Netweb
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| 24 Jun 2012 12:52 AM |
This is my first thread...
November 1, 2368 John and Jeb stood in the hospital room. The stared at the syringes. "You sure about this?" Jeb whispered. "Its for the good of the upcoming war," John whispered back. Jeb sighed and picked up a syringe. He walked up to the woman in labor, and put the needle in her side. He injected it. The woman was asleep, so he didn't have to explain his lie. John picked up the rest of the syringes and went to the next room.
December 25, 2368 John looked at the angered parents. "IM SORRY YOUR KID WILL DIE!" He shouted. The parents started yelling things. John rubbed his temples. "We are donating your children's organs," He lied. The parents continued to argue, so John lost his last straw. He shot each parent in the head.
August 21, 2391 Jeb overlooked his creations. He looked through the glass above the door that leads to the hallway, where the torture chamber, auction room, dorms, lab, cells, and the lunchroom is. The courtyard he was overlooking had a meadow full of flowers, trees, and a pond. There was a playground and some courts for basketball, baseball, volleyball, and soccer. Along with training obstacles and climbing walls. This place was beautiful. It looked fun, and the specimen could practice their special abilities. If only they were made for enhancedness instead of weapons in WWVI. There is only one escape, however, its in the auction room. A heavily secured code door. —————— You are a mutant. Pick 1 of these (Admins pick 2)
Summoner and Shapeshifter- Can summon or shapeshift anything. Even objects. You are strong and useful.
Brain- You can do anything that has to do the brain. Telekinesis, telepathy, mind-reading, mind-controlling, etc. You also know basically everything. You are great in tough situations and are useful.
Air and runner- You can run over 600mph, and you control the wind. Tornadoes or a slight dry off. You are strong and athletic.
Fire and lightning- You control the flame and the bolt! You can shoot fire from any part of your body, and shoot lightning from your fingers. You are strong and short- tempered.
Water and life- You control water and plant life. You are a spirited and strong being.
Gasbreather and strength- Can breathe in no air or poisoned air or any gas. You can also summon gas of any kind. Also, you are super strong. Stronger than anything else. —————— Special abilities (pick 2. Admins pick 3)
Force- Can heal or make forcefields
Steelskin- Skin can turn into indestructible steel
Lasereyes- Eyes can turn into lasers that can bore into anything
Tech- Can fix anything or build anything from very little parts.
Spider- can shoot webs or climb really fast
Beast- Can turn into a strong monster when angry
Invisibility- Can turn invisible
Whisperer- Can talk with animals —————— CS Name: A.ge(8-17): Gender: ID(Solution number): Personality: Appearance: ID number printed on back, black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots, Other:
RULES - Don't change anything in the CS - you can make at most 3 characters - No Godmodding - No killing or controlling PC characters - no trolling - listen to the admins - don't change the subject - Only Admins can have the ability of Brain |
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Netweb
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| 24 Jun 2012 12:56 AM |
Name: Max A.ge: 17 Gender: Female ID: 6718 Personality: Calm and fast to act. Always follows directions and help others Appearance: ID number printed on back, black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots, brown long slightly waved hair, shiny blue eyes, and is about 6ft tall Other: Powers- Brain, Air and runner abilities- Force, Tech, spider |
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:14 AM |
| Do you even know how much 600mph freaking is? That would pretty much ruin your entire body and your feet, it wouldn't be useful. Every other power is OP as hell. |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:27 AM |
(@bebithetuffle, it's their first RP just relax a little. You can give opinions more constructive then that, and of you can't then you shouldn't be giving your opinion out) (@Netweb, for your first RP I think this is very good. Although the over all idea is a bit over used, and the plot is very loose. And to add to that some of the best RPs I've been in had losse plots, so that may not be a bad think. Bebithetuffle is right about running 600mph though, 10mph for an average person (not talking about runners and sprinter here) is pretty fast. The last thing I saw was that the abilitys seemed to restricted like you couldn't make your own you have to have specifics, but I only don't like it because I like the freedom of creating something no one else would have thought of. So really this is only a complaint on my part because I like creativity. Over all for your first RP I think you did as well as I did.) |
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Netweb
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:29 AM |
| (I didn't mean to put 600mph... I actually meant to put 100... and the people are mutants so it wouldn't affect them...) |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:41 AM |
CS Name: Ryuu Marini A.ge(8-17): 09 Gender: F ID(Solution number): 0973 Personality: She is very quiet and withdrawn, she wants nothing to do with others bussness because she is naturally caring and emotional. Ryuu doesn't like to show emotion (even though it's extremely hard not to) so she always has her 'poker face' on. Appearance: ID number printed on back, black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots.Ryuu is 4'1" tall and extremely skinny, sickly skinny. Her skin isn't to pale, but because of her jet black hair it makes her look very pale. Ryuu has straight stringy jet black hair that is in two inside braids that flow to the middle of her back, she also has long bangs that cover most of her face. Her eyes are very round and a dark dark brown, she has bags under her eyes making her look tired no matter what. She has a small mousy nose and thin lips. Other: *Stuff that I would normal out in the other box, but don't because for once I have nothing to put* |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:43 AM |
(Oops... Power: Water and Life Abilitys: Healing and Invisibility.) |
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Netweb
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:56 AM |
| Thanks. Acceptud. Admined...(oh and I made another rp ^_^ I think its unique.... but it still may be loose and undescriptive) |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:58 AM |
| (I would love to see you're other RP, and I'm guessing we're going to wait for other people to join?) |
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Netweb
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| 24 Jun 2012 01:59 AM |
(Its called Knights of the round table)
(And idk, start rping whenever you want... I don't care how many people there are...) |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:15 AM |
| (I'm not sure how I should start.) |
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:19 AM |
(Hmm, I will randomly start and you can work off that I guess)
Max
I wake up in the cell. What the.. howd I get here? I touch the cell door and it opens. Oo. I raise my hand and all of a sudden a web shoots out and I rocket across the room. AHH! Cool... am I like spider-girl? I hop off the wall and I run out the door going 50mph. Sweet. I pad out to the courtyard and look around. woahh.. |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:23 AM |
(Now that is what I'd call Godmodding, whatever, your RP) ~Ryuu
Sleepily my eyes open, and I start to side up sitting more. A slight inhale and a a looms wound the room, I had to rub my eyes. |
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:32 AM |
( I dun call it godmodding.... I call saying: I wield my sword across your neck- no miss- and instantly kill you)
Max
I got a hang of my abilities. Yay. |
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kenzieroo
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:39 AM |
~Ryuu
Slowly I stood up, stretching mt legs out. Then walking to slightly outside the cage, liking around. I didn't know what I was looking for, but I was looking. |
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| 25 Jun 2012 10:56 PM |
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Name: Johnathan (No last name) A.ge:16 Gender: Male ID number:4561 Personality: Calm, even in life and death situations Appearance: ID number on back,black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots, leaf green eyes, longish brown hair, and a normal build and height. Other: N/A Power:summoner/shapeshifter Special abilities:whisperer, and invisibility |
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| 25 Jun 2012 11:04 PM |
Johnathan
I woke up in a strange sort of... cage? I looked around and I saw that nobody even bothered to put a dang door in the cage! I looked around trying to find my way out when I hear a small voice, it turned out to be a rat, wait, I can understand a rat? That is a little weird, I strike up a conversation with it, which led to me finding out im at some reasearch facility or something, and that I am apparently a mutant of some kind.Maybe that is why there was doors on the other cages and not mine, but what power do I have that can get me out of a cage? I think back to that rat, I started thinking so hard that suddenly I was small, with fur. I think I am the rat now, so I slip between the bars and go outside to a strange courtyard in a human shape again, wait, am I human? Well that was what I was when I woke up, I look around |
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| 25 Jun 2012 11:05 PM |
| (I hope I am accepted because otherwise I just made a big fool of myself) |
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| 25 Jun 2012 11:36 PM |
~Ryuu
'Where am I?' I think to myself. |
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| 25 Jun 2012 11:44 PM |
N.ame:Jack A.ge:15 Gender:Male ID:9142 Personality:Friendly, social, not easily intimidated Appearance:ID number printed on back, black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots, medium-length messy black hair, brown eyes, 5 feet and 7 inches tall Power: Gasbreathing/Strength Special abilities:Beast, Steelskin |
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| 26 Jun 2012 01:20 AM |
Name: Kinling Jameson A.ge(8-17): 16 Gender:M ID(Solution number):5019 Personality: Will not speak to people he does not know. Not shy, just refuses to speak. Will jump in to help somebody if they need it and only if he can offer help for them. Generally shows no emotion. Appearance: ID number printed on back, black pants, black police vest with no words, black undershirt, black boots, Black hair that shags in his eyes, ocean blue eyes, pale skin Other: N/A
(Crap, just realized I'm on an alt... I'll be back as billy1990) (Not sure if i missed anything. I just assumed that I'd put the way I'd look along with the clothing given. Tell me if anything is wrong.) |
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| 26 Jun 2012 01:22 AM |
Special Abilities - Invisibility/Whisperer Power - Fire and Lightning
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