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| 23 Jun 2012 08:13 PM |
~Opening~ Jack: Hello, I am the Vampire Hunter what happened? It was a cursed past. Jack's Dad: (Sword Clashes with Nightfall) I am a Vampire Hunter! I will make sure my son follows my footsteps! Nightfall: He will fail' *Stabs him*. Jack's Dad: AGH... Jack: Dad? Are you alive? Jacks Dad: I...just want you to know this you will take over my job now! Jack: Ok, where did that evil guy go? Jacks Dad:*Dies*. Jack: NO! DAD! Jack: That was my story *Loads Crossbow*. ~Episode 1 Welcome to the kingdom~ Jack: *Is shown riding on Horseback* *Burns his arrow* I guess now this is time for Agony to meet chaos. Vampire: DIE NOW *Jumps on the horse*. Jack: Burn where Satan lives! *Shoots with Arrow* Vampire: Agh! Jack: Alright next might just be more trouble. Nightfall: Might be *Snaps fingers*. Vampires: BRIGADE ATTACK! Jack: *Jumps off of horse* I will show you 4! This time I will get you 4. *Strikes the 1st Vampire*. Vampire #1: Agh I cannot have anymore use to this *tries to escape Jack's wrath*. Jack: Where are you going? *cuts open Vampire with Bow and arrow arrow*. Vampire #4: Ahh I don't wanna die! *Sprints*. Jack: Chicken. Vampire 2: *Tries to strike Jack*. Jack: Good luck fool *pulls out sword*. (Sword Clash). Vampire 2: I will try a Sparrow attack! Jack: Pathetic attack *teleports*. Vampire 2: Where did he go? Jack: *Slices Vampire 2 in Half*. Vampire 3: *Sprints with Vampire 4* WAIT UP! Jack: Wonder what's under this fog. (The fog reveals a Kingdom). Jack: Huh? Julie: Hello,I am Julie of the Vampire kingdom. Jack: Well hello Julie what happened to this Kingdom? Julie: We made it, did you read the sign? Jack: No. Alchemist: Hello I am Johnson,the alchemist of the Kingdom but just call me the Alch. Jack: Alright the Alch. Nightfall: Just wait until Jack sees his most brutalist enemy,Koorva from the First court of Nightfall. ~To be continued~
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| 23 Jun 2012 08:34 PM |
Ugh. This is not a story.
USE PROPER WRITING.
Not this :
Bob : I threw my ball across the room.
THIS :
Bob quickly threw the bright blue ball across the room. |
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