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| 07 Jun 2012 06:09 AM |
In the broken trenches of Celestle, The cries of wounded Soldiers hit by the Frostarian Ice-ball plague and the sounds of Battle as the Guns roared through the Sky.
"All at hold men" Shouted a Disjointed Colourtheory in the calm but angry way. As the X-101 Soldiers attacked the gates of Celestle to Proclaim everlasting glory over the Old-Foe.
*BANG BANG BANG*
Out of the blue, St0rmx was wounded. A Fatal shot to Temple; The blood arose like a Subsonic plague.
"MAN DOWN MAN DOWN" Shouted Piede in a rush of Uncertainty. It was all going wrong for RAT.
"FORWARD MEN" Exclaimed Shaye; Shaye with the smirk Colourtheory was drenched from the story of war and death.
But he knew that he had to attack with his heart, Even with the battle wounds.
He rose from his seat; Picked up the Sword and dashed forward with an angry frown upon his face. He looked stronger then ever; Like an Immortal Lion weighting for the kill upon it's dazzled pray.
Swing swing swing, Blood gore rush everywhere the Adrenaline was pumped like a Cyclone meeting a Hurricane.
Then it came to the big face-down; Colourtheory looked Shaye in the eye. She looked back.
And old wild-west or an Old Battle-showdown; Shaye wounded Colour as she shoot him in the arm.
Colour defenseless on his knees; What is to happen next my friend. Shaye pointed the gun At Colour's Inhumane face.
"It's over now Boy" Suddenly Colour grabbed Shaye and pushed her soft-body onto his chest.
Looking her in the eye; They stared until their lips met. Colourtheory removed the soft velvet of Shaye.
"No Colour this can't be!"
"Yes it can, I'll make it happen I don't care anymore I want to be with you!"
And then it Happened...
To be continued.
"I am the game, And nothing is above the game"- Lordmerick |
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Ariff
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Hockey868
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:12 AM |
| well this looks like a decent story anOH MY GOD NO STOP NOW. |
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Goaty2
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:15 AM |
wait a second are they doing that in the middle of a battle there's so many things wrong here |
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Ariff
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:19 AM |
i guess doing "the dance with no pants" in a middle of a battle is the today's craze
LET'S GO TO AFGHANISTAN. |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:21 AM |
Very nice writing.
I expect this to-OH MY GOD!
-/(I know all)\- |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:28 AM |
you know i never see lunatheory fanfiction i just see the occasional xrainingtheoryx and even shayetheory as of right now
/notimplyinganything |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:31 AM |
i don't have a completely disturbing fanfic well probably because i'm a male, lol.
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:32 AM |
i'm surprised nobody has made lunadragon or shayeartia or shiloraining fanfiction
(im so sorry) |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:32 AM |
'i don't have a completely disturbing fanfic'
dude neither do i and i used to be like mckailey when i still went on OT regularly |
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Ariff
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:34 AM |
"shayeartia"
what has been seen cannot be unseen.
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:34 AM |
mindless admirals
mindless admirals everywhere
-Veltex |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:37 AM |
sorry, I ment Marshals
-Veltex |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:39 AM |
YES YES DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE
''I am the law; and nothing; is above the law.'' ~Alkia |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:46 AM |
YOU LOVE MY STORIES...
HA HA HA HA
UP NEXT GENERATION AND DROFTI
"I am the game, And nothing is above the game"- Lordmerick |
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| 07 Jun 2012 06:49 AM |
Make one where I record it with a camcorder while hiding in the bushes.
-/(I know all)\- |
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