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Re: Here's my new song called "Lies" plz comment

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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 05:36 PM


I don't like to rap about money,
Listen to me honey,
Im getting hungry so make me a sandwich.
Make it fast but speak no word,
Ha, jokes over.
I walk alone cause I seem awkward,
I know it's absurd,
But I'm ok with what the truth is,
Cause truth is,
I'm losing,
With all my friends choosing,
To rap about money and swag,
That I know they've never had,
And will probably never reach it with the goals in check,
Which is set,
For there reality to kick in, let,
It end before this blows out of hand,
When rap dies,
And becomes a bunch of ghetto kids lies,
In disguise,
Of there real lives.
Cause If you lie in your verse,
Pack it up and reverse,
To me fake rappers are the worst.
Radical out.
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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07 Jul 2012 05:39 PM
"Listen to me honey, I'm getting hungry so make me a sandwich." -_-

Other than that line, it's pretty decent.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 05:41 PM
Lol i put that as a joke, thats why the next line is ha jokes over :D
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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07 Jul 2012 05:46 PM
Meh, I understand.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 05:46 PM
Sick
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theflame1234 is not online. theflame1234
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07 Jul 2012 06:14 PM
Great song.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 06:16 PM
Thx I had this one sorta waiting on my iPod till I found it today while working on another song.
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NostalgiaUltra is not online. NostalgiaUltra
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07 Jul 2012 06:17 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 06:18 PM
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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NostalgiaUltra is not online. NostalgiaUltra
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07 Jul 2012 06:23 PM
i liked it.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 06:23 PM
Lol thx
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ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is not online. ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX
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07 Jul 2012 06:38 PM
"Listen to me honey, I'm getting hungry so make me a sandwich"

Yeah,...that put a sour note on it and laughing at your own joke in a song comes off as being dumb. But other than that it wasn't bad.

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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 06:54 PM
If that's what you think then aight
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ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is not online. ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX
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07 Jul 2012 06:56 PM
to go further into the laughing thing like once I saw or well heard Lil Twist making jokes then pointing out it was a joke in a song...he said "ha on that last dumb dumbo...ha..i crack jokes cuz i can"
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 06:59 PM
Umm ok thx for informing me
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ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is not online. ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX
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07 Jul 2012 07:00 PM
*holds book in hand and looks for more to say*..I..i wasn't done yet....I'm not weird or anything...don't...don't run away
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 07:01 PM
Lol your a MTer that doesn't completely suck
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epicmoose1 is not online. epicmoose1
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07 Jul 2012 07:02 PM
Nice
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 07:03 PM
Thx
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
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07 Jul 2012 07:15 PM
You want my true opinion?

Oh please. The only "Lies" on this thread are the people who say this song is good.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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07 Jul 2012 07:25 PM
WOW that really sucks
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jaylenjohnson2 is not online. jaylenjohnson2
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07 Jul 2012 11:28 PM
No. This song is actually pretty good. I ain't lying :|
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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08 Jul 2012 12:10 AM
@Stella what don't you like about it?
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lila47 is not online. lila47
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08 Jul 2012 01:59 AM
I liked the point ur trying to get out and the originality of the song but it needs some editing.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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08 Jul 2012 02:48 AM
If you say so
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