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| 23 Jun 2012 11:34 AM |
There is a murderer of the mayor in Seattle, WA. You must either find out whodunit, or run away from the cops. The cops are smart, while the crooks are dumb.
No godmoding, ROBLOX rules No cussing No bullying
CS: Nam.e Ida Nowe A.ge: 18-40 Gender: M or F Side:Crooks or Cops Bio: optional Appearance:
Mine: Nam.e: Wendy Hare A.ge 31 Ge.nder F Side: Cops Bio: I am head cop. Appearance: wears cop uniform |
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| 23 Jun 2012 11:35 AM |
| Ps. I will add on to the plot when needed |
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| 24 Jun 2012 12:25 PM |
Must I say, you have a plot...going. But you need more of a story...More description. Add to it, don't just give them a command.
What you posted was an objective . . . You need a story. |
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:14 PM |
Plot
You just heard that your bff, the mayor of Seattle, was murdered. Luckily, you are a cop. You can seek revenge. And that is what you do. (For police)
You and your gang just killed your worst enemy. The mayor of Seattle. Now, you run as fast as you can from the police. You end up in Portland, Oregon. (For crooks) |
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| 24 Jun 2012 02:54 PM |
You could try making the plot a bit better, This is an idea of how the cops plot could go:
You have just gotten word the mayor of seattle has been killed. As a cop it is your job to find who did it, and put them behind bars.
I'm just trying to help.
~Hollyflower |
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| 25 Jun 2012 12:43 PM |
| Good idea that is also part of the plot. |
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| 18 Jul 2012 06:52 PM |
I am nefertiti33 also. I have multiple accounts.
Johanna Senatera I am the dead mayor.
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