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| 11 Jun 2012 06:24 PM |
Due to recent events and quite stressfull decisions, I've chosen to ally with the Grand Imperium in this war.. Please note this is fictional and merely resembles emotions felt and fury unleashed during a war that seperates brothers and splits friendships..
Featuring: Darko21(IoM Warmaster), CraktheRaven(TGI)
Location: TGI Imperial Stronghold. Conditions: Battlefield, Moral, Brotherhood, betrayal..
Part 1: The Beginning..
The cool air rasped through the trees, hustling its whispers and predictions of death to the idle defenders of the Stronghold, unflinching, they moved slowly and calmly to their assigned positions. Preparing all defences for the might of the Imperiums army, combined with the unyielding force of a Vaktovian strike force. Unmanned and daunting siege cannons stood firm and unmoving along the Strongholds walls, canisters being loaded with charasmatic clinks and clangs that rang through the air..
Craktheraven walked along the front trenches, his firm and well polished combat boots crunching through disbanded twigs and scattered pools of muck and rainwater, paying chorus to his gaze which glided so narrowly along the frontline soldiers. Cold, unforgiving eyes meeting theirs mid-stride to test their mentality in this battle to come.. Suddenly he stopped, his heels clicking together and his body turned to face a young Guard, clasping his rifle tightly and blinking nervously to the horizon. 'Do not worry, for I am with you in life.' Spoke the veteran, his voice as calm as a summers breeze and yet as intimidating as the galaxies worst criminals.. 'In life or death, we shall be together as one, prepare for both for it will come sooner than expected if not.' The young guard nodded his head and exhaled deeply, feeling the commanders words.. Such acts have been rare amongst his kind..
Suddenly, sirens blazed unholy choruses of an incoming attack. Crak's head darting towards a cliff where Toberdam and his squad were mounted. Ready to ambush the enemy on their drop zone. His comm-link whispered life to Crak, confirming that they were also both ready for death, or life in which context he referred..nobody knew.. 'Spectre, I trust your aim, today we slaughter these Imperials where they stand, not in our trenches.' Spoke Toberdam, his words filled Hugginators ears with instructions he took as commandments not to be broken.. His visor turning to meet the Commanders helmet, before nodding in agreement..
The roar of engines and whining dropships filled the air, alongside a barrage of AA fire and vast volleys of projectiles from both sides.. Hulls of huge dropships burst open, spewing forth legions of undaunting Imperial guardsmen, led by Captains and officers of examplary honour. Their badges and medals shimmering in the twilight as the rain of eve began to set down on the area.. Guardsmen marched quickly in block formations towards an assembly area, not a mile from the Grand Imperiums defensive lines, slowly but surely forming into a strategic advance towards the entrenched defenders. Lasgun vs Combat Rifles, Cannons vs Tanks..
Brothers..vs..Brothers..
Crak's gaze fixated on Eaglesword, his enormous golden power-armour glowed in the rainfall as his lips pierced into a smile at the sight of an old comrade.. His golden custodian bodyguards in formation with him, their halberds and stormbolters shimmering heat fields, causing a rain-repelling glow to fall around them.. Iconic in their march.. The Imperials began to attack.. The rain hailed down with a Gods fury, the armour of Guardsmen pattered with echos, as the trenchcoats of the defenders dripped wet and flung like whips, spitting up rain as they kicked in unison to the recoil of weaponry..
The entire valley burst into life as the air filled with bullets, shrapnel, artillery, and death.. so much death.. Cannons rang roars of triupmh as they spat death into the enemy ranks, incinerating entire squads of Guardsmen as they were struck with a microscopic shroud of razor sharp metal.. Chimeras rattled their cannons, tearring desserting hostile soldiers to pieces and completed decimating defenders in droves.. The battle was nearing a violent stalement.. when suddenly, Eaglesword issued a bellow which echoed over the gunfire as it went silent.. 'DEATH' he shouted, all the Guardsmen holding fire and looking to his iconic figure as it strode into the open ground, staring upwards as he raised his gleaming sword to the enemy and called for glory once more.. 'BEFORE DISHONOUR'.. En masse, the Imperials raised their bayonets and combat blades, some swords and Astartes roaring chainblades.. A deafening chorus roared to the Stronghold, shaking the very foundations of the base..
Toberdam turned to Spectre on his sniping perch, looking down over the battle from mountain-side.. 'That noise.. what is it, Thunder?' His helmet turned to meet Hugginators one-way mask, his L.E.D eye-lenses glowing bright red in the cold embrace of the rainfall.. 'Negative' Spectre whispered, nodding towards the frontline Trenches below them.. 'Attack'.. The bloodthirsty horde of Imperials stormed the trenches with such ferocity, not even the Vaktovians, who were now deploying at the assembly area, could believe what they were seeing.. Oceans of soldiers charging disciplined defences, like a vast sea beating against a rock..
In the heat of the battle, Crak raised his blade in challenge to the Emperor, a duel which lasted a ferocious hour and no longer as steel met adamantium.. Blows from the esteemed commander did nothing to slow the Emperors advance, Crak simply refused to submit to his quarry, and as stubborn as many he continued the inevitable battle.. A circle had cleared for the two to engage as the Custodians fought in formation around their emperor, the hordes of infantry battling in a 50/50 clash in the epicentre of the apocalyptic fight.. Eaglesword swung a ferocious backhand to CrakTheRaven, throwing him down into the dirt and opening him for a crippling blow.. But Eagle did not slay his former comrade there..
Darko leapt from the hordes of infantry, kasrkin at his side, and began to fistfight the Commander brutally in the contained circle of combat.. Eagle merely laughed in triumph as the two clashed before him, mere mortals before an enigmatic being.. Two men, amusing a God..
Part 2 Coming shortly..
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| 11 Jun 2012 06:25 PM |
| Crak is too busy being a pony to be involved with any form of warfare. |
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| 11 Jun 2012 06:36 PM |
| ^ He was in Combat with IoM yesterday. And will be in the future. |
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Smog879
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| 11 Jun 2012 08:18 PM |
| This, story... Hits the heart, as well as the mind. I love it. |
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dommel101
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| 12 Jun 2012 01:12 AM |
| Please PM me when Part II is out! |
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| 12 Jun 2012 01:40 AM |
| This is a amazing story. Can You add the 31st Harakoni Warhawks? We are a branch in the imperium of man. Our job is to fly over the enemies head and jummp out feet first out of a drop ship into whatever landscape that our foes lie in. |
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goldburst
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| 12 Jun 2012 01:53 AM |
| I had some comrades in TGI that stayed, and as a Colonel of Man, i've had comrades come and go. This does hit you, inspiring. I love it. |
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| 12 Jun 2012 08:34 AM |
| Add the Cadians in Part 2? Or more names? |
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X135
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| 12 Jun 2012 08:37 AM |
Nice vocabulary and sentence structuring.
☜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬☜☆☞▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬☞ - Candymaniac, a highly reactive substance. |
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| 12 Jun 2012 08:37 AM |
Why am I not in this?
Dionysus The official Wine God of C&G(TGI Commissar) |
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| 12 Jun 2012 09:42 AM |
| Why dont me and dommel come in there, and kill doomknight as Black Templars? :3 |
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| 12 Jun 2012 09:58 AM |
Love it!
Long live the IOM! |
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| 12 Jun 2012 10:42 AM |
| Thanks for the feedback, the more I get, the more I write :) Keep an eye on my Profile Blurb to recieve updates on this story. |
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IanGarcia
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| 12 Jun 2012 10:48 AM |
Let's see.. if I were in that battle.. I'll be honest with, but I think I'm one of the engineers at the landing zones. Looking over the tanks refueling and reloading. Most likely where I'd be put during conflicts.
[IanGarcia] =.= |
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evarlay82
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| 12 Jun 2012 03:34 PM |
I love it, wonderful work Hugginator. Realy inspring. I wouldn't mind of course me being in it but you know. Anywho nice art peice Hugginator cant wait till part 2. -(IOM) Colonel Evarlay82
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| 12 Jun 2012 03:37 PM |
| Wow, this is actually a good story. |
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wraith730
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| 13 Jun 2012 02:41 PM |
| Involve the Dragoons Hugginator. We aren't ignored! >:D |
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| 22 Jun 2012 07:42 PM |
| Hugginator; would you mind if I made my own version of this story? I couldn't help but ask. |
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Kazrus
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| 22 Jun 2012 07:55 PM |
| Craktheraven is a girl, she is bio, i know her alot :3 |
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