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Re: The Invocate Chronicles: Defending Scorpio (Part 1)
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| 11 Jan 2011 10:46 PM |
( Let me know what you think on the comments! )
Chapter 1; A Cry For Help
Time, 0012:00015:000016
Location: Celeste Army Dorms
Invocate103, a coordinator for R.A.T, sat on his couch, eating a cupcake, reading a book and flipping between Naruto: Shippuden and Pokemon on the TV because of the commercials. A random conscript comes up and shoots Invocate’s cupcake.
“What was that for?” Invocate103 said.
“Sorry. Aim was off.” Invocate103 turns and sees a target right next to where the cupcake was, looks down and sees the cupcake’s ashes (he feels a sad emotion run through his body) and turns back towards the conscript. “An admiral wanted to test some new tech we recently built.” Suddenly, the alarm yells, “ATTENTION, ATTENTION, ALL AVALIBLE R.A.T MEMBERS TO PROCEED TO ALL PELICANS! WE HAVE JUST RECEIVED WORD THAT FORT SCORPIO IS BEING RAIDED BY AT LEAST 500 ENEMY PERSONNEL! I REPEAT, THIS IS NOT A DRILL! THIS IS NOT A DRILL!” Everyone runs over to the armory and grabs their choices of weapons. Invocate103 chooses a D4 Hurricane with a D4 Autopistol and a few grenades; 5 flashbangs, 2 stuns and 10 fragmentations. He hurries to the ship named “A.W. Turmoil”. The name fits quite well, considering it’s been through a lot of chaos in its day.
Time, 0012:00036:000057
“Wow, my first mission,” a conscript whispers to himself.
“You shouldn’t be so excited,” a guard said. “War isn’t a marvelous thing.”
“But still…” the conscript said.
The plane took off. The plane was high-tech, and futuristic. The walls were grey and covered with fencing, the door leading to the cockpit was black with an alarm over it, and at the back of the plane was a mounted RPG, 3 round burst, and had virtually unlimited ammo. Outside, there was a huge BOOM. The sirens blared. A hologram appeared (the new conscript watched in awe) and said, “Warning, we have been hit with several Gatling Gun rounds in the engine and it doesn’t look good for this ship. Prepare for parachuting.” It was the pilot.
“Looks like it’s your lucky day. Grab a parachute and get ready for ejection.” Everyone grabbed a parachute above their heads in preperation. Invocate103 had a look of determination on his face.
“Three… Two…”
“One.” The roof opened and then the seats sprung upwards. Everyone was thrown off. Invocate103 released his parachute and so did the others. They glided down gently. They landed in frigid, cold environment. “Oh great…” Invocate103 muttered. As the highest rank, unfortunately, he had to address everyone. “Guys, we have good news. We are near Fort Scorpio.” A scout sighed in relief. "But we are nearer to Fort Fornax. We should over there to check up."
Suddenly, an intermission appeared on the radio. "Help! Fort Fornax is being raided by an enemy! Someone, anyone, please, help us!"
"There's the training we needed before. Come on, let's go help." |
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| 12 Jan 2011 10:02 AM |
| I will make another one either today or tommorow. |
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| 19 Feb 2011 12:45 PM |
(Fixed title.)
(Sorry for late post. I was trying to figure out what happens here.)
(If you’re wondering when they get to Scorpio, they get there in the next chapter.)
Summary of last chapter: Introduced main character named Invocate103, a strong ROBLOXian and leader. He is also a coordinator in R.A.T. An alarm blares as they run to their planes to defend Scorpio, a new fort to R.A.T. Invocate102's plane encounters an enemy and Invocate103's crew lands near Fort Fornax. They received a call for help and currently heading over to that direction...
Chapter 2: The Raid on the Fort
Time: 1:06:09:78
Location: Fort Fornax
The squad of ROBLOXians arrived at the entrance of Fort Fornax.
"Ok, ready men!" Invocate103 said.
Suddenly, a camera appeared from a secret slot above the entrance. "Who goes there?" The camera asked.
"This is Squad 1337, a squad sent from Fort Celeste. We ---" Invocate103 was interrupted.
"I didn't come from Fort Celeste!" A conscript said. He received a solid hit via a scout and lost 1/10 of his health. He recovered quickly.
"Well, as I was saying, we came after we got a signal from this fort. Our plane crashed, and that's when we got the signal."
"I sent that signal!" Suddenly, a hologram appeared and they saw a supervisor stranded in the control room. "The door was broken dow, yet no one was in this room. So I took the chance, went in, and welded the door back down. No one could get in. Quick, you have to help us!"
"Wait, what do you mean 'us'?"
"My squad was captured by these raiders. They call themselves the 'Lofner Strikers' (not a real group. Any group with this name is merely coincidental)."
"Will do. Thanks." The squad, with Invocate103 as its leader, stepped into the fort. As soon as they went in, they heard gunshots and snipers. "Quiet, they might hear us. Go for a preemptive strike." They crouched down and silently snuck into the lobby. Invocate103 held up his hands. He counted on his fingers as he grabbed his D4 Hurricane. 3, 2, 1. "Go!" The squad stood and took out about 25 men unaware of them. Invocate102 rolled to a desk along with a soldier and took cover there. A few others hid behind a huge plant. They all fought fiercely. None of the men in the squad lost their lives as they gradually got rid of all of the men. All of a sudden, a high rank in the Lofner Strikers walked in and everyone stopped firing. He was holding a hostage: the man that was in the control room.
"Oh no you don't!" Invocate103 pulled out a flashbang and threw it at the enemy. It exploded and he was blind. Invocate103 didn’t waste a second as he pulled out his D4 Autopistol and bloxxed the man in the head.
“Thanks a lot!” the supervisor said. “I am in great debt to you.”
“It was no problem. Now, about that squad…”
Time: 02:50:11 A.M. PST
The team entered the recreational center. “Clear,” said a scout. But then, they saw the door to the garden blocked off with a brick. Invocate103 found this strange and went over to investigate. He knocked on the brick. It was a diamond plated brick, and it was welded tightly, so tightly, even the loudest scream couldn’t be heard from the other side.
“Team, we need some C4.” Invocate103 said. A guard came up with some dynamite. “That’ll do it. Thanks!” Invocate103 took the explosives, placed them on the door, (“Stand back!” shouted Invocate103. “And get ready!”) and blew up the explosives. There were so many confused faces, that there wasn’t any time to react. Everyone shot everyone except the hostages, which were thankfully there. No one was injured during this fight except the enemy. The team untied the hostages and a seemingly feeling of calm rested on the squad. “I think that’s all of them.” Invocate103 said. To his radio, he said, “Command, we need some transport here. We won the raid, and these brave soldiers need to get back home.”
“We are sending transport now, one for the team, and one getting you to Scorpio, Squad 1337. Command out.” Everyone cheered and yipped. The transport got there 10 minutes later and by the time they knew it, they were on their way to Fort Scorpio.
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| 19 Feb 2011 12:52 PM |
| Seems good, I can't wait to see more of this. |
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wakatoba
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| 19 Feb 2011 01:12 PM |
| um a bit boring put in names of real rats |
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kingzeb
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| 19 Feb 2011 01:18 PM |
REALLY Good.
Can I be in it?
Im x-101st Master Sgt and T2M 3rd In Command
I write alot of stories, and I am the head writer on the C&G Movie(Being written still)
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| 19 Feb 2011 03:27 PM |
| THIS IS BEAST!!!!!!!!!!!!! I READ THE 2ND CHAPTER AND IT WAS STILL EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| 19 Feb 2011 08:14 PM |
| Anyone notice the squad name? :P |
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| 27 Nov 2011 12:34 PM |
[[After a long wait, It's here! Sorry about the delays!]]
[DISCLAIMER: This was made with the ranks I had received via PM or comments about a year ago, so if I got your rank wrong, or if I don’t match your personality, I’m sorry. :/)
Chapter 3: The Mysterious Soldier
Time: 03:06:16 PM, December 08
Summary of Last Chapter: Why would you need a summary? The chapter is right there above this post. >:3
Invocate could hear the enemies from a mile away – that’s how experienced he was. A cold shiver ran down his spine as he heard the blood-shilling war cry of the enemy: “FIGHT AND KILL OR DIE!” Ugh, he thought. He had heard way too much of that at Fornax. Invocate turned and addressed Squad 1337. “Let’s just go there, get what’s needed done, and get out. Alright?” KillerWarewolf, a soldier, could see the fear in his eyes, darting madly left and right. “Hooah” was the only thing that came to mind after he was finished observing his leader. “Sir, Scorpio is about a mile away. Heavy infantry is detected, about 60 of them,” the pilot said. “Pull the Sovato low, we walk from here.” Kingzeb leaned into KillerWarewolf and whispered quietly, “Walking? I already did my fair share of walking getting up to Master Sergeant.” Kingzeb was an X-101st soldier that volunteered to help the squad. “Eh, better than risking our lives in the open air, where they might take advantage of our turrets.” “True that.” The Sovato jerked low and everyone yelped. Even the burly gunner Tugger903 (lol, make that up, huh?) jumped in fright. Soon it slowed down, and eventually came to a halt. Everyone jumped off the helicopter, looked back onto the horizon and started onwards. “Better then crashing, right?” Invocate said to the group. His reply generated laughter that could be noticed all the way back at Celeste. * * Squad 1337 finally made it to Scorpio! The rocky walls of the canyon were as brown as you could remember, and the snowy hills were a soft white. Everyone sighed when they made it into the tunnel leading to the base – Without detection! But as they exited the tunnel, a security camera shot out of the rocky wall to their left! “SCANNING PROGRESS STARTING…” A green beam of light shot out of the camera and slowly, but surely, scanned up and down Invocate’s face. “COORDINATOR INVOCATE103. YOUR IMMEDIATE REQUIRED INSIDE THE BASE! REPORT TO Th-Th-Th…” The camera stuttered and short circuited. Invocate found himself wondering, Why the heck does this ALWAYS happen to me? “Alright squad, let’s move in.” They stayed next to the rocky walls and shrubbery and soon found a way up the hill. Killer saw Invocate take off the silencer on his Hurricane. “Sir, isn’t this a covert mission?” “Covert? Covert isn’t my style.” To prove it, he pulled the pin off the newly invented Sparrow Fragmentor and threw it at a group of Lofner’s Strikers guards. They blew up just as fast as the grenade was thrown. “CHARGE!” They rolled off the plants (Forgive me, D4, thought Invocate) and advanced in the snowy plains. Invocate neatly shot the hat off a soldier and sent him off running while Killer and King were producing major carnage making the Hurricane live up to its name. As everyone fought, the infantry decreased until there were no more guards. Invocate threw his Hurricane into the air and it neatly in his backpack. (First person that guesses the reference correctly wins a virtual cookie!) “Who’s next?” * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * They advanced into the base. As they walked, they noticed something strange. “Hey guys, where’s the inside guards?” Invocate gasped as a bullet whizzed by his head. “OPEN FIRE!” Suddenly, about 45.789 people approximately jumped out at them. The first wave was knocked out with ease. The squad kept together and surrounded the wave until they were dead or they ran away. Then next wave wasn’t so easy. This time, they shot off Invocate’s helmet. Everyone looked at him, scared. (Moar cookie points if you get the reference again) “What? I’m not dead. Look out!” Suddenly, more soldiers jumped, almost twice the size of the first wave! “Arrow formation, go, go, go! Penetrate through those forces!” But Invocate’s mind was on something else. He had seen a RAT soldier shackled to a wall! being beat with a whip by low ranks. And how he had beaten the giants, he had no idea. But as soon as he finished, he rushed up into the wall and shot the two men with his auto pistol. They were knocked out. Invocate started to free the RAT soldier, and the RAT soldier had a quizzical look on his face. “Why didn’t you kill him?” “Should I have?” “Well, you could’ve… Anyways, thanks for saving me. That was very kind of you.” “Don’t think much of it.” Invocate grinned. He had never heard of a soldier as brave as to rush into a base with only a Tide. “So what’s your name?” “That doesn’t matter right now. For the moment, call me…” He seemed lost in thought. “I know! Call me Feelright.” “Okay… So, do you have any intel on the enemy?” “Intel that needs to be given to an admiral ASAP. Are you up to being a hero today?
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| 05 May 2012 04:28 PM |
"and it neatly in his backpack" Typo, and it neatly landed in his backpack.
~LOST FON DRIVE~ Hint hint
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| 07 Jun 2012 11:52 PM |
(Again, another chapter! Enjoy!)
Chapter 4: “Hot Grenade”
Time: 03:52:27 PM, December 08
Invocate stood up and shook his legs. It had been a long 40 minutes. He pulled his D4 Hurricane to his shoulder, as everyone stood up. “Alright, let’s move,” he said in a whisper. The squad, now fully awake, crept towards the door. Silently, they crept into the rec room. The place was so packed with the Strikers, no one managed to see them through the window. However, the door to the rec room from the lobby was locked. Invocate nodded his head, and everyone took turns placing a Frostarian charge on the door. Once everyone was done, they ran back into the lobby, flipped out their switches and… Boom. About 10 people went flying into the next hallway. Every soldier in that room burst into the lobby, hip firing inaccurately everywhere. (Oh goodness, why do I always get put in these positions?) Invocate thought. “Alright squad, on me!” Invocate rushed into the men. He shot one in the foot, grabbed one, shoved a concussion cupcake into his face, and threw him into 5 other men, felling them like dominoes. He put away his hurricane as he kicked a table into someone’s face – No need. The squad joined it. Tugger slapped someone with his giant hands, and body slammed that same guy and about 5 more people. Feelright took his blunt mace; tripped someone, swung the mace into someone’s face (explosions could be heard), and spun the mace into someone so many times, he had a giant urge to say “Shining Fang!” (Kudos to whoever finds the reference, post in the comments). Kingzeb tackled a guy into a glass table; soon everyone in the rec room was knocked out. “Alright, let’s move… again.” Invocate sighed. They crossed the rec center into the hallway across from it. Inside the library, there were huge amounts of people. Many of them looked like low ranks, but all of them could equal certain death. Invocate plucked a grenade from his vest. It had a giant smiley face with a bucket on it. “Everyone put on your safety helmets…” He pulled the pin and threw it at a guy, who promptly panicked and threw it back. Invocate caught it… and threw it back. This continued for a while, all of the people in the room staring at the grenade like it was a tennis ball in a rally. Finally, after hours, Invocate caught it one final time, turned, and threw it at someone else. The guy was hit in the head, and the grenade exploded… Into rainbows and confetti. All of the men in the room, excluding squad 1337, shouted “Yaaaay!” And then fell on the ground asleep. (I love my job,) invocate thought. He motioned the squad. They descended into the main area of Scorpio. The hallways were clear. The meeting hall was not. There sat the admiral, in front of a huge audience. These guys relied on numbers. Another man, probably a high rank, held a hand on the admirals chin, and growled in a hoarse town, “Where are the documents…?” This was too much for Invocate. He yelled “Squad, Grenades in the stands!” Boom, boom boom boom boom. Now there was just the squad, the admiral, and the high rank. Invocate jumped on the high rank, who promptly kicked him in the face. Invocate smiled. Too fast, too soon. He took his last grenade. It had… Two smiley faces, two buckets, and a picture of a guy named generation418. Whoever the heck that was. Invocate threw it into the air… and a giant bucket fell from the sky, trapping the high rank. Now who was interrogating?
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