LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:16 PM |
[Charectors]
TDFall
Atrixeagle1
Rathalos24
milkandquackers
MetFan2009
LordForge
SwordMaker
Story:
UCR was being raided by FEAR when out of no where one of the UCR members comes out with a UCR heli. There were about 30 UCR and about 35 FEAR. We were going into defense mode when there came a FEAR pilot. Him and UCR pilot were fighting in the air while all of us on land were protecting the flag from FEAR. Then comes TDFall with his minigun all around, he killed all the raiders but only one left and he was SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX he had a minigun as well. They starred at each other with narrowed eyes then both of there fingers hit the trigger. They both flew back because of the impact of the mini gun. They both hit the wall injured. They pulled out there sword closely and ran at each other.
When they ran at each other every raider and UCR ran in front of them and started battling in front of them but no one knew they were going to fight. After everyone started fighting there was some unusual about one UCR member Atrixeagle. He was standing in the corner with a sword out sleeping. He was suppost to be guarding, he didint warn us that they were here. TD ran up to him and woke him up with a thump on the head. TD said they can talk about what happened another time. Atrix quickly got into the war of massive troops tumbling each other. Finally after destruction was made all raiders died and went back to the raiders side. While they were coming MetsFan2009 said in team chat '(TEAM)Make a defense like around the flag guard it with your life' we all made a wall with stacking of people everywhere. The raiders starting coming in, in the distance was SONIC with a SCAR L aiming at TD, TD took out his SCAR L and aimed at him. They both started shooting and they both took cover.
TD and SONIC were going back and forth. Then SONIC secretly got a member to go for TD. Lord saw him and took out his linked sword. He pretended he was going for someone else but then Lord struck SONIC's member on the chest. He broke into peaces, then TD jumped out of cover ran towards SONIC and stabbed him. SONIC died and his members were still struggling to get through the defense line. TD and SwordMaker were planning to attack SONIC's troops from behind. They came out from behind the building and started towards the FEAR troops they tried not to get noticed. SwordMaker gave the sign to TD to attack. They both attacked from different angles. But TD forgot one thing, they were receiving more backup. TD looked back and heard swords come out. SwordMaker winked at TD and they both struck them hard. They took out every single one of them before FEAR soldiers can touch them. TD and SwordMaker were busy fighting more troops, the UCR members were fighting off the rest, milkandquakers was a UCR member for awhile. He knew what to do in case of these things. Milk came out of know where and struck one of SONIC's body guard. But SONIC wasint going to let his body guard down like that. SONIC grabbed his linked sword and struck milk. Milk died instantly because of the damage other FEAR members did to him. Then Rathalos24 saw his partner die and was mad at SONIC, he grabbed his SCAR L and shot SONIC, SONIC died because of the damage Milk did to him before. Rath was trying to wait for Milk but Milk lost connection. Rath got back to the fight, FEAR was about to take the flag.
UCR still had the flag. After 30 minutes of fighting UCR still had the flag. They ended the war there because of FEAR not being close to getting the flag. They all GG'ed and UCR celebrated at Fort Orion. UCR agreed that FEAR had nice defense.
Then end of part 1
Yes this is a fiction story.
~Battle Crys~
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:20 PM |
Few grammatical and spelling errors.
But, all in all, good story. |
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LordForge
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victor205
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:25 PM |
I'm not in there. die. jk. Good story. lol |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:26 PM |
| Because you didint PM me i put it on the wall. |
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:35 PM |
yay u get cookie
EerieTheory says: Joey, you need a better acc code |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:36 PM |
@Lord
Read this http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=70678619 |
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gio0123
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:37 PM |
| If its a story cool story. |
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LordForge
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 06:48 PM |
PM me if you want a story made.
~Battle Crys~ |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:02 PM |
I need to know what's missing.
~Battle Crys~ |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:09 PM |
Cool. UCR member sorry if your not in it.
~Battle Crys~ |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:12 PM |
Oh and JOIN UCR!
~Battle Crys~ |
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jacob675
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:50 PM |
This is approved by me,bruce lee,and chuck norris!
GOOD SHOW! |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:55 PM |
| You know, if anyone knows Age of Empires, this story remibds me of a small campaign i built, it's fictional yet has some history to it, it covers stuf like the FEAR wars, X101st wars, and the vakkie war, acually needed 2 parts for that. I'm only saying this cause the story really brought it up. |
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Trypt
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:56 PM |
| Characters?? U spelt characters wrong |
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LordForge
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| 24 Jun 2012 07:59 PM |
| @Typ i know it was like 3am and i really wanted to get started on the story. |
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