Zezzi
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:12 PM |
You are a experiment. You start off in a lab, where they treat you like real kids. Nice. However, you didn't know till now that you are underground. There is a war above you and you were created to be part of that war. The countries buy and sell you off. Not cool, right? You are just a weapon, a item. Not a life form to the people. Every day another experiment is bid off and sent away. What are you going to do about it...
Rules No god modding No being to immortal You can die Limited romance Listen to admins Creativity is required
CS Name: Gender: A.ge(10-18): Powers: Abilities: Appearance: Other:
-Be creative!!!!!!!!!! RAWR- |
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Zezzi
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:29 PM |
Name: Dove Gender: Female A.ge: 16 Powers: Telepathy, telekinisis, mind-reading, steel-skin Abilities: Running really fast, turning into steel,mind-reading, controlling objects with mind, talking into ones mind with own mind Appearance: Pale skin, sweater, jeans, brown hair, golden eyes Other: [N/A] |
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Riku1257
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:34 PM |
| There already is an RP about mutants, with the exact same name no less. |
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Zezzi
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:34 PM |
| Ok, well, maybe I DIDN'T SEE It. |
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Zezzi
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:35 PM |
| Well this isn't the same as any other. Why? Because I made it up. |
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Riku1257
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:37 PM |
| :T No need to get offended, I wasn't saying you copied it, I was just pointing out something. |
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Zezzi
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| 18 Jun 2012 06:38 PM |
| :/ ok sorry. It's just that people are all like, "IT HAS THE SAME NAME! WORTHLESS!" |
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| 18 Jun 2012 11:47 PM |
Na.me Hannah Rade Gender:F A.ge:16 Powers: I am super smart Abilities: can see things at a far distance Appearance: Tall, thin, and skinny |
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0Z0NE
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Zezzi
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Zezzi
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Zezzi
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| 19 Jun 2012 06:16 PM |
| Start whenever you want ^_,^ |
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meno44
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Zezzi
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meno44
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Zezzi
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Zezzi
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| 19 Jun 2012 06:43 PM |
-Dove-
I sit on the wooden platform,vim being bid on. "250G," The China governor yells. No one else bid up, and they chained me. I drooped my head down and got shoved into th crate. |
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meno44
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| 19 Jun 2012 06:47 PM |
Name: Armando nuki Gender: male A.ge: 20 Powers: communicate with animals very far away, good sharpshooter, can bring back the dead Abilities: run really fast Appearance: blue shirt with white stripes , black shorts with pocket holes, and a backpack Other: [NA] |
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meno44
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| 19 Jun 2012 06:53 PM |
sitting on the dock fishing while some guy tells me "hey buddy wanna learn a secret come here" i quickly sensed what my bird friends were saying "don't do it he's trying to caputre you ans ell you to goverment secrets.
I ducked and ran for cover. |
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Leodin
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| 19 Jun 2012 06:54 PM |
My advice.
Stick to the Roleplay you made beforehand, and then start a new one.
If you don't even have two pages on one Roleplay, then you shouldn't start a new one unless the previous one is dead.
Also, the plot could use some work.
It's rather vague, and could use details such as the reason for the war breaking out, who exactly is at war with who, where in the world you are, etc.
Yes, some small things are okay, but, not many small RPs, like this one, last for very long, unless they have more details that players can follow. |
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Zezzi
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Zezzi
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| 19 Jun 2012 08:41 PM |
-Dove-
I waited. Once they put me on the ship, I thought about my plan. I know what to do. |
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| 19 Jun 2012 08:46 PM |
N@me:Dextro Plutonium G3nder:Male @ge(10-18):10 Powers:can talk to machines and super smarts Abilities:very fast and smart @ppearance:Brown hair, white skin and silver eyes Other:I like cupcakes :3
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maxi1332
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| 20 Jun 2012 01:07 PM |
CS Name:Scold Gender:Male A.ge(10-18):17 Powers:Metal morphing, and steel skin. Abilities:Can morph things metal.(Including hand) Appearance:Same roblox appearance Other:N/A |
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