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| 29 Jun 2012 10:26 AM |
The boards creaked underneath Samantha and Joel's feet. "W-where are we?" asked Samantha as she peered around the dimly lit room. "I don't know!" said Joel, standing upright, "but we have to find a way out." What they have experienced this warm June night sounded like something that came out of a horror movie. Except you don't all come out alive, and the ending is never predicted. "We have to escape, we must," said Samantha as she got up to help find a exit. The walls and floor were illuminated just enough for them to see wooden planks that appeared to be new. On one of the sides lay a window, covered in dust. Samantha tried to unfasten the window while Joel tried to loosen the planks. Both efforts appeared futile. As they sat back down they looked more closely at the walls. There appeared to be a rack of tools in the corner of the room. "Okay, I'll try to find something to break the window." said Joel, "While I'm doing that, can you try to see out of the window so we can get an idea where we are?" Samantha dusted the window but on the other side was forest. "Joel, you need to take a look at this." When Joel peered threw the window you could see fear in his eyes. "Okay, we got to work really fast now. Help me find something sharp." Samantha noticed the fear in his voice and sprung to work right away. "Hose?" "No" "Weed whacker?" "No" "Hammer?" "No. Wait! Yes." As Joel grabbed the hammer out of her hands he went to work trying to break the window open. It didn't budge. After a few more rounds of hitting it finally broke, creating the warm, moist air of the jungle to surface inside the room. Brushing off the leftover glass, he tried to climb through the window frame, except his body was too big for such a window. "Okay, we have to jump through it." Joel said, backing up and then diving through the frame. "Your turn, Sam." he called. "Aeeeiii!" she screamed as she, too, hurtled through the frame. "The others. They died from their fears." said Joel. James died from sharks. Suzie from clowns." said Samantha.
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:28 AM |
Bump. Sorry if it's long. :L
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:31 AM |
I'm going to keep bumping. :P
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:34 AM |
Noone read it. :/
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:36 AM |
25 views. No replies besides me talking to myself..
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:38 AM |
I guess I just wasted 30 minutes writing for nothing. :(
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:39 AM |
I disagree with the title 100%
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:39 AM |
Last sentence of Creepypasta wasn't meant to be there. That was the start to Pt.2
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:40 AM |
I still disagree 100%.
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:41 AM |
@Camdis,
Great to know your opinion on the title even though that's not the point of the thread. The point of the thread is to read the story and to give feedback.
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:43 AM |
| How much of my 10 tix do you want from me!? |
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:46 AM |
Okay. There's no Pt2.
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:47 AM |
| Read it on Creepy Pasta Wiki |
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:49 AM |
@super,
Original. But I guess I can't write creepypastas. :l
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| 29 Jun 2012 10:50 AM |
>Read it on Creepy Pasta Wiki
No way. |
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