Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:05 PM |
=[Part 1]=
A large spaceship, painted black and white, hovered across the darkness of space. Its size and shape indicated that is was a Class 9 Cargo Cruiser, a spaceship to be used only for transporting extremely important goods that belonged to the Sparrow Corporation of Frostaria. The goods that it carried were so important, that the ship itself contained many lazer turrets and cannons, therefore, it travelled alone, without an escort. Within the spaceship's control deck, the captain of the ship, a simple, white skinned Frostarian, stood looking at what lied ahead from the enormous window that was in his line of sight. All was quiet. All was peaceful. Because of recent events, there were no wars. There was of course, the technological rivalry between the Sparrow Corporation and the great WIJ civilization, but it was merely an economical one, not military. Knowing this, the captain gave a huge sigh of relief. Suddenly, the ship started to shake. Explosions could be heard, and the ship's alarm started to ring. The captain immediately ran towards the control panel at the side of the room and pushed his finger against the communications button. "Lieutenant, report. What's going on?" asked the captain, speaking at the communications speaker. "Sir," replied the lieutenant, "We're-" The speaker went dead. The captain sweared with surprise, and suddenly, the doors to the control deck began to slide open. As the captain turned to face the doors from which smoke was visible, a tall figure was seen emerging from the smoke. The figure had, what appeared to be, menacing robotic arms and legs, holding a grim looking pistol. The figure wore a long black jacket, and part of a grey pinstriped shirt could be seen. Its head was covered in white bandages, where only the figure's red eye could be seen. Above its head was a military cap. The captain ghasped and immediately pushed an S.O.S emergency button. "The entire fleet is on their way now.." said the captain with a look of anger. "Good..." said the figure with a menacing grin, as it aimed its pistol at the captain...
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:06 PM |
Nice.
~When life gives you lemons.. make apple juice.~ |
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Vencus
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:06 PM |
| Wow, you're a quick reader. |
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:07 PM |
More.
Dionysus The official Wine God of C&G(TGI Commissar) |
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:07 PM |
| I'll be posting the other parts on the same thread. |
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Altair55
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:10 PM |
| The figure is loyal to someone. His description makes it easy to guess. But if you have an idea, don't reveal it until it's written. |
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battery56
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:10 PM |
Needs more vaktus.
●▬▬▬【- Join Frost Strikers Today!-】▬▬▬● |
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:14 PM |
Figured it out.
Dionysus The official Wine God of C&G(TGI Commissar) |
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Altair55
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:16 PM |
Swore.
He swore.
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flaxnart
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:24 PM |
YAY more GOOD STORIES.
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02Alien
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:24 PM |
Silentswords kills all of bowsers baddies. End of story. -my siggy says i aceran cuz i am- |
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:30 PM |
=[PART 2]=
"As you can see here..." said Felix Immortalis, pointing at a graph that was projected onto the posterior wall of the main office of the Grand Skyscraper in Solstice City's Business District, "Our stock has grown immensly, however, we have had a few setbacks." Whispers and mutters came from the long black table that was in front of the wall, where several white skinned Frostarians in black folded over coats, sat. Felix Immortalis, or as he was known amonst the Corporation, Meowmixxed, was a dedicated man, who's priorities lied towards the success of the Sparrow Corporation. "Setbacks, Felix?" asked Luna Vesania, one of the corporation's Media artists, "I hope they're not too serious. I need the supplies to create our latest film! Believe it or not, it costs a lot to crash a RAT plane into a stuntman posing as a WIJ trooper!" Luna Vesania, known as Lunascamander, enjoyed making various films for the Sparrow Corporation, films that entertained the entire universe, as well as increasing the Corporation's prestiege and reputation. "Well, here's the thing..." said Felix feeling awkward, "We just lost a Class 9 Cargo Cruiser..." Luna and all the other Frostarians ghasped. "Wait wait wait," interrupted Leonard Sparrow, the CEO of the Sparrow Corporation and Grand Admiral of the Frostarian fleet, "Was it the one that was supposed to arrive yesterday?" "I'm afraid so, sir.." said Felix. Leonard clenched his fist.. "Did the fleet look into it?" he asked. "Yes, sir. The ship was completely destroyed. All that was found was a note, and I quote," reported Felix, "The enemies who once led us into death, who wiped us out from existance, shall now perish with their own greed.." Leonard thought for a moment. Then he stood up, as Felix, Luna and the other Frostarians stood up as well. "This meeting's over. Now, everyone except Felix, leave at once." Everyone except Felix, left the room. "Sir?" asked Felix Immortalis. "Assemble the fleet..." ordered Leonard, "If my memory doesn't fail me, I know who, or what, did this..."
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:34 PM |
so is WIJ winning or RAT
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:35 PM |
you included WIJ in this
-Veltex |
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tibiscus
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:37 PM |
| But I didn't say they were fighting each other, did I? ;3 |
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:38 PM |
also this is fake and gya because RAT doesn't have spaceships yet
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Lissitski
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:39 PM |
| In roleplay, RAT does have spaceships. Otherwise, how does RAT manage to travel from Frostaria to places on Earth? |
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artrick
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| 04 Jun 2012 02:42 PM |
| With the cliffhangers, you're getting plenty of readers for the next part. |
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