altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 05:36 PM |
I don't like to rap about money, Listen to me honey, Im getting hungry so make me a sandwich. Make it fast but speak no word, Ha, jokes over. I walk alone cause I seem awkward, I know it's absurd, But I'm ok with what the truth is, Cause truth is, I'm losing, With all my friends choosing, To rap about money and swag, That I know they've never had, And will probably never reach it with the goals in check, Which is set, For there reality to kick in, let, It end before this blows out of hand, When rap dies, And becomes a bunch of ghetto kids lies, In disguise, Of there real lives. Cause If you lie in your verse, Pack it up and reverse, To me fake rappers are the worst. Radical out. |
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Jared343
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| 07 Jul 2012 05:39 PM |
"Listen to me honey, I'm getting hungry so make me a sandwich." -_-
Other than that line, it's pretty decent. |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 05:41 PM |
| Lol i put that as a joke, thats why the next line is ha jokes over :D |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 06:16 PM |
| Thx I had this one sorta waiting on my iPod till I found it today while working on another song. |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 06:38 PM |
"Listen to me honey, I'm getting hungry so make me a sandwich"
Yeah,...that put a sour note on it and laughing at your own joke in a song comes off as being dumb. But other than that it wasn't bad.
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 06:54 PM |
| If that's what you think then aight |
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| 07 Jul 2012 06:56 PM |
| to go further into the laughing thing like once I saw or well heard Lil Twist making jokes then pointing out it was a joke in a song...he said "ha on that last dumb dumbo...ha..i crack jokes cuz i can" |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 06:59 PM |
| Umm ok thx for informing me |
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| 07 Jul 2012 07:00 PM |
| *holds book in hand and looks for more to say*..I..i wasn't done yet....I'm not weird or anything...don't...don't run away |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 07:01 PM |
| Lol your a MTer that doesn't completely suck |
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StellaOwl
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| 07 Jul 2012 07:15 PM |
You want my true opinion?
Oh please. The only "Lies" on this thread are the people who say this song is good. |
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altar30
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| 07 Jul 2012 11:28 PM |
| No. This song is actually pretty good. I ain't lying :| |
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| 08 Jul 2012 12:10 AM |
| @Stella what don't you like about it? |
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| 08 Jul 2012 01:59 AM |
| I liked the point ur trying to get out and the originality of the song but it needs some editing. |
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