MATTY1319
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| 10 Jun 2012 01:10 AM |
Chapter 1.
The rain was coming down. General Matty1319 was standing in the doorway of his SA330 Puma transport ship on the way to Fort Highland after a recent attack. The raiders had set up a siege round the fort by land and sea.
Suddenly the heli beneath him shuddered, Pilot Ryanvv turned round "We've been hit sir!"
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Their SA330 was surrounded. Russian Spetsnaz Operatives swarmed the wreck site. The General hid under the right door of his once mobile aircraft, trying not to move or breathe. After time the troops cleared so he went out of hiding and went to look for the pilots, and trusty friends Ryanvv and 12mophead. The rubble around made it near impossible finding them, but with just enough luck, they were searching too. As they walked away they did not happen to see the squad of 5 men lead by a Spetsnaz Captian. They ran over and slammed them into the harsh enviroment floor and were dragged off to their prison in Siberia.
The interrogation room was a solid concrete room with a single one-way mirror. question fired after question at the General and all he had given away was his name and rank, even with the risk of torture each night till he got out the dark dank confined space they even called a prison, he went over possible namees for this prison in his head: 'Hell, nightmare, slave camp...' it was all. Mines in lowest of all prisoners with armed guards with their Makarov pistols and Kalachnikov AK-47s........
(POST IN THE COMMENTS BELOW IS YOU WANT A PART 2)
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poik12
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| 10 Jun 2012 01:23 AM |
1. You've started in the second act:bad 2. the British use the Puma HC, a contract version 3. The Russian Military uses the AK-101 rifle, not the 47 4. only military officers/GRU personnel carry sidearms.
Do your research before righting these stories. |
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poik12
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| 10 Jun 2012 01:24 AM |
Oh 5.: What the hell were British forces doing in Russian territory?
Do you want to cause a thermonuclear war? |
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MATTY1319
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| 10 Jun 2012 01:52 AM |
| Fort Highland is our base. I was going to see is they were holding out. |
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MATTY1319
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| 10 Jun 2012 01:54 AM |
| I only posted DO YOU WANT A 2ND PART. go away you noob |
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:05 AM |
Well, Matty. I think its great. Good description, suspence. The lot.
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:05 AM |
| Nearly forgot! Yea. A second part would be great... |
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Jas1066
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:12 AM |
| Yeah, it would be good, but include some of the non-officer ranks tooD: |
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MATTY1319
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:14 AM |
| Well who do you think would rescue us? I've got my ideas. |
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:15 AM |
Here comes poik, with his realistic critism.
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| 10 Jun 2012 02:16 AM |
| Its only a fictional story, poik. |
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| 10 Jun 2012 04:19 AM |
Matty: The Red Devils :P With Major Silver in there too :3? Yeah, a 2nd part would be good.
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pandatoby
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| 10 Jun 2012 04:28 AM |
Or Red Devils :P
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pandatoby
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pandatoby
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| 10 Jun 2012 05:11 AM |
Nah mate. Red evils was the nickname gievn to 1 para and 2 para. Which are UK military divisions.
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| 10 Jun 2012 05:25 AM |
Go get your facts right.
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| 10 Jun 2012 06:30 AM |
| silver, You get your GRAMMAR right. |
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| 10 Jun 2012 06:31 AM |
| poik, You get YOUR grammar right, and not silver. |
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12mophead
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| 10 Jun 2012 07:26 AM |
| I have an idea because we got captured they kill me and put it on a video and send it to the rest of BMF and say ''This is what happens to you'' and i am dead then they save you :) |
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MATTY1319
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| 10 Jun 2012 07:37 AM |
| Or rather than that, a spy in the Russian army rescues you guys...? |
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pandatoby
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| 10 Jun 2012 08:25 AM |
No. The British Paratroop Regiments are Nicknamed the Red Devils. Go look on wikipedia. Game, set, match.
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