Gorfbag
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:08 AM |
So, basically I had an Idea of a roleplay, of you having an all dead family with no one to stay with. The orphanage hates you so one last option occurs. Death. You've tried to do it, drowning or beating yourself. But, death hasn't come easy for you, for everytime it has been done, you see a different memory of your past. No one can see you, hear you, or feel you so you just have to muster the memory. Once the memory is done you wake up in your old house. In your old bed.
Nice, no? Im Proud, but I think it needs more. I thought of it yesterday so I woke up pretty early adding more.
~I don't live in a box. I live in a bag, a Gorfbag :D~ |
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:15 AM |
| *Slap* NO SODDING ORPHANS YOU DUMB PLEBEIAN. |
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Gorfbag
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:19 AM |
| Now go sit in the corner with a sandwich or something and think about what you have done. |
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Gorfbag
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:21 AM |
Yes sir,
-Cries a little, and thinks of what I have done-
So um, yeah what did you think? Need more? |
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:23 AM |
This could use alot of improvement and alot less "Everyone hates you go die in a ditch" Downer-ness
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Gorfbag
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:25 AM |
| Yeah, I think I'm gonna add about what the memories are like, but how exactly could I incorporate the goodness with the story I have? |
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Gorfbag
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masterx
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:29 AM |
>bebithetuffle >gives advice
oh god please no |
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Riku1257
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:31 AM |
| I wouldn't call this advice, I'd call it 'Bebithetuffle raging over some orphan RP' though, he makes some good points. There is too much 'F- you go die in a hole now' stuff. |
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masterx
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:33 AM |
bebithetuffle in general is oh god no but yeah no orphans orphans are used too much why does the world hate parents |
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wertysas
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| 12 Jul 2012 07:35 AM |
| I'd call it advice, and what's your problem little miss wizard hat? You're one of the problems we have, people don't have any freaking respect around here, but they expect it. For the love of god, bebi is a smart person, and he knows what he's doing so go die in a ditch and have your memories, and wake up away from here. |
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Gorfbag
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| 12 Jul 2012 09:54 AM |
| The basic Idea of the story I had was that you try to kill yourself but you keep seeing old memories of your past, It wouldnt be a orphanage RP :P |
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| 12 Jul 2012 10:17 AM |
bro ignore everybody else they basically just want you to make an rp they like for them because they are big party poopers
my advice to you is maybe add something to the idea up as there isn’t much for the roleplayers to actually do other than attempt to murder themselves. maybe you can add a threat?
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Riku1257
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| 12 Jul 2012 10:30 AM |
bro wh3r3 d@ grammar? you be lookin like dat dex10awesome.
You go to school for a reason -_-. |
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