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| 14 Jun 2012 10:48 PM |
Before i start i want to warn you, this could be terrible. also the grammar will be bad.
It was a calm overcast day in the land of Off topic, forums were slow, and very little of importance was going on. A young girl named Lilliamgirl was posting trying to revive the forum, but sadly failing. And then all of the sudden a large crash was heard! Everyone left there forums to see that Sierrathegreat was shooting beams of magic at the citizens of OT, but this was not in vain. She was after someone, she quickly casted a spell apon her self and turned herself into a gigantic ugly troll. And seeing this Liliam jumped out and attacked Sierra with the a giant claymore, sierra did not even flinch, she swatted liliam away and went on with her business, she then reached into a forum and grabbed thatsawesome, she screamed and squirmed trying to get away, this was a failure, Liliam could only sit and watch sierra take the princess away to RT. Little did they know that this would only be the first of OT's problems.
That is the end of that chapter, sorry for not having alot of people in it at the moment, ill add more later. |
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DJVERY
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| 14 Jun 2012 10:49 PM |
| Too many commas. Replace some with periods. |
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| 14 Jun 2012 10:51 PM |
| Run on sentences, choo choo! |
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sage296
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| 14 Jun 2012 10:56 PM |
@DJ
I told you it would have bad grammar, idgaf about it bro sorry. |
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DJVERY
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| 14 Jun 2012 11:00 PM |
It was a calm overcast day in the land of Off Topic. The forums were slow, and very little of importance was going on. A young girl named Liliamgirl was posting trying to revive the forum, but sadly failing. And then all of the sudden a large crash was heard! Everyone left there forums to see that Sierrathegreat was shooting beams of magic at the citizens of OT, but this was not in vain. She was after someone. She quickly casted a spell apon her self and turned herself into a gigantic ugly troll. And seeing this Liliam jumped out and attacked Sierra with the a giant claymore. Sierra did not even flinch. She swatted liliam away and went on with her business. She then reached into a forum and grabbed thatsawesome, who screamed and squirmed trying to get away. Liliam could only sit and watch sierra take the princess away to RT. Little did they know that this would only be the first of OT's problems.
*Storyfix* |
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| 14 Jun 2012 11:11 PM |
Ahem, next part
Now, most OTers would go and save thatsawesome themselves, but recently the borders of RT have been heavily defended. So days went by after thatsawesome was kidnapped, many OTers had banded together to plan to save her, but they would later be pre-occupied. Now things had picked up talk of thatsawesome's kidnapping spread like wild fire, and at the tip of OT stood in a black robe the one true evil of the forums. MSE6 she stood looking down apon the forum, and said to her self "Soon you will all be dead and i will rule the roblox forums". Liliam was prepared to rescue thatsawesome alone, but knew she could not, so she searched in a heavily populated troll bait forum for the greatest warriors. She shouted out in the room "Alright, who ever wants to save Thatsawesome speak with me!". The room was silent, there approached her breaking the silence a newer OTer named Troublemaker3544 he said to her in a cheerful voice "I am up! " Lilliam looked to him and said "I would prefer if you took this more seriously, but what ever, just keep in contact with me okay?" He nodded at her. She looked around the room and then saw a man sitting in a chair surrounded by people, it was fastlane250, she said to fastlane, "Join me fastlane, we so we can save thatsawesome" He proceeded to laugh at her. Fastlane then stopped and looked to her "Your serious? good luck, shes gone and you will never get her back from sierra, shes too powerful" Lilliam sighed and turned around, and then fastlane said to her, "But...I will join you". She smiled at him, and thanked him. MSE6 observed her efforts laughing to her self saying "The princess will not matter when your forum is up in flames" and laughed manically. Lilliam was not prepared for what would happen next.....
Yup thats about it for the second chapter. |
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Inks13
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| 14 Jun 2012 11:17 PM |
| why are all of your characters girls? |
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DJVERY
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| 14 Jun 2012 11:19 PM |
I need to be in the story.
:3 |
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jacoba01
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| 15 Jun 2012 08:35 AM |
| You guys know RT doesn't even think you guys are that bad and there's lot's of RTers foruming legitly in OT. |
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Program34
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| 15 Jun 2012 08:49 AM |
| You don't attack with a claymore. You place a claymore. |
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| 15 Jun 2012 08:51 AM |
@Inks,
Maybe he likes girls in his stoies. |
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| 15 Jun 2012 10:19 PM |
Okay, next chapter.
Lilliam had then left the thread as it was starting to become a flame war, she then left and found a thread with no posts on it, it was from a old Orc mystic named Greenshaman, he looked to her group and then looked away looking back and then he said "Oh.. hello! i wasn't expecting visitors" Troublemaker then said "Join our court of Camelot!" Lilliam then said "What?" and Green said "I love that movie!" Lilliam said "Be quiet Trouble" and then she looked up to him "We are going to go rescue princess thatsawesome, are you interested? he looked up and said to her "Of course!" she said to him then "...Alright, well i think this group seems good enough" then out of no where came a young man named Ink13 and he tripped over and tumbled onto Lilliam and looked at her "I wanna come!" She sighed and then pushed him off of her "Fine, i think this is a large enough group, pack we'll men, at dawn we head for RT" they departed there ways. Lilliam then on here way to meet up with her crew of Fastlane250, Ink15, TroubleMaker3544, and Greenshaman all met up with swords in hand. They set fourth at the border of OT. Then all of the sudden they heard a explosion! And then gunshots, it was soldiers from C&G, they saw Lilliam and her team and stood before them.
Okay, thats the end of that chapter. |
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| 15 Jun 2012 10:22 PM |
Where am I coming in the story? I'm the guy who forums in OT and RP. And has several alias, including Jimmy Carter.
-The official Rich and fancy person of OT.- |
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| 16 Jun 2012 07:22 AM |
| Like i said pokemon in the asking i "Might" add you, i probably will though ill find something. |
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| 16 Jun 2012 07:30 AM |
| Like i said pokemon in the asking i "Might" add you, i probably will though ill find a part for you. |
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