, but it's a start.
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 08:11 PM
(Accepted, Lets Get Started.)
Mike-

-I Wake Up-

"Ugh... I Feel Like I Was Killed And then eated ten times....."

-I Look Around And I Notice, Its Deadly Challenge And I Start Screaming, Waking Everybody Up-

"OMG!!!!!!! ITS THE DEADLY CHALLENGE!!!!!!!!"
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Mantracker5 is not online. Mantracker5
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18 Jul 2012 08:14 PM
huh? *wakes up slowly* good mourning to u too
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 08:16 PM
"... WE ARE IN THE DEADLY CHALLENGE YOU IDIOT!!!!!!! EVERYBODY WAKE UP!!!!!!!!"
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Mantracker5 is not online. Mantracker5
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18 Jul 2012 08:19 PM
lets go get mournin chocolate, wait they dont have chocolate do they? ill eat this *takes caramilk bar out of pocket, eats it*
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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18 Jul 2012 08:20 PM
(You dont have that............)
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