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Re: Law and Order

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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
Joined: 08 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 83
23 Jun 2012 11:34 AM
There is a murderer of the mayor in Seattle, WA. You must either find out whodunit, or run away from the cops. The cops are smart, while the crooks are dumb.


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Nam.e Ida Nowe
A.ge: 18-40
Gender: M or F
Side:Crooks or Cops
Bio: optional
Appearance:


Mine:
Nam.e: Wendy Hare
A.ge 31
Ge.nder F
Side: Cops
Bio: I am head cop.
Appearance: wears cop uniform
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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
Joined: 08 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 83
23 Jun 2012 11:35 AM
Ps. I will add on to the plot when needed
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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
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24 Jun 2012 12:01 PM
Bump?
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CrabbyMars is not online. CrabbyMars
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24 Jun 2012 12:25 PM
Must I say, you have a plot...going. But you need more of a story...More description. Add to it, don't just give them a command.

What you posted was an objective . . . You need a story.
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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
Joined: 08 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 83
24 Jun 2012 02:14 PM
Plot

You just heard that your bff, the mayor of Seattle, was murdered. Luckily, you are a cop. You can seek revenge. And that is what you do.
(For police)

You and your gang just killed your worst enemy. The mayor of Seattle. Now, you run as fast as you can from the police. You end up in Portland, Oregon.
(For crooks)
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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
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24 Jun 2012 02:25 PM
Bump
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hollyflower93 is not online. hollyflower93
Joined: 24 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 991
24 Jun 2012 02:54 PM
You could try making the plot a bit better, This is an idea of how the cops plot could go:

You have just gotten word the mayor of seattle has been killed. As a cop it is your job to find who did it, and put them behind bars.

I'm just trying to help.

~Hollyflower
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nefertiti33 is not online. nefertiti33
Joined: 08 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 83
25 Jun 2012 12:43 PM
Good idea that is also part of the plot.
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nefertiti37 is not online. nefertiti37
Joined: 21 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 117
18 Jul 2012 06:52 PM
I am nefertiti33 also. I have multiple accounts.

Johanna Senatera
I am the dead mayor.



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