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Re: Attack of the 3.0 Bodies: The Story

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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:04 PM
One day in ROBLOXia, everything was peaceful. ROBLOX was sipping his tea at Bricky Tea, and Telamon was Sword Fighting on the Hights. There also was a little kid, named Buildingblox17. He was walking along the sidewalk. He then noticed something coming out of the sewer... Oh. It was just a construction worker. As usual, Buildingblox17 kept walking, thinking about what he should build. An RPG? A sword Fighting Map? A Cart Ride? Who knows. He then sat at his local Coffee shop. He sipped on some Bloxxy Coffee. Yum. It's the finest coffee in all of ROBLOXia! After he finished his coffee, he went in an alley, to take out his garbage. They alley was right next to his Happy Home. He then got his garbage can, and poured it into the trash can. *Bang boom* "Wait, that was odd. That sounded like it was coming from the trash can." Buildingblox17 said. He then looked into the trash can, and saw wierd body shape. "Hm. That is strange. ROBLOXians usually have 1.0 or 2.0 bodies." Buildingblox17 said. The strange body appeared to be the new 3.0 body ROBLOX Body Morph & Co. Had been recently working on. Buildingblox17 then went over to shake his hand and say hello. The 3.0 body pushed him, and ran off. That was strange. Buildingblox17 then followed it, and 3.0 body ran after him, and bit him! Ouch! Buildingblox17 knew what he had to do. He drew out a piece of his cheese, and threw it at the 3.0 body. The 3.0 body fell to the ground, and said "I am not the only 3.0 body.... *Cough* There are 10,000 more deepe- *Cough cough* Deeper in the city! You will never stop us!" Buildingblox17 then asked him "Who made you?" The 3.0 body then respawned in the ROBLOX jail. Buildingblox17 then knew what he had to do. He grapped his Cheese Thrower 8000, and went into the city. Buildingblox17 then knew there was trouble.

-Part 2-

Everyone was running around in the streets, screaming. The 3.0 bodies were hitting them with their Circular-Hands. Buildingblox17 then shot and exploding cheese bomb in the street. BOOM! The 3.0 bodies ran off into the factory. Everyone ran into their Happy Homes, and locked their doors. Buildingblox17 then went into the factory. He then saw 3.0 bodies being packaged into boxes, and shipped out into a big wooden container. Buildingblox17 turned off of the copy machine, and cut the electrical wires. He had shut down the mesh creator, the hat morpher, and the script machine. The 3.0 bodies then climbed out of their giant wooden container, and started sprinting at Buildingblox17. "Taste my cheese you 3.0 bodies!" Buildingblox17 said. Threw a cheese bomb at the 3.0 bodies. The bodies then backed down. ROBLOX used his teleport tool he had inserted with his insert tool. "What is going on here?" He said. Builderman then came in on his jetboard. Buildingblox17 said "These 3.0 bodies were going to attack us!" ROBLOX said "3.0 bodies! Get over here!" The 3.0 bodies walked over to him. I will delete you guys if you don't behave. The 3.0 Bodies then whispered something into ROBLOX's head mesh. ROBLOX then said "Ok. I will send these 3.0 bodies out somewhere else into another game... Maybe a mining game. A game that you craft stuff..." Buildingblox17 then said "3.0 bodies were causing havoc! Sure, they didn't break things, but they hurt our ROBLOXians! ROBLOX then said "I thought these things were going to be good. But, I guess not everything we create is good." Buildingblox17 then said "Yeah. Well, you just have to learn from your mistakes. Later that day, everything went back to normal again. Buildingblox17 then saw randomly spawned bricks. He then saw a stamp. Oh no. Not the Stamper Tool!





Did you guys like it? I tried to make then ending not too bad. I hope you guys liked it! If you are going to say something rude, don't post it. If you liked it, please comment on what you liked! I am also not a supporter of 3.0 bodies. But, not everything goes my way. Thanks!
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puddingprincessswaq is not online. puddingprincessswaq
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17 Jul 2012 09:04 PM
noob
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17 Jul 2012 09:05 PM
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:07 PM
Thanks for the feedback. -_-
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17 Jul 2012 09:08 PM
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IcyTheHedgehog is not online. IcyTheHedgehog
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17 Jul 2012 09:08 PM
Not only is the story bad,

the horrid grammar and spelling really destroyed it.
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hihihi9808 is not online. hihihi9808
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17 Jul 2012 09:11 PM
THAT WAS AWESOME!!! :3 :DDD I'm serious, it was awesome! I myself do not support the 3.0 or 2.0 packages ( even though i own the 2.0 )
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:12 PM
Thank you. :) Supporters of 3.0 Bodies hate this story. I thought it was good, but then again I'm the writer. I don't see the bad grammar in anyway.
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17 Jul 2012 09:13 PM
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:13 PM
I type about 60 Words per minute, so I tend to have some typos.
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thomasfan6 is not online. thomasfan6
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17 Jul 2012 09:13 PM
That was so stupid...

I liked it xD

~Tails is best fox.
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:15 PM
Ty. :3 It was supposed to be stupid. :D
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IcyTheHedgehog is not online. IcyTheHedgehog
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17 Jul 2012 09:17 PM
>Supporters of 3.0 Bodies hate this story.

I do not support it, and I highly doubt anyone who posted supports it.


>I don't see the bad grammar in anyway.

It was horrible just trying to read it; there practically was no variation in sentence structure. I am surprised that you did not use one paragraph break throughout the parts, and you had dialogue in your story, yet you still used no paragraph breaks. I could go on; however, I will not.

I am guessing you are in either 6th or 7th grade.
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:19 PM
How did you know? :D I forgot rules, ok?
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:21 PM
I had an A too. But it's summer dude.
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BrandonS677 is not online. BrandonS677
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17 Jul 2012 09:24 PM
Can I be in it?

And I loved the story

Its one of the best storys I heared in ages.
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:27 PM
Thanks guys. :)
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17 Jul 2012 09:28 PM
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:29 PM
BTW to IcyTheHedgeHog: I'm human. I make mistakes.
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17 Jul 2012 09:31 PM
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:31 PM
I know. :3
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BrandonS677 is not online. BrandonS677
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17 Jul 2012 09:32 PM
@blox

Make a part 3


Were they kill roblox :D
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:32 PM
Also, you don't have to be those correcting noobs dude. You hated the story. GREAT! Now go. Stop correcting me on every little thing.
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buildingblox17 is not online. buildingblox17
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17 Jul 2012 09:38 PM
......... Anyone else like the story? :3 I know it isn't the best, but oh well.
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kyle90038 is not online. kyle90038
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17 Jul 2012 09:40 PM
AND DEN A SKELETON POPPED OUT
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