Renz270
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| 23 Jun 2012 03:54 AM |
I was bored so I put together a few words. It's 4 in the morning and I'm not sleepy, so here ya go. :)
By the way, some feedback is appreciated.
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As Second Degree member Steve started to regain consciousness, he could hear yelling and gunfire scattered all over the place.
Mysterious Man: Wake up, Steve.
Steve tried to wake up, but just couldn’t. The heavy blows from the interrogation really shook him up.
Mysterious Man: Steve, I said WAKE UP!
The Mysterious Man gave Steve a hard slap across the face, and Steve’s eyes flickered open. Steve looked around to see he was in a large room, slumped on a metal wall, a familiar figure towering over him. That familiar figure (AKA Mysterious Man) was WannaBet, the commander of the glorious Reign of Chaos and the great Roblox Intelligence.
WannaBet: Renz, give me a hand over here!
Renz: You got it, sir!
Renz rushed over to Steve’s aid. WannaBet and Renz had helped Steve up, ready to evacuate John’s Cobras well known Fort Fang.
Unfortunately, they were too late in their rescue attempt. JC troops had managed to trap the RoC and RI in the interrogation room. As the injured RoC and RI soldiers were executed right in front of WannaBet’s eyes, many more JC troops started filing in the room, in a very curvy, disorganized line. All the JC pointed their guns at the remaining 3 intruders, forcing WannaBet and Renz to put Steve down and put their hands up.
Renz: (In a whisper) WannaBet, their line looks like a Ramen noodle…
A JC Sergeant spat at him and started yelling.
JC Sergeant: Shut up you incompetent fool! JC is MUCH better than RoC you little maggot! You think you can just call our li-…
Mysterious Voice: SILENCE.
The JC Sergeant suddenly stopped speaking and stood up straight. The disorganized JC line made a small path so the person who commanded the Sergeant could walk through. It appeared to be one of JC’s Colonels, Dudiebum. As JC Colonel Dudiebum slowly walked through the small path the soldiers made for him, he heard whispers saying, “I think we deserve a promotion, don’t you think?” and others saying “Oh yeah, we’re definitely going to get a promotion today!” Dudie ignored those fools and stopped in front of the Sergeant, staring at the intruders.
Dudie: Well, well, what do we have here?
Sergeant: We’ve got intruders, sir! From RoC and RI, sir! I think we got them surrounded, sir!
Dudie: I can see that, Sergeant.
Dudie pauses and thinks for a moment, “How the hell did this guy get to Sergeant…” He then turned back to the intruders.
Dudie: The Emperor is going to be very pleased to see you and your little friends, WannaBet. Sergeant, toss them in the Brig.
Sergeant: Sir yes sir!
Dudie motioned for a Private to come over to him. Dudie whispered to the private with a smile.
Dudie: Patch through to the Emperor. Tell him I have a surprise for him.
Private: Right away, sir.
[TO BE CONTINUED]
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Well, it will be continued if people liked this little tidbit. Thanks for reading and remember, feedback is appreciated! |
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perry4231
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| 23 Jun 2012 04:11 AM |
| Cool story bro... really this is cool. XD |
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Renz270
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Renz270
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| 23 Jun 2012 04:13 AM |
I thought RoC was dead...
- COS |
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tibiscus
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Renz270
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| 23 Jun 2012 04:16 AM |
"I thought RoC was dead..."
You thought wrong. But out of curiosity, what made you think we were dead? Just because xThuuMX left? |
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dans59
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Renz270
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LosDorito
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| 23 Jun 2012 06:47 AM |
| Mr thunder y am i nawt in this |
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| 23 Jun 2012 08:15 AM |
| Then Steve realized he was a block and started freaking out. |
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| 23 Jun 2012 08:31 AM |
| dude this story is way to long good but the plot is all blurry. |
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StopTime
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| 23 Jun 2012 08:45 AM |
| http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=623870 |
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| 23 Jun 2012 08:53 AM |
| Why am I not in this, Mr. Thunder D: |
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Rami8
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| 23 Jun 2012 09:08 AM |
| It a pretty good story. I have one teeny tiny question... How do you make a forum post. |
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josefst
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| 23 Jun 2012 01:17 PM |
| Put known RI in the next story (like me c:) to come save you and beat psp's as c: |
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Renz270
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| 23 Jun 2012 03:18 PM |
| This will be a pretty long story, so yeah a lot of you will be included :c |
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fruz
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| 23 Jun 2012 04:47 PM |
| I liked the story so far all it says is that I'm dead :P and that WB smacked me lol. Then it tells the whole truth about how JC is run or how they set up and such. Very true story renz good job :D |
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Renz270
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Trypt
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Outlaw001
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