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| 14 Jul 2012 03:03 PM |
[Rebel Squad]//Chapter 1// ____________ The Beginnings ____________
It was just a couple of years after the assault on South America. Argentina was recovering from the devastating attack from unknown forces. It was the largest frontal assault from a serious of small attacks. Now, two years later, cities were finally beginning to be rebuilt. A small town in Southern Argentina, 300 or so miles from the capital, got it roots firmly placed and managed to start up a small local government. The town was renamed after their minister, Faijer. For the next decade the town operated smoothly, isolated yet self-sufficient.
Faijer was a town filled with hard workers. Everybody in the town worked multiple jobs. Most were farmers, repairmen, innovators, and other jobs that required a decent build and a great work ethic. Even those involved in the government were laborers. Faijer has passed away only four years after the creation of the town, and it’s new minister, Togul, was an 86 year old man on his last leg. The town’s people knew they would need a new minister soon, and so sought out a new person capable of running the town.
It was an average day on June 17th. Fliers had been scattered throughout the town advertising the need of a new minister. Something about this day though was not so average. The typical town folk were too busy maintaining the town’s food supply and fixing up the new stables to realize a change in the atmosphere. But the old and wise could sense the change. Out of the nine of the elders, only one decided this was something big. Something the town simply could not handle, still fragile because of it’s extreme isolation. Gejmin grabbed his aging cane and stumbled out of the Home for the Elders on a direct course for the minister’s office.
His condition prevented him from being able to climb the steep and narrow cobblestone streets, so he took an alternate route through a large grass field that only gradually inclined. The clearing had been neglected, and Gejmin could barely see over the grass that covered the area just east of the city’s borders. After walking in the clearing for a few miles, he took a sharp turn heading back to the city, where the ground would then be flat and he could walk easily for the remainder of his journey.
Then suddenly, a sound broke from over the mountains that enclosed the town. It was one that was unfamiliar to the ones working on their farms or tending to their families. It was unfamiliar to everyone - except the elders. They had heard this sound before, and one by one they were struck with a painful flashback, of memories of events that had happened a dozen years ago. The helicopters were coming. Gejmin’s pace increased greatly as he hobbled over the untamed terrain, desperate to get to Faijer – desperate to warn his family.
Gejmin was only 300 meters away from the border, an imaginary line that would still give him a sense of security. The sound was getting louder, and he was certain that the hell storm was within five minutes of touchdown.
“Why?” he thought. “Why now, after all these years?” Before he could think of an answer to satisfy himself, a dark figure emerged from behind him. Covered in black and red robes, and with a small patch on his right shoulder that read “RS”, the man was stone faced. Without hesitation, Gejmin lashed out at the figure, only to be countered with lightning fast speed. The man’s hand slammed down upon the side of Gejmin’s neck, and he was instantly knocked out. The assailant picked up his victim, through him over his shoulder, and sprinted for the tree line. Only seconds after they were under the cover of the trees, the mechanized flying machines flattened the town formerly known as Faijer. The man layed Gejmin down next to him, sat upon a stump, and watched as the screams let loose from the wreckage.
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| 14 Jul 2012 03:07 PM |
| a little twist to the story line..add jaredvaldez in here and make him do something loony since he was the one that created Rebel Squad in the first place |
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| 14 Jul 2012 03:10 PM |
thanks
it will be 5 chapters probably
so yeah
its gonna be awesome |
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benblue
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| 14 Jul 2012 03:13 PM |
This looks really cool - keep me updated if a new chapter is released.
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| 14 Jul 2012 03:49 PM |
That old man better live and be an awesome ninja old man.
[insert siggy here] |
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| 14 Jul 2012 08:38 PM |
| Haha guess you'll have to just stay tuned. |
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:11 PM |
| I'm going to put out a chapter a day. I will make between 4 and 8 chapters, depending on the support I get. |
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:11 PM |
wrong.
jaredvaldez sat on his american computer and created it |
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Reavaen
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:13 PM |
control f and i type in jared
umm FAKE |
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:22 PM |
| The story is supposed to be fiction by the way. |
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:34 PM |
| Bump. Feedback is appreciated. |
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| 14 Jul 2012 10:43 PM |
I swear I will kill that old man if I don't get more comments.
Lol jk no spoilers |
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| 15 Jul 2012 11:56 AM |
| I am starting Chapter 2 now. |
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| 15 Jul 2012 11:57 AM |
Nice
Life is a race, and everyone's behind me. |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:00 PM |
| GIMME GIMME GREEN LANTERN WANTS MORE |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:01 PM |
Judo Chops don't work...-_-
Ťħėķŷĺėśħřėďďėř |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:07 PM |
| And the way you lead Red Delta doesn't work. BTC was 5x better then you. |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:10 PM |
Are you kidding me? The group was a mess when I got it! I got it 800 members in about 3 weeks.
Ťħėķŷĺėśħřėďďėř |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:20 PM |
| Those 800 members are all retarded. And you are too with your "war" with FEAR. |
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| 15 Jul 2012 12:37 PM |
Chapter 2 is out!
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=72523664 |
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| 15 Jul 2012 01:32 PM |
| Chapter 3 coming later tonight probably. |
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