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| 16 Jun 2012 12:19 AM |
Ok guys, I got REALLY bored one night, so I decided to make this story about my FEAR past :)
Now, some of this is true, and untrue, for example, some characters may be made up while others are actau robloxians. This is the RAT war from 2010.
Comment and enjoy! :D
~Chapter 1, the day of the war~
"BOOOOOOOOM!" cackled the thunder as me and my troops ran. We were heavily outnumbered, low on supplies and ammo. We had multiple wounded and my squad had been going on for 3 days. Whatever was chasing us, RAT Immortals or their normal troops or wild crazy animals in the Venezian Jungle, none of us wanted to meet. "I'm... too tired sir!" Panted a Private. "keep GOING!" I yelled. "Were almost at the rendevous point!" Suddenly, a RAT Attack chopper went above us, pointed its missles, and fired.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I jumped in my bed. Oh, it was just a dream....
"Someone having a nice time up there?" My brother grinned from the bottom bunk. I had 5 brothers, all serving in the war. Except me and my twin brother Michael. Today was the day that anyone 16 and up was to serve in the Military. Our birthday was 2-weeks ago, so it looked like we were going to war today. our Mother and Father had died a few years ago, when a RAT Stealth Bomber bombed a safety camp in which my parents were at...
"Today's the day where we get to see you get beaten up, Matt" Michael said.
I just got him in a headlock, and we started wrestling until we realized we were going to be late if we didnt leave soon. We got dressed and ate breakfast then left our small house. We said good-bye to our Uncle, a retired FEAR officer.
We took a shuttle to the Military station. We would be going to Military Camp for who knows HOW long, then off to war.
"LISTEN UP LADIES!" A Sergeant yelled. Man, that guy can yell. GET YOUR SORRY BEHINDS OVER HERE FOR REGISTRATION FROM YOUR LAST NAME!"
Michael and I signed up, and we were just on time. The sergeant... I think his name was Rick was yelling at some late trainees. We headed into a large open room where a colonel flanked by two officers was standing on a wide pedastal.
Everyone in the room immediately knew that he wanted us to line at his 12, row by row. We did so, and he gave a short introduction about the war status. So far, RAT and FEAR were at a stalemate. When RAT got a great victory, so did FEAR, when FEAR lost a large handuful of men, so did RAT. Rumors were FEAR was slowly being undermined by RAT, but I figured I cant believe everything I heard. All of us were separated into groups based on color codes our last names were organized into. There were about 8 groups, each with roughly 50 soldiers in them. Looking at everyone else, Michael and I had a decent build, but there were a few guys who looked like they could rip me in half.
~Chapter 2, The Camp~
Well, if I found something I didnt like, it was camp. Talk about cruelty, we had to sleep outside in the mud pits yesterday. I should probably man up since this is war, but hey, I'm 16. We had to do a truckload of things: Push-ups, sit-ups, climbing 20-foot fences that was surrounded by an electrical charged floors, Dolphin Diving off roofs, and all sorts of wonderful things that can kil- I mean break your face.
The only thing that didnt murder any of us was the fact that our Lieutenant made us get to know our squad. We were Alpha Squad, 50 in total. We were ONLY told to use our code names, and mine was MASTERMATT564. Michael's was Ratties564. What a troll. All the names blurred in my mind; ShadowLugia, ImAwesomeFoo, DoctorCooper, fireofflames95, flaminwolf123, cherrybomb117, etc.
We were almost done with camp, and I knew the entire Squad Already. Then, just my luck, I got caught in the middle of a fight:
"Give my medal back, its mine!" Cherry yelled "What are you gonna do about it you whiny baby?" laughed ShadowLugia. A few of his goons were laughing too. ShadowLugia was the biggest jerk in the squad. He picked on everyone except his 'friends.' I heard his dad was some High official in the army or something. "Shadow, give Cherry back his medal" I ordered. Shadow just sneered at me. Then, he slipped on an orange I dropped earlier and he slipped into mud. I did the naturally thing and laughed, but then Shadow got up and started attacking me. He socked me in the face, took another swing but then I hooked my arm around his upper arm and threw him over my back. One of his friends got me in a lock, and his other buddy started puniching me in the stomach. Cherry flew out of nowhere and tackled them both, so the 4 of us took a major spill. Shadow Started kicking me in the face, but I managed to push him away and get up. I hit the jerk as hard as I could in the nose, and I heard it crack. "MASTERMATT564, GET OVER HERE NOW!" Yelled one of the Squad Leaders.
Busted. I was put on probation for the next 2 days. Ratties564 thought the whole thing was hilarious, maybe for him but not for me. Apparenlty, all that was seen was me 'attacking' the helpless Shadow who cowered in fear.
Moving on to someone elses perspective here, this in the course of the war.
AviationDirection's prespective, 3rd person Point of View:
Aviation was yelling at the troops to maintain order. Delta Squad 56th attack force was pushing the RAT force back to their base camp. They were getting close to FEAR territory, and FEAR families were being evacuated as they fought. Aviation yelled "enemy MORTAR FIRE INCOMING! TAKE COVER!" WHERE's THAT AC-130 GUNNER?"
AC-130 pilot: We can make a 10 mike run Avi, attacking on your flares.
The Venezian model of an AC-130 was firing down into the rat force so the Delta force could move up. The AC-130 had 5 big guns that had an explosion radius of 10 yards, with smaller rockets when the big guns reloaded.
The Delta Squad managed to push the RAT force back with light casualties. Reinforcements were arriving, a few tanks and transports and more ammo. Aviation knew the job wasnt done yet. The RAT's were setting up a line of defense and were going for a counter-attack.
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| 16 Jun 2012 12:23 AM |
| GAHHHH Finally done. If you want to be in here, PM me! Chapter 4 coming out! :D |
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| 16 Jun 2012 12:24 AM |
Include me? c:
I'ma be the best just have some patience. |
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| 16 Jun 2012 01:00 AM |
| I love it, I wish I had the skill to make amazing stories, I was intrested the whole time while picturing it in my mind. Good job:) |
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| 16 Jun 2012 01:23 AM |
| A sergeant? 0.e Isn't that low? |
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flavor147
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| 16 Jun 2012 01:51 AM |
| I think you are a very skilled high-rank. I make some of these stories myself, but I never thought of making one about Roblox. Nice idea. Anyways, it would be nice for me to be in it, so I can maybe picture it better than it is, but I could still picture it very well. Nice job. |
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flavor147
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| 16 Jun 2012 02:46 AM |
| Sorry, but I copied your idea and already wrote chapter 1. I checked forums I have made/replied to, and when I did this one, made long before I made mine, had 295 views, and the one I made that said chapter 1 was coming soon had 612 o.O. |
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| 16 Jun 2012 02:47 AM |
| http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=70074523. <---My story. Chapter 1. |
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| 16 Jun 2012 03:55 AM |
| LOL yeah right! You probably just joined a group on the groups page and decided you wanted a high rank. |
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| 16 Jun 2012 12:24 PM |
In the military, sergeants are the guys who yell at the privates lol.
So... thats why I got a sergeant screaming his lungs out at us :) |
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| 16 Jun 2012 12:28 PM |
| Put me in! You know you have to :P |
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| 16 Jun 2012 12:31 PM |
| @Echo, you wont come until a REALLY long time since Iroc and Kingnoob were my first apprentices lol. |
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