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| 08 Jul 2012 02:24 PM |
There are two clans, LightClan and DarkClan. These two clans have been at war for seasons and there is no end in sight. The War began when the two founders of the clans, Lightstar and Darkstar, let the rivalry go to far. Now the clans in general?
DarkClan has ruthless warriors who kill all of there enemies and leave no survivors. They dont follow the Warrior code and often steal prey. They prefer to stay in the shadows and attack when all is qiuet.
LightClan has peaceful warriors who hope to end this war, but are not afraid to kill when in battle. They always follow the warrior code and respect borders. They prefer to stay out in the open and fight with honor.
At every full moon the Clans gather on the island for a peaceful meeting. It is the one time when the clans do not fight each other. At every Half moon the Medicine cats and there apprentices go to Moonpool to speak to StarClan.
To be accepted into this thread you must find the secret word which is at: First paragraph, third line, second word
~CS~ Name: @ge(In moons.): Rank: Gender: Clan: Appearence: Secret Word:
~My CS~ Name:Tigerstar @ge(In moons.):28 Rank:Leader gender:Male Clan: DarkClan Appearence:Black pelt with green eyes. Has Long, Sharp Claws.Right ear is torn. Secret Word:My thread i dont have to put this
.-Rules-
1. No trolling/spamming/flaming.
2. No mary sueing/gary stuing.
3. You may have up to 5 cats if you are non-admin. Admins may have up to 10.
4. Follow the rules.
5. You must be accepted by me or an admin before you start, or you will not be accepted.
6.Have fun!
-Admins- None yet but i can make you a admin if i wish. |
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| 08 Jul 2012 02:25 PM |
(EDIT!) The secret word is realy the Fourth word in the First pargraph on line 3 |
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| 08 Jul 2012 03:56 PM |
| (BUMP! come on people join already!) |
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| 08 Jul 2012 04:10 PM |
| I reccommend you don't bump this. Let it die. |
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| 08 Jul 2012 05:00 PM |
| (I spent nearly a hour writing this and correcting any mistakes i made. So im not going to willingly let this die.) |
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| 09 Jul 2012 07:27 AM |
[Yeah. Shut up, troll.]
~CS~ Name:Moonheart @ge(In moons.):21 Rank:Warrior(deputy?) Gender:Female Clan:Darkclan Appearence:Blue-grey fur with darcker flecks and a darker underbelly. Secret Word:'the' |
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| 09 Jul 2012 09:14 AM |
"Yeah. Shut up, troll."
I'm not trolling, I'm just saying. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 09:24 AM |
( Can I make the leader of LightClan? If so: ~CS~ Name: BrightStar @ge(In moons.): 20 Rank: Leader Gender: Female Clan: LightClan Appearence : Looks kind of like FireStar from the books except yellowish. Blue eyes with speckles of yellow and green. Secret Word: When
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| 09 Jul 2012 10:15 AM |
LOL.
You took an hour to make this?
If you want to make a better RP, read this: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=71084642
First off, I will not bother complaining about originality. Most Robloxians just don't seem to get that part.
However, it needs a good plot. Two to five sentences is not enough. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:24 AM |
@Pure
YES, took an hour to make this. Sheesh, get your facts straight. I, myself, think this is a very good thread. If you don't, don't comment. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:28 AM |
| Good? Oh god no. MrGiraffe1, PurelyRandom, JPFan, AbCatchem, and some others that I forgot, make good roleplays. Mine are average at best. This, is bull****. An hour to make this crap? Either this person is the slowest typer in the world, or he's trying to make it look better. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:35 AM |
@Above
You just come barging in and call this ****? YOUR threads aren't as much better as this one! I cannot believe you. He WASTED an hour to make this a thread! He can't take that back now, thanks to your bull****. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:37 AM |
._. My threads are: Original, Grammar Approved, Decent Plotline, and at least I don't have bebi or Pure breathing down my neck on how bad the role play is. This, is stupid at best. Yeah, my threads are a lot better.
Case closed, lets move onto the next stupid idiot. |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:39 AM |
I've been complimented twice now. Score. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:41 AM |
Mini, I'm here to help you, believe me.
If you make a Roleplay, no matter how good it is, based too much off a movie or a book, or anything, really, people will hate on it until it dies.
If you want to make a successful thread, however, try looking around. See what threads seem more professional and nice, and try to take that into account while building your RP. This thread is nice, but if you made more of an intellegent
I've been on this forum a while, so I know how this, and I ASSUME you're new, which is why I'm telling you this. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:44 AM |
Original PLOTLINE. Who cares about if the name is generic? Look at AbCatchem and pokemon. He's famous for making amazing plotlines of the generic name pokemon.
(I find that I'm using AbCatchem as a name a lot when people say "ololol needs to be original idea and name.) |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:46 AM |
| I haven't ever seen/joined any of Ab's st00f, and I assume it still gets attacked by people like you. |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:56 AM |
| (I'm currently running one fantasy RP and two dark Pokemon RPs.) |
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| 09 Jul 2012 11:59 AM |
This must be the dawn of a new era of trolling.
amirite? |
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| 09 Jul 2012 12:03 PM |
| Oh, I don't join his RPs. I just read them. Dey is good. |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Jul 2012 12:05 PM |
| I am a girl, but thank you. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 12:07 PM |
| Alrighty.. never knew that. |
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| 09 Jul 2012 12:54 PM |
You didn't know Ab was a girl?
omgogmgogmgogmgogmg |
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