fudsim
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| 28 Jun 2012 02:14 PM |
Chapter 1--- http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=69207686 Chapter 2--- http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=69375533 Chapter 3--- http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=69606694
Date: 13/04/2012 Time: 6am Location: Fort Lumsden
With no sign of Fudsim for a few months now BAM was feeling worried, very worried. Techempires was looking very calm about it as everyone else was very frightened, as Tech new that Fudsim was near, he just knew that he was closer than he thought. Fudsim was a great friend to all of BAM, they were still think why they forgot him. Super in his wheelchair couldn't do a thing to look for Fudsim because of his back.
Time: 9pm
It was getting late so General Techempires called them all in for a meeting about Fudsim's absence. Rhinoroar still knew he was out there, his friend that he never will give up on, he decided BAM should go out looking again after all those tries he thinks he will find him this time. BAM agreed and left Lumsden as a team, they set looking around the place they went back to CC base to see If he was there but he was not there.
Date: 14/04/2012 Time: 2am
Meanwhile at Fort Vulcan Fudsim was defending the base from raiders with Vortex Security with his friend Adpunk, Fudsim stops and looks into the sky. Not concentrating on the battle he gets hit by a knife to the side of the head, but lucky he quickly turned around looked at the raider and realized he was in BAM uniform. The BAM solder called Fudoom said "It’s you ITS FINALLY YOU!". Fudsim took out some sharp blades and stabbed him into the heart killing fudoom on the spot. Fudsim knew that he killed a fellow BAM member and quite Vortex, when he went to go back to BAM area's he fell into a sewer and lay unconscious.
Time 2:47am
As the sunlight went down and the moonlight went up Tech and Rhino were sitting down in the tent together as the BAM were tired of walking. Rhino looking for where Fudsim could be as tech tried to sleep, he said " Rhino we will find him, don't worry", just at that moment everyone heard noise, BAM took out there guns and knew something was up. All of BAM went outside looking for the person who shot the bullet; cyber heard noise as someone was moving behind the threes, all of BAM stayed together hoping for the best.
Time 2:50am
Techempires said "Scout out and find the problem", out of nowhere tech got shot in the leg, going down in pain, so much pain it was horrible wound to look at. Tech looked around and cried "HELP" but no one was there they didn't see the get shot and left off without him, luckily for tech Lieutenant Hardstylezack was still in his tent in a deep sleep but suddenly woke up and saw tech dead on the ground. Hard gave tech CPR and mouth to mouth for ages and ages trying to help his friend, suddenly he heard a breath noise, He was breathing finally breathing again. Hard looked for a health pack in his health bag, he found a health pack and gave it to tech, and hard covered up his wound, that was bleeding so hard he was low on blood.
Time 3:21am
Meanwhile in the sewers Fudsim was having a dream of BAM a dream of his friends, they were in trouble they needed his help, he must go out and find them he shall, Fudsim quickly woke up and told Adpunk to help him one last time being a great friends Adpunk said "yes".
Time 4am
When they get there they hide behind a big rock and see JC and CC on the same side. Fudsim gets out a sniper shoots a JC high rank, meanwhile at the tents hard put tech to sleep while rhino and cyber spotted something. Adpunk through a smoke grenade in while Fudsim and Adpunk runs through the smoke to help their fellow BAM members, Rhino Shouts for joy and gives Fudsim a big hug not letting him go.
Time 4:20am
Adpunk calls more VS in to get rid of those noobs. About 2 seconds later over 500 VS members come from the sky as if they were from heaven’s they fight all the JC and CC off they leave one left to set a warning for more JC and CC. Couple of minutes later over a thousand JC and CC show up to attach VS. Couple of minutes later over a thousand JC and CC show up to attack VS.
Time 4:30am
Meanwhile at the tents, tech and hard are all fine getting up to find the BAM members, Hard has a detector for the BAM people but not for Fudsim. As the BAM members set out to look for Fudsim even more they notice that there general is gone. Looking everywhere they spot loads of robloxians behind trees. They go through the trees to find tons and tons of JC attacking VS also seeing Fudsim, but the way to get to him looks impossible. Just after that Techempires and hard showed up and were shocked to see the surprise.
Time 9pm
Battling all through the morning and day It all comes down with Fudsim v legostarwars leader of CC and Pspjohn leader of JC in a old fashioned sword fight surrounded in silence VS, BAM, JC, CC all covered in cuts . BAM attacked as well as Fudsim and VS attacked, those two noobish groups (JC and CC) killing them all and leaving only the owners left, Lego does first slice but misses.
Time 9:23pm
They are both battling it out with BAM and VS cheering Fudsim on. Until Fudsim gets a hit to the side of the head and falls to the ground, BAM shout "GET UP NOW AND U'LL NEVER REGREAT IT!!!” Fudsim gets back up with 2 broken ribs and a black eye. As Fudsim takes the last shot of the day he smashes Pspjohn face making a overload in his circuits. LT Kirarchie runs into the middle of the circle and shouts "Fudsim the greatest boxer in this world!"
Time 9: 32pm
As they all are shouting Fudsim’s name he faints because the loss of so much blood. They take the bravest soldier to the BA hostbital while every haves a party on the greatest victory ever in the hostbital.
-Thank you for reading- -Reported by Colonel Fudsim and Captain Rhinoroar-
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kitarchie
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rhinoroar
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| 28 Jun 2012 02:48 PM |
| Jamie you don't know you might be in chapter 5. |
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Lissitski
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| 28 Jun 2012 02:49 PM |
A timeline, not story.
Good, though. |
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fudsim
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| 28 Jun 2012 02:51 PM |
| Jamie most BAM people are background types in some of the story's |
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| 28 Jun 2012 05:02 PM |
| I cant wait,I Might be In it.I like snipers or assault :D |
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| 29 Jun 2012 01:33 AM |
| loving it next time put my name Zack |
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:28 AM |
| Fud you said i'll be in it )': |
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fudsim
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| 02 Jul 2012 10:59 AM |
Greatest Bloxxer is Telamon derp.
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