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Re: My shot at a creepypasta

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 09:49 AM
This was actual footage from a conversation between policemen.

[Initializing broadcast camera --- ] [[ Booting audio --- ]] [[[ Done ]]]

9:00 PM
>Hello? Is anyone there?
>>Yeah. What's the Report?
>Nothing like I've seen before.
>>Well, what is it?
>I don't know. It was some sort of strange broadcast.
>>Can you describe it?
>Well, all I know is that it was first shown in 1954.
>>Through national television?
>Yeah. It was strange. There was an orange cube with smaller cubes spinning around it slowly. Then the cube would morph into a sphere, and such.
>>What's so bad about it?
>Well, the animation is too smooth to have been broadcast back then, but it was. Anyways, It was shown again a week ago for about 10 minutes on PBS, at 11:15 PM. I watched, but I felt disturbed by it for some reason. There was nothing wrong with it though. Just some shapes spinning slowly.
>>This can't be an issue. You just joined the police, so this must be stressful. But I'm sure its nothing. Go to bed, it's getting late
>NO! YOU HAVE TO LOOK AT IT!
>>Son, go to bed. It'll help you.
>GO LOOK AT IT NOW!
>>Relax. I'll ask the other officers what they think.

The next part was recorded later, after he talked to the other officers.

[Initializing broadcast camera --- ] [[ Booting audio --- ]] [[[ Done ]]]

10:40 PM
>>I'm back, and the officers seemed to want me to look at it. So i'll be going.
>LOOK AT IT NOW!
>>Relax, get some sleep. Stay here while I go to PBS.

The officer was found dead at PBS, and was estimated to have died through a major failure in the nervous system. The recruit was also found dead while sleeping, due to an unknown cause.

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 09:50 AM
Soo what do you think?

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jakub15 is not online. jakub15
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17 Jun 2012 09:52 AM
Well, I got chilled out (like a bit creeped out)

Weird.
But aweosme,
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usethevunro is not online. usethevunro
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17 Jun 2012 09:52 AM
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masterx is not online. masterx
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17 Jun 2012 09:52 AM
it left way too many questions
reading it twice i got that there's a spinning orange cube broadcasted in the 50's or something
and some police officers go to PBS to check out the broadcast
and they die

it's not very creepy either

also heeeeey rainbowdash
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 09:52 AM
@jakub
Thanks. I actually got this idea through a nightmare I had, with those exact cubes.

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 09:53 AM
@master
It was supposed to leave a lot of questions.

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 09:54 AM
@master
Also, only one of them went to PBS. The other that stayed at the office died of an unknown cause.

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masterx is not online. masterx
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17 Jun 2012 09:55 AM
i got more of a "the hell" factor than a creepy factor
leaving too many questions subtracts from the creepiness
everything went by too fast and blurred together
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:06 AM
bump

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jakub15 is not online. jakub15
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17 Jun 2012 10:07 AM
Suggestions:
How about a official picture to this creepypasta? To give you a idea, search "Jeff the Killer" or "smiledog.jpg" in google images.
Make sure it is 100% original.
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:19 AM
@jakub
im adding the finishing touches right now

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:26 AM
The decal is uploading.

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:29 AM
and suddenly
everyone stops posting

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17 Jun 2012 10:30 AM
Dawn of a new day

-72 Hours Remain-
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:36 AM
hey look decal's uploaded
http://www.roblox.com/Cube-item?id=83862928

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:41 AM
NOBODY CARES ANYMORE

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 10:52 AM
WHY DOES NOBODY POST

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noswad0208 is not online. noswad0208
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17 Jun 2012 10:57 AM
I'm sorry, but it stinks. My dads bedtime stories about a chipmunk are scarier.
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jakub15 is not online. jakub15
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17 Jun 2012 11:49 AM
Picture is awesome!
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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17 Jun 2012 06:53 PM
Necessarybump

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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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18 Jun 2012 08:25 AM
Im remaking, to make it more, well... creepy.

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darkspiritwolf is not online. darkspiritwolf
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18 Jun 2012 08:30 AM
Let cry read it.
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BTL1234MKII is not online. BTL1234MKII
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18 Jun 2012 08:37 AM
Great creepypasta
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PCTheDoctor is not online. PCTheDoctor
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18 Jun 2012 08:41 AM
Not too bad.
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