Cirivio
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| 11 Jul 2012 11:00 PM |
Saturday, December 25th, 2020
It was Christmas, but I just stood outside in Normandy alone.... My friends said to me "Arnt you cold, Ciri? Come in here, its Christmas!" I replied with a quick "No. I want to be alone. Leave me now." They did so, and I was alone now. I thought of my friends I lost around this time... Gigazic and Commanderfury died right in front of me... I coudnt save them.... I just stared out at the chilling waves crashing against the beach.... I look down and I see a pistol laying down on the bunker floor. There was a name scratched in it. "Tonitoni". I took the pistol and drove my jeep back to the bunkers. I entered in and everyone cheered. I just kept a straight face and didnt talk. They asked about me. "Cirivio, are you okay? Whats wrong sir?" I replied "Nothing" and remembered the pistol... They were curious what it was. I said "Get off me." They were worried that something happened. "Cirivio, talk to us. Whats wronk my friend? I know there-" Bullets sprayed the room, just leaving me with more horrible memories on Christmas......
~The end of Chapter I~ |
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| 11 Jul 2012 11:03 PM |
You'd better have both sides running around with guns drawn, but without firing, yelling "for [insert group here]1!11one!11", and then their few good HRs facepalming.
It'd be more accurate then.
Oh, then add JC in this.
It can be the most pathetic superclan fight ever that way. |
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Cirivio
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| 12 Jul 2012 09:59 AM |
| i like it but did tonitoni kill commander or what |
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TYBBB
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| 12 Jul 2012 10:00 AM |
but me in it
I save the day |
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Cirivio
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:30 AM |
@King No, Gig and Com were held hosage and were killed. And Toni was "dead" when Gig and Com were killed. @TY I am next chapter. |
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:32 AM |
| When bullets sprayed the room, why didn't you return fire? |
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fox1238
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:34 AM |
| Lol if you play ROBLOX when you are twenty, you have no life |
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blazar
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:34 AM |
Book 1 Air, Chapter 1 We used to live a peaceful and serene life on ROBLOX, but everything changed when the Vaktovians attacked. |
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Cirivio
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:42 AM |
| Fox, I'm not twenty. I lie about my age. :P |
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9dragonz
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:44 AM |
| Eeeewww. You should be more detailed with the surroundings, you don't even specify about where the heck you are other than the town. What's it like, what's the mood, what's around you? ANSWER DEM QUESTIONS! WRITE NOO BOOK NAO |
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9dragonz
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| 12 Jul 2012 11:45 AM |
| nvm, i will write new book to show you how it done. |
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