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| 20 Jun 2012 10:57 PM |
The Adventures of Petraeus are action-filled stories about the current Emperor of The Empire of Tamriel, Petraeus (WarLordMichael). ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- EPISODE ONE: THE AKAVIRI ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Long ago, back when the Stormcloaks waged war on the mighty Imperials, Emperor Petraeus sat in his throne at the Imperial Palace. He was puzzled, had a difficult obstacle trapped in his mind for nearly 3 days.
"Should I Go?" He would continue to ask his Blades. But his Blades could never give him a good response. They kept asking the same questions. "Is it safe?", "How long will it take?", "Should I come with you Sire?" Petraeus knew the answers to those questions. No, months, and no. But he could not tell his Blades what he knew.
3 days ago, Petraeus woke up from a terrible dream. A deep voice continued to tell him to go to the Mysterious Continent of Akavir, here the most horrid and dangerous creatures lived. Petraeus knew it was too dangerous, but what did the voice mean? He could not sleep without it bothering him to go. So he made his decision.
"Burnblade, Casdin, gather a few of our best sword fighters, and a few excelling Blades as well. I'm going to Akavir, and you will come with." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Now before I go on, I must tell who went with. It is important information to the story. Each character I have selected may or may not be a good sword fighter; I just picked a few Imperials to go in the story. Here is whom I have selected:
Burnblade1 Casdin Cfitz2000rules SkormXII Arceus4321 Puger41 Tweeeeeeeeee AnimatedSpider1337 Johnnydeath2011
And now we continue the story; ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Emperor Petraeus gathered his crew of soldiers, and they boarded a ship called the "Katariah". They sailed day and night, through storms and heavy winds alike. Petraeus was determined to reach Akavir and return to Tamriel soon. They had planned to meet at the Black Marsh Outpost, but when, nobody was sure.
Near the end of three months, Akavir came into sight. “Land! Sire, land up ahead!” Casdin shouted. The Katariah sailed into the docks of Akavir in ten minutes. As Petraeus walked onto the fresh grasses of the mysterious continent, a noise could be heard. It was a distant roar, and then a voice boomed. The voice from Petraeus’ dreams. “Prince Petraeus. You have come. So it seems that you are an Emperor now? Maybe Sgccode decided that when you KILLED me, you deserved such a title. Tssk tssk. So you have marched onto my sacred lands, and you did exactly what I wanted you NOT to do. You brought your little friends. No matter.” Then, to everyone’s surprise, a great green Dragon flew up over the hills in front of Petraeus’ crew.
An even longer time ago, Petraeus was a Prince. He was traveling along a road in Cyrodiil, when the green dragon attacked him. Petraeus slayed the dragon, and now it sought out revenge it seemed.
So Petraeus faced the mighty dragon. His crew members were terrified, but Petraeus was confident. He was much younger, only a prince when he slayed the dragon. Now he was more experienced, an Emperor, the Emperor of Tamriel. So Petraeus raised his gleaming sword and shouted: “Come at me!”
The dragon roared, and he swooped down towards Petraeus. The Blades drew their swords and guarded the Emperor, while everyone else took up positions nearby. “Skorm, get me up high!” Petraeus hollered. Skorm was an experienced mage, and he knew exactly what to do. He cast a simple spell that sent Petraeus up into the air, where he could battle the dragon much easier.
So Man and Dragon dueled. But the Akaviri knew that danger was near, and so thousands of creatures, all different species, charged into the battle. Seven more dragons appeared, and Petraeus knew that defeat was upon their heads. Nonetheless, the warriors of Tamriel continued to fight, and fight, until they could fight no more. Ten on Thousands, and Petraeus, with his crew, cut down many of the Akaviri. Soon, the battle ceased to around sixty Akaviri, and three dragons. Those of Tamriel only lost Burnblade, who had to go fight one of the three dragons by himself. The golden dragon in which Burnblade had to duel was attempting to destroy the Katariah.
The battle paused. A loud roar, the loudest thing any of the Tamriel warriors had ever heard, struck the atmosphere. Petraeus had slayed the green dragon once more.
The rest of the Akaviri went into a fury, and retreated back into their lands. Animated raised his bow and began to shoot, but only lodged one arrow in an Akaviri soldier’s neck. The warriors of Tamriel approached the body, Petraeus in the lead. The Emperor kneeled down to inspect the Akaviri. A gleam of gold caught his eye, and he yanked off an Amulet from the soldier. It was the long lost Amulet of Kings.
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| 20 Jun 2012 11:04 PM |
Heh. I like it.
Good story - you should write more. |
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Jackson27
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| 20 Jun 2012 11:13 PM |
| Bravo, BRAVO! Great story you have made, I sit on the edge of my seat in anticipation for the next story. |
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| 20 Jun 2012 11:30 PM |
Awesome story.
This inspires me so. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 12:02 AM |
| Jeese, bro. You can type O.o |
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| 21 Jun 2012 12:05 AM |
| Hehe nice story burn dieing added abit of realism, in the next continuation you should add me in as a leader of a pack werewolves hehe. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 12:43 AM |
Thanks guys! An no no no, Burnblade did not die! He went to go fight a dragon on his own so you guys can go back home. >.< Thank him? :3
This was actually a very badly written story. I didn't even use all the characters. I am going to write the story first, and then list the characters for Episode 2, sorry for those who I said would be in but were never mentioned. :3
And Thank you, Sire. Any of your ideas are most definitely welcome! |
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| 21 Jun 2012 01:42 AM |
| wow this is epic its almost like a small book, nice job. |
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ronan845
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| 21 Jun 2012 01:42 AM |
| wow a young ameteur writer. you have potential justin keep at it. i suggest you use a notepad on the computer or something. good writers have rough drafts if you haven't already. I cant wait till episode 2 |
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| 21 Jun 2012 02:57 AM |
Can you please mention me in the next one?
Thanks, A character from your story. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 09:22 AM |
| Johnny not an obsession -_- its what I do... He should add it. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 11:46 AM |
Again, sorry Arceus and Cfitz. It was going to be longer, with you in it, but my mind has its own limit. I don't plan by stories, I just write a sentence, and from there I just can't stop writing until my brain can't think of anything more.
So yes, Arceus and Cfitz, you will be in the next one for sure, I promise. |
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| 21 Jun 2012 11:55 AM |
| i do this everytime i play skyrim |
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| 21 Jun 2012 02:11 PM |
| I want to kill a dragon, not cower in fear >.> Because that is who I am, in Skyrim, I hear a dragon. I CHASE THE THING DOWN. |
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ronan845
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| 25 Jun 2012 05:54 PM |
| @johnny: lol. i like to avoid them. so annoying. i skipped talking to the jarl of whiterun just so i didnt have to deal with dragons. |
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| 23 Jul 2012 03:45 PM |
Lolwaitwhut ~~~ I pick my bananas from the cherry tree. |
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| 23 Jul 2012 03:49 PM |
| YEAH THAT'S RIGHT I'M STILL REPLYING >:U |
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| 24 Jul 2012 08:47 PM |
:T This was released a long time ago. Accept me in VP, now. ~~~ I pick my bananas from the cherry tree. |
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| 25 Jul 2012 12:05 PM |
What will be your name?
Justin Vahlok? |
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