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| 11 Jul 2012 07:55 PM |
This is my attempt at creepypasta
Sorry if it is too bloody/gorey, but thats creepypasta for you
I would advise anyone under the age of 13 not to read this
PART 1
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It was a small town, Weld, Maine. The weather was always freezing, and the townspeople were extremely old fashioned. Why my parents moved us here, i don't know. The only thing that i know for sure is that it makes my flesh crawl, and that's a pretty bad sign if i do say so myself. We were moving into a really old, s***** looking house that sat on a hill and had a beautiful veiw of the beach. I didn't care though, i just wanted to be somewhere with technology, and people who don't have to drive for an hour to find a decent walmart.
Though there weren't any signs of inhabitants, something about the look of the house told me that i shouldn't enter, that somthing was already occupying the crumby old s*** hole. As this was running through my mind, my brother, Jonathon, grabbed my arm and said, "HEY!! SAMANTHA!! We're going in now, ok?!" he began to shake me back and forth. I realised that once again i had dazed off, my mind had drifted away, and now was the time to go inside of our shabby little home. "Okay, Jon, I get it. You don't need to yell at me..." i said as i began to walk to the door.
I paused. My feet froze, and my muscles tensed up, as a shiver ran through my spine. This place.... it wasn't.. right. I didn't know what it was, but my senses were tingling as my father grabbed my hand and coaxed me into our new home. "I know it can be hard to transition from one place to another, sweet heart. But we have to do this. You can get through this, Sammie, i know it." he said. I just sat there and nodded, knowing he wouldn't understand what i was feeling. He couldn't understand that we were all doomed since we walked in this house...
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That's all for part 1, sorry if i cut it a little short.
Part 2 will come out soon and i'll post it here on this thread.
Thank you, Moon |
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| 11 Jul 2012 08:02 PM |
It WILL get creepier, this is only part one, dumbass
And apparently you never saw the word "Attempt" |
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| 11 Jul 2012 08:06 PM |
So, the first creepypastas were not creepypasta?
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| 11 Jul 2012 08:06 PM |
Like you can?
That must be why you didn't see the word "Attempt" |
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