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| 06 Jul 2012 04:03 PM |
When, I joined TERA I never thought I would be the last soldier. I also never thought I would survive the war, but I did. The war between TERA and RAT had torn Robloxia to pieces and had decimated both clans forts. I was commisioned to Fort Cobi and I had lost many friends in battle. Now, I wasn't sure what to do. I was now the last soldier from TERA. The last "drop" of hope. Five Days Later... I was almost caught yesterday and now I'm seriously worried that I would run out of food. I couldn't risk asking locals for help, I was on RAT territory with only my torn TERA uniform and a package of RAT Nutrition Pills that I had taken from a fallen RAT. My attempt to rally former TERA allies like RRM and RSF had failed.
The Next Day
"So, you want me to send in my troops for a suicide mission?" Ben said. "'Tis not suicide! With your help-" I replied. "Do you not remember how your 'mighty' TERA against RAT and its ally FEAR?" "I do, and I also remember you not lifting a finger to help! 'Ally'!" I shouted. "Colour, we have your survivor up here." Ben calmly said to his secret radio. "You'r- You're helping RAT?" I said, shocked that the legendary Ben Blue (Section 9) would help to end a former ally's life. "RAT has more ballistic missles than we can fight off. They could kill all of FEAR if they wanted." He replied, still sounding calm. The guards had taken my weapons, so I couldn't kill Ben but I could run. Sadly, RAT had gotten me before I could even turn around. And then, he hit me.
1 Hour Later...
I woke up dazed and in pain, my chest and head hurt. A RAT guard came in the cold, dark, damp room with a rather small knife. "Get up captain! We must go!" The mysterious soldier said with a rushed British accent. "Who are you?" I said with everything my voice could could manage, yet it still came out a whisper. "Squad 79! Now quickly! On your feet!" He rushed as he freed me. "Oh no, don't drop me!" I joked. "This is no time for joking captain!" "I need my weapons... whats your name?" I said, this time being deadly serious. "Just go!" and he pushed me out the door into a dimmly-lit hallway. "Reminds me of Celeste and Pyro." I said. "Here we go sir!" He said, and shoved me into a doorway. We were falling, but then we started rising. "How're we rising?" I asked. The guard had a grin on his face, which made everything serm worse when he said... "You fool!" I had just opened my mouth to reply when the rise ended and I was met with a bright room. And there sitting in a small, leather chair was Colour.
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| 06 Jul 2012 04:04 PM |
| I posted so I can read this later when I have the time. |
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| 07 Jul 2012 04:13 PM |
"When the last leaf falls..."
isnt that from bugs life |
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| 07 Jul 2012 05:43 PM |
Part Two "When Everything Fails, Whats Left?"
Colour had a odd expression on his face, somewhere between terror and happiness. And then, everything went downhill. I forgot the traitor of a guard had a kinife and he took off my right arm with it. Then kicked me to the ground saying. "So this is what the second in command of TERA has to offer us!" "You... You'll see!" I shouted back. "When Colour has given me permission to-" he replied, getting cut off by Colour. "Enough B3n ( To distinguish this Ben from UAF's Ben, I'm using a 3 for his e)" Colour shouted at B3n. "But sir!" B3n shouted at Colour. "I said that is enough! You are dismissed!" He said firmly. I figured that as soon as he left Colour would take my arm and beat me with it. I prepared for my end. I just knew it would end here. "You think your the last TERA soldier, correct?" Colour asked. "There are no others." I replied, Colour laughed. "There are others, much like you, who are at what remains of Fort Eclipse. They are going to die when I show up, so I'm letting you join your friends." Colour didn't sound like he lying. "I don't understand." I said, not beliving him. "You showed me honor by bowing when you entered," and I had, "so I will let you die honorablly." Colour said. "We are enemies but, thank you 'sir'" I said.
1 Day Later...
When I finally land this ship, I'm going to take charge and kill every RAT I see. I would show mercy for Colour though, he had let me live. But first, I needed VAK. Vaktovians were experts at limb replacement and WMDs. They could give me back my arms and maybe a extending sword.
2 Hours Later... When I near Pyro, and am immediately shot down. I crash into a old shack, making a hole in the roof. The "explosion" alerts guards of my presense and allows two raiders to take my ship parts while knocked out.
10 Minutes Later...
I wake up and see blood everywhere around me, but also find one of VAK replacement arms attached to my body. It doesnt move at all. Then, the door opened and the chains tightened...
Continue? Give me a rating (X/10) please! Which part is better? Thank you to all my readers! Part Three coming in a few hours! |
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| 07 Jul 2012 07:54 PM |
| Thank you! I thought alot would say one. Thank you all! |
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| 07 Jul 2012 07:57 PM |
| Sorry for all the typos! and missing words. |
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rockubot
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:00 PM |
| Posting so I can read later. |
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:03 PM |
Nice story.
<~--þ|ðöÐýšÞ宆ãñ18--~> |
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:04 PM |
I highly doubt TERA would even match to RAT.
31 bottom ranks vs 60k bottom ranks? ANd I'm justing this on the bottom rank alone.
-/(I have a globe in my bedroom. It makes me feel like an intellectual)\- |
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Istast
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:09 PM |
| Its a story dude, i know numbers aren't even. |
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:12 PM |
It's a dumb concept, though.
-/(I have a globe in my bedroom. It makes me feel like an intellectual)\- |
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| 07 Jul 2012 08:14 PM |
@Killer I agree.
-BTW I am a girl, yea threw you off didn't I? |
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james2301
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