FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:44 AM |
It was a dark and stormy day.... Jared was sitting on his couch eating chips becoming fatter. UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate this comercial! Gieco can save you BIG money. *throws watter bottle* Bounces back his Jared OUCH! I wonder what kind of news is on the internet... Hey theres this new game I can hack and become famous on.... 100 copys agh cant make more copied games! Gets 5 million visits AH BANNED AGAIN! Creates new account what they don't know is about my plan TO delete all admins MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
To be continued.... |
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FancyBoi
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:47 AM |
| Just f5 this and ill reply again probably! |
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:47 AM |
Fail.
~Breathing is too mainstream. |
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LunarEden
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:47 AM |
Um...
I suggest learning some composition techniques to make your stories semi-adequate. |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:48 AM |
| I was rushing sorry guys no time for grammar.... |
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:48 AM |
WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!!11111!!11
There was no TV Show!! It was p()rn!!!1111 |
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:49 AM |
| Too fast you skipped like a whole year. |
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FancyBoi
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:51 AM |
| Wow this is gaining views like crazy! |
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LeafTalon
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:53 AM |
Uh, Your story-making skills aren't above average I have to say. |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:53 AM |
| Hey imaginary friend what are we going to do today? I know lets hack 1dev2! Ok I deleted his game and stole it I got him deleted we done for the day? Imaginary gf comes in who wants pie? |
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LunarEden
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:54 AM |
Nobody hacked 1dev2.
That's just ignorant people trying to make things to complain about. |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 12:54 AM |
| If you didn't know kind of based from a kids TV show Phineous and Ferb! |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:00 AM |
| Hey pillow guess what! I just posted a forum! HEHEHEHEHEHEH 500 post later 500 of them are hates! HEY one of them is from you pillow hey another one is from my mom! Hey even I posted a hate comment on my forum and it's about me! |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:03 AM |
| *Watches Desprate Housewives* UGH THERES THATS STUPID GIECO COMMERCIAL! IT MAKES ME MAD! SO MAD I AM GOING TO STEAL ANOTHER GAME! *Goes to TheGamer101's profile!* 5 minutes later... Ok I stole his Sword Fighting MiniGames! |
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:04 AM |
| I will criticize this to help you out here. Your story lacked most of the details on how jared would have discovered this website, and there were multiple grammatical error's in the sentence, but aside from that, it was an "OK" story, you just need to lengthen it a bit more, and ad more detail, you know, for it to be more relateable to other user's, thus giving you more of an edge, and more experience, for your future endeavor's. |
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:04 AM |
Genius.
Now here's what the staff do: To make a trade for robux or tix they shread arms of newbies. What they do to people who acctually make good games: when they buy items it goes to free modelers for their daily pay. Here' what they do with older ROBLOXians: They lie about them saying such things as in the older ROBLOXians are just making these things up. |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:07 AM |
| I don't have much grammar sorry guys! I barely passed reading/language arts! I try to do my best! |
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FancyBoi
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:09 AM |
| Hey guys about to get my 200th post wish me luck :)! |
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| 22 Jun 2012 01:09 AM |
Catch mai storeeh yeet? betta hove |
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FancyBoi
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rapper500
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| 22 Jun 2012 03:09 AM |
Jared's a girl you know
~~Drem yol lok, zu'u aan dovah~~ |
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