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| 06 Jul 2012 07:49 PM |
| The Training all careful, still with soft minds, the corporals ready, all in straight lines. The speech maker ready, to prevent a bad war, the spies all steady, part of the army's core. A bulletproof fabric, yet sewn by soft hands, a hand dodging bullets, though can still make a stand, armor made by privates, the infantry's shield, and not last of all, the generals senses that make them most careful, and captains all ready, not at all fearful. |
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| 06 Jul 2012 07:58 PM |
Written By: SpikeViper Idea By: Awsumsuperman79 |
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| 06 Jul 2012 08:00 PM |
| Also: Credit to Spaceninga2000 and all of Group K |
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| 08 Jul 2012 10:02 AM |
| Wow thats actualy good, I thought it would have all this stuff about FEAR but it didn't. Godd job spike and awsum. |
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hammer124
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blazar
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| 08 Jul 2012 10:06 AM |
K stands for kindergarten.
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| 09 Jul 2012 08:42 AM |
| Oh well, i tried to mke good poetry lol im not that good, and dont maike fun of group K's name cause UCR could be Undergrown Crying Rabies |
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| 09 Jul 2012 08:47 AM |
| And K does stand for something, but not kindergarten lol |
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| 09 Jul 2012 01:19 PM |
| It stands for someone i used to know who was always nice, kk? |
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| 09 Jul 2012 01:21 PM |
| SOMEBODY THAT I USED TO KNOW |
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| 09 Jul 2012 09:36 PM |
| well I think it should stand for kindergarten if N stands for noob to you. |
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| 10 Jul 2012 09:24 AM |
| SUper, space said that, not me. and get off of my forums. your flaming in the wrong place. The WHOLE world can see you. |
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| 11 Jul 2012 07:37 AM |
| The majority of it is exact rhyming, you should have spiced it up by adding a bit of close(d){I forget the name} in there. |
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| 11 Jul 2012 02:13 PM |
| I get what you mean, but the last two lines had to sound more powerful, different from the rest, i decided to change it so it still sounds nice, but still has meaning |
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