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| 06 Jun 2012 07:14 PM |
A long, long time ago there once was a civilization named the Zyrmek, These people spoke a language once known as Zyrum and was created by Zyrmek. The Zyrmek where the best crafters and enchanters of all the land...
And so one day in the Zyrmek Kingdom, Ciafel the best enchanter and Blacksmith decided to create 3 legendary swords. One of those swords were called Iyua Ju Phalmo, which in the English Language it means Blade of Enlightment. This blade is special because with every strike it burns the flesh of the enemy from the everlasting light that pours out of this blade. The second sword was called Iyua Ju Dakraic, which in the English Language it means Blade of Darkness. This blade is special because everytime the wielder of this sword wields it in his/her hand they turn into a dark demonic god named Hiefluja and he could only be defeated with Iyua Ju Phalmo. The only other way to defeat him is by removing the sword from his hands and then he/she will be transformed back into his/her original form therfore making him mortal.
The third sword is called Iyua Ju Hualence, which in the English Language it means Blade of Balance. This sword is the most powerful of the three swords beacause it can defeat both Iyua Ju Phalmo, and Iyua Ju Dakraic. The reason it can defeat both is because it is blessed by the gods of both Light and Dark therfore the wielder of this sword can defeat both dark and light. To wield this sword takes great responsibility because that person must choose between being a Hero or a Villain and fight for good or evil.
After these swords were made a disaster happened... 2 of the swords where being held by the wrong people therfore it brought chaos to the world light against dark. But then a hero had found Iyua Ju Hualence in the ruins of the town where the blades where first made. This hero had chosen to fight for good and so he and the wielder of Iyua Ju Phalmo had come together to defeat Hiefluja and succeeded to bring balance to the world once again. After everything was normal the 2 wielders of Iyua Ju Phalmo, and Iyua Ju Hualence and now Iyua Ju Dakraic had hid the 3 swords somewere nobody had discovered yet in hopes that they never would be.
About 600 years later the swords had been found once again and there was still no wielder of Iyua Ju Hualence. Will you be the one to wield this sword once again?
Story written and originally created by: TheDarkDeception01
[Words you need to know] Iyua - Blade Ju - Of Phalmo - Enlightment Dakraic - Darkness Hiefluja - Dread Hualence - Balance
I will be making another forum post with most of the words you will need to know while playing The Lost Blades. Although in the game there will be an option to translate each thing they say.
This game has not even been created yet the only thing available right now is the story. |
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| 06 Jun 2012 08:31 PM |
Game Design isn't for posted your game's story, we're not interested in that. What we are interested in is what features your game is going to include.
You can still tell us a summarized version of your story, that always helps for suggestions we give you, but it should not be the entire post. |
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| 06 Jun 2012 08:54 PM |
| Really? Then why does it say Novels on the description of this forum? Novel = Story if you didn't know that. |
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| 07 Jun 2012 01:37 AM |
Bump! Leave comments on things I need to add or whatever you think I need to know.
"Darkness never dies, it corrupts those within its reach" |
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| 07 Jun 2012 04:46 AM |
Sounds pretty good.
> Game Design isn't for posted your game's story
Actually, yes it is. Did you even read the sticky? "Note to participate you need to either discuss a novel idea that you think makes a good game"
> What we are interested in is what features your game is going to include.
Yes, what YOU are interested in.
Just because you forum here a lot, does not make you the leader or king of the forum.
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| 07 Jun 2012 11:04 AM |
Wrong use of the word "novel", they aren't talking about books. Also, I don't come to this forum for 'story time', I'm here to look at a game's design.
There is a difference between posting an entire storyline (Which you shouldn't do because of spoilers anyways), saying "this is my game", and posting a small description of of the story, and including what the game has for features.
So yes, what "we're" interested in, because I doubt forumers here are more interested in reading an entire story opposed to what a game is about feature-wise (What this forum is actually for). Because if they wanted to read stories, there's another forum for that.
Also, I never once said or imposed that I'm "king" of this forum. And niether are you from your attitude, Lego.
And let it not be missed that this storyline is still good, it is good, all I'm asking you to do is post about your game feature-wise more than story-wise. Please do so. I'm interested. |
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| 07 Jun 2012 12:12 PM |
Theres no other use for the word "Novel" so just stop with that. If you dont want to read the story go look at another topic and dont post negatively on something that you didnt even read. Also do you see one game spoiler in here at all? No its because its a STORY for the game itself the only thing I said that is like a very small spoiler that doesn't even matter is the you are going to beable to translate what they say in case you dont understand it.
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| 07 Jun 2012 12:23 PM |
I'm just going to drop the entire conversation. It's going nowhere.
But still, you haven't posted any features, so I'll ask again. What are the features of this place. I'm interested. |
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| 07 Jun 2012 01:21 PM |
Well just like any RPG there will be different zones for each level and a vairety of creatures to defeat so there not the same one in every area. But in this RPG the story of the game will progress as you level up meaning cutscenes, and tasks that you would need to do. This game will be built with ROBLOX bricks to make sure that the player has plenty of room.
"Darkness never dies, it corrupts those within its reach..." |
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