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| 19 Jun 2012 10:57 PM |
I'm naming this "What I didn't remember". Please enjoy. I gave up on my other story, wasn't really feeling it anymore.
Hello. I've been obsessed with the supernatural since I was a teen. My parents and I had flown to Chile to visit a man who lived in the mountains. He was known worldwide for exorcisms, but he was also known as a doctor. One of the best doctors in the whole world. But the only reason we had flown all the way there is because I had a particular scar. Or three scars, if you wanted to be technical. They had come when I was very young. My parents say that I was all alone in the living room of our house. Me and my brother Mark had been playing together, and my parents were upstairs in their room talking. There were baby gates up so that we couldn't enter the kitchen and hurt ourselves. They said that they had heard a noise downstairs, that they found it to be a broken lamp that had fallen.
But the broken lamp was the least of their worries. Mark was dead, on the floor. He had three scars on his left temple, animal bites that were nothing like any animal bites that were from Earth. His eyes were completely black, no irises or pupils, no whites of his eyes. They were completely black, unlike anything they had ever seen. I had identical bite marks, on the exact same place on my head. I've been slower to learn, to process. To feel. Ever since it happened. And my pupils are always a little bigger than other people's. It's like they're dilated, except all the time. And they're not taking anymore light in, like they would if they were dilated. Just effects my brain, the way it works. It's like the accident drained some of the life out of me. Permanently.
The man in Chile looked at my scars, and as soon as he did, the life in him looked like it left for a moment. But it quickly came back, and as soon as it did, he muttered, "Ay, Dios mio." He was Mexican, not Chilean so he didn't speak the language there. He looked at my eyes, and something inside him left. He went back to speaking English and asked worriedly, "His pupils aren't dilated are they?" When my parents shook their head, He sighed, "Your child has gone through something major. Malvado espiritu."
If you like, comment below! If you don't, than please don't tell me you don't. More chapters coming out. |
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| 19 Jun 2012 11:02 PM |
| and the guy in the book is named Scott Nichols. I was trying to put it in there, but ROBLOX and it's stupid rules said I couldn't. Enjoy ^.^ |
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| 20 Jun 2012 07:06 AM |
| I like it better than your other book! |
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| 20 Jun 2012 04:59 PM |
| Wow, 4um? I had nothing against the other one. I just wanted to know why she was in the fluff cube. xD Anyway, I love it. It's so mysterious. Keep writing, Gal! |
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