Beygirl
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| 28 Apr 2012 07:28 PM |
| This is the name of the book im starting soon. |
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Beygirl
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| 28 Apr 2012 09:40 PM |
btw i changed name. *Chapter 1* The Storm Blader On a very windy day, I, Maria Areogami, was laying down in my backyard with nothing to do. I realized that it would be better to find someone to challenge. I took my skateboard and roamed around town. The wind was starting to pick up around then. It almost seemed as if it was like a tornado. When I rode around a little more, I saw a huge stadium. I looked inside, and sure enough, I saw someone practicing with a leone. The guy noticed me and started to speak, "Hey you, do you got a bey?" He was dressed in clothes similar to Kyoya Tategami, but it wasn't him. It was probably a twin..or something. "Yes, I do." I responded. "Then battle with me!" He declared. Then it began. 3! 2! 1! Let it rip! My bey was a Big Bang Bull F:D, and the others' bey was Rock Leone 145WB. I knew this was going to be tough. "GO BULL!" I shouted. Bull attacked, but it barely had an effect. "I kinda expected that from a defense type..." I muttered. "DO YOU THINK THIS IS A PLAIN-OLD DEFENSE TYPE?!" He yelled in anger. "IM GONNA CRUSH YOU LIKE A LITTLE BUG!" He said. Leone attacked very fiercely and sent my bey flying. My bey was an attack type, so that was obvious. But my bey landed back in perfectly. I decided it was time to put an end to this, but he probably decided the same thing too, because the next thing I knew, Leone was using its special move. "Special move!!! King Lion Tearing Blast!!!!!" he roared. I wasn't about to let myself lose, either. "Special move!!! Final Inferno Strike!!!!!" I yelled. Three giant tornadoes appeared above Leone, while the F:D drive on Bull changed into attack mode and Bull bursted into flames. We both attacked REALLY, REALLY hard, but Leone won the clash and Bull was sent flying REALLY high. "Hahaha....Is THAT all you got? I win. That was pretty lame." "It's...over...." I thought. But then I remembered Gingka's Starblast Attack. I thought about it, and then said, "IT'S NOT OVER YET!!!" I shouted. "What are you gonna do about it? Huh? Huh?" He teased. "GO!!! SPECIAL MOVE!!!! BLASTING FLAME!!!" Then there was a big "BOOM!!!"Bull came crashing down and overcame the tornadoes. Leone stopped spinning. But on the other hand, Bull used up so much power that it stopped, too."IT'S A TIE!!" We both yelled. Then I decided o introduce myself. "My name is Maria Areogami." I said. "The name's David Tategami. I'm Kyoya's son." He said. "Wow. No wonder your bey's Leone." I said in amazement. "Good game." I said. He nodded.
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HippieBot
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| 28 Apr 2012 09:45 PM |
| i can't even describe its badness. |
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Beygirl
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| 28 Apr 2012 09:48 PM |
| dude if you wanna critisize, then keep those thoughts to urself and GET OUT OF HERE AND BTW THIS BOOK WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR MY FRIENDS ONLY, AND NOT YOU HATERS OUT THERE. I CANT TELL YOU HOW MANY TIMES IVE BEEN ANNOYED BY CRITISIZM. GET O-U-T OF HERE YOU NOOB, AND SHUT UP. |
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| 28 Apr 2012 09:59 PM |
TThe humor is good. Your reactions.
Go on. |
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Beygirl
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| 29 Apr 2012 08:01 AM |
| thanks. i might start the next chapter today. finally i can get a positive comment. :) |
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Beygirl
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| 29 Apr 2012 05:28 PM |
*Chapter 2* Fierce Battle! The Lion vs. The Fire-Winged Horse! "Well, David, if you wanna train, why don't we go to the BeyPark?" I asked. "Nah, I've been there before, but those bladers there aren't worth my time. They're complete amateurs," He said. "Oh well. Since he's the son of Kyoya, he would've been cocky just like him," I thought. "Whatever. Maybe you can go find some worthy bladers yourself while I go to BeyPark since you don't seem like my allie," I joked. "Well, I thought I was your friend," he said. "Didn't you notice I was just kidding? Why would I abandon you when we just met?" I asked. "Ok. We can go to BeyPark. Watch me beat those kids piece of cake," he braggged. "...," I rolled my eyes. When we got to the BeyPark, David was right. Those bladers seemed like they weren't as strong as we were when we had our battle. We beat like 10 of them at once. Right when it was getting boring, David spotted a blader without a plain bey. I rushed over to him, and he started to introduce himself to us. "My name is Kai Synora..." He said. He then pointed his bey to us and declared, "...and this is my bey, Cycho (flame) Pegasis 105Q!" "My name is Maria Areogami, and this is my bey, Big Bang Bull F:D!" I declared. "Finally someone worthy is here to challenge us! My name is David Tategami, and this is my bey, Rock Leone 145WB! Let's battle!" David said. They started immidiately. "3! 2! 1! Let it rip!" "Go Leone!" David shouted. Leone tried to attack Pegasis, but it didn't work because of Pegasis' Q tip which makes it very bouncy. "Pegasis!" called Kai. Pegasis circled and bounced around the stadium. "Leone! Go! Jump!" David commanded. Leone jumped up high in the air. "Now! Special move! King Lion Reverse Wind Strike!" Leone flipped upside-down and created a tornado which shot down over the whole stadium, including Pegasis. "Woah! I've never seen THAT move before!" I said in amazement. Pegasis was sent flying. "GO PEGASIS!! SPECIAL MOVE! BLAZING STARBLAST ATTACK!!!" Kai yelled. "A blazing STARBLAST ATTACK?!" David asked in confusement. "Do you really think you could copy Gingka's move and just add a little tweak?" David asked in disbelief. But Pegasis did it. Pegasis bursted into flames in midair and crashed down onto Leone. BOOM. There was an explosion with a red beam of aura covering the stadium. Leone took major damage. "This can't be over...I've never seen David lose in one hit," I thought. When the smoke cleared, I was relieved to see Leone still spinning. "WHAT?! THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN A DIRECT HIT!" Kai said angrily. "Did you really think my bey would stop spinning after 1 attack?" questioned David. "Leone!! Special move, LION WILD WIND FANG DANCE!!! FINISH IT!!!" commanded David. Leone created a tornado and went to attack Pegasis directly even though it was hard to catch a bey that was bouncing around crazily. Leone eventually caught up, and blew Pegasis out of the stadium. "I...lost..," Kai muttered. It was my turn to battle now. |
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Beygirl
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Beygirl
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| 30 Apr 2012 07:27 PM |
*Chapter 3* The Inferno Match "3! 2! 1! Let it rip!" We yelled. Pegasis was off to a good start, because he was attacking me non-stop. "Why isn't Pegasis jumping?" I thought. Well, I wasn't gonna let him get the best of me. "Go bull! Attack!" I commanded. Bull finally attacked and sent Pegasis flying. I guess I made a mistake for letting myself get attacked for a while, because Bull was already starting to lose some stamina. I wasn't done with Kai, either. I was expecting his special move already, but it didn't happen. I decided to take advantage of the situation. "Jump, Bull!" I yelled. Bull jumped and attacked Pegasis in midair. But that wasn't the last of it though. "GO BULL!!! SPECIAL MOVE, FINAL INFERNO STRIKE!!!" I yelled. Bull smacked Pegasis right into the stadium! "Nice one, Maria!" cheered David. I thought this was over, but it wasn't quite....yet. I was just staring down at Kai's bey cracked in the stadium. Suddenly, Pegasis started wiggling his way out. Pegasis turned bright red, and so did Kai. The look in his eyes truly showed me he wasn't done yet. "WHAT THE HECK?!" David yelled. "PEGASIS! SPECIAL MOVE! INFERNO BURST!!!!!!" Kai yelled. Pegasis bursted out of the crack and shot up HIGH in the air. I just stood there and gaped at it. Pegasis came down and almost striked Bull, but I came to my senses just in the nick of time. I released my aura. I was using my real strength. I turned bright red. So did Bull. "BULL!!!!!!" I yelled as hard as I could. Bull unleashed a beam of red right at Pegasis. BOOM. When the smoke cleared, Bull had won it. "I lost AGAIN?!" Kai said in anger. "I really need a new bey...," he said. So that's exactly what he did. He rushed out of BeyPark. "THAT was EPIC!!!" screamed David. "That was tough. He gave me a really good challenge," I said. Meanwhile, Kai was just walking around...when something got his attention. He turned and looked, and there it was. It was Gingka Hagane laying down on the grass at his usual spot. Kai came up to him and said, "Gingka, I need a new bey. Cycho Pegasis isn't the best choice for me. "Well, to be honest, I do have a spare bey that I never used. You can have it," said Gingka. In Gingka's palm lay an Earth Wolf. Kai took it and said, "Thanks. This looks like a better choice for me," said Kai while he walked away. "I'm gonna go show Kyoya and Maria my new bey. They're awfully strong. But the best part about the battle is that we're gonna have fun, and who knows, we might win!" said Kai happily. |
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| 01 May 2012 08:57 PM |
*Chapter 4* A Hurricane Blaze Kai walked far, far away to a secret cave that he always used to train in. He practiced day and night to become strong. Wolf actually worked out pretty well for him. Back at BeyPark, I was deciding what to do next. "Do you wanna go look for some more challenges?" I asked. "Hmm…maybe we could go look for some of our friends," he said. So that's where we were heading. While we were walking, I spotted my friends Blake Unikai and Zero Tatemio walking together. "Hey Blake! Hey Zero!" I shouted so they could hear. They noticed me and came up to us. "Hi Maria," said Blake and Zero. "How about we have a tag-team match with Blake and I vs. you and your other friend standing next to you…uh…what's his name?" stuttered Zero. "Sure, but why don't we introduce ourselves first?" I said. "Ok. My name is David Tategami, son of Kyoya with this Rock Leone 145WB!" exclaimed David. "I'm Blake Unikai, and this is my Wind Pegasis 105HF!" said Blake while holding his bey. "…and I'm Zero Tatemio, and this is my bey Heat Kerbex BD145DS!" said Zero. 3! 2! 1! Let it rip! Pegasis was circling with wind around it like a wind shield. Leone was too, but standing still in the middle. Kerbex was charging straight up at my Bull, and I could feel the heat from his bey. "Bull! Attack Kerbex!" I commanded. Kerbex and Bull attacked each other with flames while Pegasis and Leone attacked each other with wind. Then, it started getting serious! "Go Pegasis!" said Blake. Pegasis actually created a HURRICANE, and it got real windy. "AAAHHHHH!!!!!" David and I screamed. But then there was another surprise too. "Joined special move, HURRICANE BLAZE!!!" they yelled. Kerbex jumped on top of Pegasis, and Kerbex burst into flames. We were sent flying but landed back. We were losing a lot of stamina, and I knew we had to do something fast, so I whispered to David, "C'mon, David, we have to do something fast. How about we make our own joined special move?" I asked. He nodded. I whispered the plan to him, and he understood. This was our last chance to make a move. "GO!!! JOINED SPECIAL MOVE!!! INFERNO STORM!!!" We yelled. Leone created a tornado while Bull bursted into flames and rode in the tornado, making it a fire-tornado. The tornado attacked Kerbex and Pegasis, sending them flying. I was impressed. I've never beaten Zero or Blake. Suddenly, I saw something in the sky. Wind Pegasis was still spinning up there, while Kerbex was tagging along. "Special move, Phantom Wings Attack!!!" yelled Blake. Pegasis blasted down into the fire-tornado! Kerbex followed along. But I knew that wasn't enough. I guess David was thinking that too, because we said the same thing. "GOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" We yelled with all the strength we had left. When both spirits clashed, there was an explosion so loud, I bet you could hear it from about Europe. So big, I bet you could see it from Brazil. When the battle ended, the only things I could recall were that it was a dead tie, and that David said, "Leone…," Then we fainted. |
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| 02 May 2012 03:14 PM |
She means stop making this book its for 7 year olds |
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| 02 May 2012 03:59 PM |
*Chapter 5* Heated Match! Kerbex vs. Pegasis! It took about 10 minutes to recover. Once we did, Zero wanted to battle someone again. "Well, I've battled everyone here except for Blake, since he was on my team. What do ya say, Blake? Wanna battle?" asked Zero. "Ok, then. Let's go!" said Blake. "3! 2! 1! Let it rip!" they both yelled. Kerbex was attacking, while Pegasis was striking harder. "Man, David, look at Pegasis!" I stated in surprise. "Go! Kerbex! Special move! King Terror Attack!" commanded Zero. The next I knew was that Pegasis took a lot of damage from that attack. But I thought, "Why was Zero using his special move so early in the battle? Did he just wanna deal some damage and just forget about the rest? No, he was much stronger and smarter enough than to make that stupid decision. I knew for SURE that he had SOMETHING up his sleeve, but what exactly?" "Pegasis!" yelled Blake in horror. "You gotta do something fast, Blake! Don't just STAND there! FIGHT! I know you're better than THAT!" I yelled to Blake. He looked at me. He was probably thinking I was right. He took encouragement from my words. "GO PEGASIS!!! SPECIAL MOVE!!! PHANTOM WINGS ATTACK!!!" he commanded. Pegasis flew up into the sky, and back down at Kerbex. But as I said earlier, Zero had something up his sleeve. "SPECIAL MOVE! KING HOUND PHANTOM!!!" Zero yelled. "PEGASIS! GO! DON'T LOSE!" yelled Blake. BOOM! When the smoke cleared, Pegasis overcame Zero's special move and was still spinning. "Whoa!" said David. "Right?" I said in response. "Man, I lost." said Zero. |
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| 02 May 2012 04:00 PM |
| shut up. i can't take it with so many haters postng negative comments. |
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| 04 May 2012 03:03 PM |
*Chapter 6* "Long-Time-No-See, Eagle Twins!" "Hey, maybe we should go look for Kai. I mean, It's been a while," I said. "Well, ok," said David with an unsure look. I thought he just wanted to battle, but I didn't know what was wrong this time. David lead us through a forest, and I got confused. "Why do you think Kai would be in the middle of the forest?" I asked. "Because I know what I'm doing. Just wait and you'll see. I know everything," said David acting wisely. Well, I have to admit, I got kind of jealous about that. Besides, I doubt that he really DID know everything. Because if he did, I would've gone bananas! So I just decided to joke around, so I said, "DON'T BE A WISE GUY!!!!!" I yelled at him. Well I guess he got ticked of and lost his temper, because he yelled," SHUT UP!!!" "YOU SHUT UP!!! I screamed back at him. We kept saying shut up a million times, so then it reached it's peak when this happened: "YOU SOUND JUST LIKE THAT ANNOYING DUCK FROM THE DUCK SONG!!! JUST LIKE THIS: GOT ANY GRAPES? GOT ANY GRAPES? GOT ANY GRAPES? GOT ANY GRAPES? GOT ANY GRAPES? SHUT UP!!!!" he hollered. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! YOU'RE REAL FUNNY DAVID. I'VE HEARD OF THAT DUCK, BUT CAN YOU SHUT UP?!" I yelled back. Then Blake chimed in to end it. "GUYS JUST SHUT UP AND GET OVER IT!!! SERIOUSLY!" he yelled. So we just looked at each other and stopped talking. The talking actually made the time pass by, because David already stopped walking. "We're here. I'm absolutely sure he's here," he said. He had led us to a secret-looking cave that had trees surrounding it. David made a good point because I could hear a faint noise of beyblades clashing. When we walked inside, it was true. We saw Kai there training against someone that seemed familiar to me. "Hey Kai. Do you wanna come join us?" I asked. He finally noticed us and said, "Nah, I'm staying here to train with my friends Andrew and Billy." That was the answer. It was all familiar to me who that was...I haven't seen them in such a long time. Andrew was battling with Kai, and in the background, Billy was watching. Kai seemed to have a new bey, too. Earth Wolf 105WD. "Really? It's been a long time since I've seen Andrew and Billy. I never knew you were friends with them!" I said. "Oh. Why don't all you guys stay here and battle everyone?" he suggested. "Ok, what do you say everyone? Wanna stay and have a nice battle?" I asked. Everyone agreed. |
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| 04 May 2012 04:05 PM |
| why would they refer to the overused duck song meme in beyblade |
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| 04 May 2012 06:09 PM |
| Why did Zero (me) Lose to Blake ? Should have been a Tie. |
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Beygirl
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| 04 May 2012 08:45 PM |
| sam i mean everyone has to lose once in a while, i mean, i can't give too many ties. how about a deal: later on in the book ur going to defeat blake. sounds good? |
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