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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:35 PM
(Chapter One)
When someone hands you a million dollars, you accept it right? You don't sit there and ask a million questions about each dollar. At least normal people do. Me? I ask a million and one questions, making the offerers want to beat me with the case. It keeps me knowledable and happy though, in most cases.
Of course, digging gets you in trouble in quite a few cases. In highschool, finding out that your principal isn't "teacher material" and threatening to spill it isn't bright. It's downright stupid. It gets you jobs you don't want all in the name of extra credit you'll need to graduate. Tutoring.
I was sentenced- sorry, given the job of- to tutoring one of the freakiest, most secluded girls in school. Lieth Gealasiu. She dressed all in black- you'd think she was goth or emo, but no. No makeup and no cutting, just antisocial. Her family also had money and she had- god forbid- a B in a few classes. My job was to bring said grades up to stat before report cards went out. Isn't my principal such a nice guy?
My first day of teaching was on monday and I wasn't looking forward to it. Lieth was never friendly to anyone, and especially hostile to guys. Everyone was hostile to me, so how long until my throat was ripped out?
Monday morning I dragged myself out of bed and stomped downstairs. Mom glanced at me and in a cheery voice asked, "Well good morning sunshine!"
I growled at her and sat at the table. I poured myself some cereal and ate slowly. "Oh shut up..." I muttered.
She rolled her eyes at me. "Rough night or bad day?"
"Both."
"Care to explain?" she asked.
I shrugged. "Tutoring today... I'm not looking forward to it."
Mom sat, frowning. "Tell me again why you're doing this?"
"Because Mr. Harris is a wonderful principal for giving me an extra chance to earn credits to graduate this year." I answered in a monotone.
"... What did you do?"
I grinned in spite of myself. "Found something out he wanted to keep quiet, naturally I told him."
She rolled her eyes. "Brilliant. Should I know?"
"Nah..." I muttered, frowning again. "It's nothing detrimental."
"Alright. I'll see you when I get home tonight, alright?" She stood and held out her arms to give me a hug.
Seventeen year old man I might be, I loved my mother. I jumped up and gave her a bearhug, same as I did when I was little. She hugged me back and kissed my cheek before leaving. "I love you, Tyler."
I smiled as she left. "Love you too, Mom."
My dad had left when I was barely three, leaving my mother and I to fend for ourselves. The only reason we owned a home was because her mother died and left it and some money to us. Life wasn't perfect, but I was happy. Mom had doted on me for as long as I could remember, even with limited money.
With that happy train of thought in mind, I put my things away and went out the door. School was only a few blocks away, and my day had just begun.
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McPuzzTheIII is not online. McPuzzTheIII
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11 Jun 2012 01:36 PM
Nobody Cares.
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:36 PM
Don't reply. Just don't. This is for me to post my story for my friends.
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liliamgirl is not online. liliamgirl
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11 Jun 2012 01:37 PM
This is really bad.
Like really bad.


~I wanna get my doctorate because people have to call me doctor~
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:38 PM
Again, not for you. So shush.
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dacoolman04 is not online. dacoolman04
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11 Jun 2012 01:40 PM
http://www.roblox.com/--item?id=21500192
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liliamgirl is not online. liliamgirl
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11 Jun 2012 01:41 PM
If it's supposed to be private, then why did you post it on OT?

Get out.

and no, I will not shush


~I wanna get my doctorate because people have to call me doctor~
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:41 PM
Trolls are people that have no life or anything else to do. Don't be a troll.
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:41 PM
I posted this for my friends to view. I didn't ask for people to say I suck or that no one cares. Go find something else to do.
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liliamgirl is not online. liliamgirl
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11 Jun 2012 01:42 PM
I'm not trolling, I'm giving my honest opinion.

It's a piece of crap.

~I wanna get my doctorate because people have to call me doctor~
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:43 PM
Give some serious commentary, not just straight insults. K?
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:44 PM
If you don't like or don't care, don't read.
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liliamgirl is not online. liliamgirl
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11 Jun 2012 01:44 PM
Commentary:
Not interesting, poorly written, bad idea.




~I wanna get my doctorate because people have to call me doctor~
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:45 PM
Alright, thanks for more detailed commentary. Bear in mind this is a rough draft that, again, I posted for commentary from my friends. Apparently now I'm looking for remarks from complete strangers, but what the heck?
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YoungTack is not online. YoungTack
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11 Jun 2012 01:49 PM
>rough draft > write on paper
>for my friends > send in pms
>detailed commentary > this is OT pls keep in mind
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josiejo is not online. josiejo
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11 Jun 2012 01:50 PM
tl;dr
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 01:51 PM
*Rolls eyes* Say what you like my friend, it's already BEEN on paper.
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Chi1 is not online. Chi1
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11 Jun 2012 02:01 PM
Very well written compared to much literary works today. *COUGH* Twilight. *COUGH*
Jokes aside, great foreshadowing and I expect much out of this. Do not let trolls get to you, okay Momo? You can spire to great things with that well of writing.
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 02:02 PM
XD Thanks Chi.
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dacoolman04 is not online. dacoolman04
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11 Jun 2012 02:03 PM
lol how do you roll your eyes over the interwebs
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EOL is not online. EOL
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11 Jun 2012 02:03 PM
"Very well written compared to much literary works today. *COUGH* Twilight. *COUGH*"

>twilight

wat?
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momoisme is not online. momoisme
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11 Jun 2012 02:05 PM
With stars my friend. And anything to do with werewolves now is subjected to ridicule by comparision to Twilight. *Rolls eyes* There are no sparkly vampires and the werewolves HERE (Yes there are) are Loup Garoup, not shapeshifters. Cursed.
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Chi1 is not online. Chi1
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11 Jun 2012 02:05 PM
@EOL

The books written by Stephanie myer where a vampire falls in love with a girl and wierd stuff happens. Vampires sparkle and a werewolf guy won't put his shirt on. Thats all I really understood. XD
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