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Re: Vaktovian Stories; The Final Stand

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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 09:44 PM
[WAIT!!!]
Read these first!!
Number 1: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65687052
Number 2:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=65799134
Number 3:http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=66245295
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As I regain conscience, I learn that the officer that did all that stuff to me was UAF Colonel Egor Claffanach, one of the the most awarded officers in UAF, known for his unique torture methods, and addiction to drinking. Which is no more of a concern since that commando took the kill shot during my rescue.

The war with UAf and VAK is far more than anything I have experienced in the many years of being in service, and the many purple hearts I have been rewarded with other honorable metals, I earned the rank of captain, an officer rank. I get many more perks now rather than Sergeant or any of those soldier class ranks.
So, I re-enter this bad war as an Officer, my chance to shine out and command my troops as an eligible commander.

I was anticipating the first go at the war as an officer rank. That anticipation might just get me killed though. So, today, we have a major battle, at least that's what I presume because Vaktus AND Benblue9 is at the battle ground at which I am at. With my favorite general there, me and that specific general are really close friends... Me and my men are lined up on the walls while Vaktus and the generals are behind the walls away from most of the action.

The first of the Russians hit our walls like a thunderbolt thrown by Zeus himself, we return with massive rocket launchers and m-82B laser guns, standard at VAK bases. Hoards upon hoards of Russian swine just keep coming, but only two of the newer men are dead, I new they wont get far with their rowdy behavior.

About half an hour of death last, all my men except me and one of my Sergeants remain as the UAF pull out of the desert base. We were exhausted, as we go to tell the generals and Vaktus about our great victory, all we see is my pal, the general, Vaktus and the other generals got tired of this battle and went into the base. So the general stopped me and told the sergeant to go in the base and rest.

As the General and me start walking and talking down the base wall, he stops, looks at me, and with a sad, yet twisted expression, shakes my hands and mumbles, "I am sorry". I stood there and tilted my head a bit, confused at the statement, and faster than lighting, he pulls the handgun out of his holster and holds to my jaw, as he says, "You were a good soldier, to bad it must end like this, friend." Then the bang happens, all I see is pure white.
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Epilogue: After the death of Captain Dominic Serge, General Siron(the general whom killed Dominic for money) was faced to court marshal and lost, retaining his rank of General, demoted to a Cadet, and sent to jail for 8 life sentances. He is in jail to this date. There is a statue at all the Vak bases of this glorify Captain.
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Thanks for all of you reading this: it was fun making these great stories!
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 09:48 PM
BUMP for the fans!
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 09:49 PM
For the fans!
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 10:06 PM
Comment to keep it alive.
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Insheeption is not online. Insheeption
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11 Jul 2012 10:07 PM
"for fans"

you have
no fans
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 10:09 PM
Comments on the last three chapters have 15+ comments on all 3 of them.
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master1011 is not online. master1011
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11 Jul 2012 10:15 PM
"I learn that the officer that did all that stuff to me"

Had to laugh. Sorry.
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 10:15 PM
^ Of master You havent changed a bit eh? Hehe
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master1011 is not online. master1011
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11 Jul 2012 10:16 PM
Nope. Sorry again.
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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11 Jul 2012 10:24 PM
Way to turn something serious to an awkward type thing Hehe, Its okay you still are cool in my book.
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master1011 is not online. master1011
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11 Jul 2012 10:24 PM
:D
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schrute is not online. schrute
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11 Jul 2012 10:25 PM
lol
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master1011 is not online. master1011
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11 Jul 2012 10:25 PM
being srs bsns all the time is too boring
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shyshen is not online. shyshen
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11 Jul 2012 10:56 PM
Cool story.
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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12 Jul 2012 08:15 AM
I bet it is master, heh.
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12 Jul 2012 06:26 PM
I would be a fan but, I'm already to hot.
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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12 Jul 2012 09:40 PM
yeah...
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ironboo is not online. ironboo
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12 Jul 2012 09:42 PM
You forgot the WIJian nuke that was placed in the battlefield.
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13 Jul 2012 10:30 AM
BUMP
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Notom is not online. Notom
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15 Jul 2012 10:55 PM
this is one of the most random and scattered stories i have ever read in my life.

Summary:

i get blown up on a bridge. i survive.

i go to a jungle. get blown up. i survive.

i get tortured. get blown up. i survive.

i go to a battle. some random general kills me for money.

tiki tiki tiki tiki tiki room
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NinjaofRobloxia is not online. NinjaofRobloxia
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15 Jul 2012 10:56 PM
Wasn't bad.

~ Rebel Squad Defense Senior Minister. Supreme Overseer.
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develdogm5 is not online. develdogm5
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16 Jul 2012 10:40 AM
I didnt get blown up at the torture room TIKI TIKI.
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SteelCross is not online. SteelCross
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16 Jul 2012 10:55 AM
Nice.

But you were acting like Vaktovians were human;in reality vak would of killed them in two seconds.
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16 Jul 2012 10:59 AM
Sounds like a good story, saved it to read later.
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