kiddy1278
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| 05 Jul 2012 04:23 AM |
Darkness surrounds me. Evaporation of life. Dark clouds of below. |
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Haterdude
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| 05 Jul 2012 11:18 AM |
the beginning of the end begins at birth breeding masses of twisted screaming flesh and example we should make out to the creators of misfortune a serious crime that should not be forgiven
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kiddy1278
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| 06 Jul 2012 01:31 PM |
| The syllable pattern is 5 > 7 > 5. |
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Haterdude
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| 06 Jul 2012 01:52 PM |
i like ham and cheese i do so as a please cuz i like ham and cheese |
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AusRotten
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| 06 Jul 2012 01:55 PM |
Sticking to the theme of death;
Death is very bad People die and we get sad Death is very bad
Do I get points for it rhyming? |
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kiddy1278
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| 07 Jul 2012 03:27 PM |
| Rhyming doesn't effect Haikus; in fact most don't rhyme. |
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| 07 Jul 2012 04:10 PM |
Cold, unresponsive, emotionless, fading away White lights fluttering peacefully by my eyes Enclosed by darkness, now free |
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kiddy1278
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| 07 Jul 2012 04:57 PM |
| Should I put this as a Fourm Game? |
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| 07 Jul 2012 05:03 PM |
blinded, beaten, pure all around me and through you third eye stapled shut
101/101
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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