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| 06 Jun 2012 12:07 PM |
"Wiseman wiseman!" a villager cried, "With all this war going on, there is no room for peace. What can I do?" the wiseman answered it with no concern, "Anyone can start a war but few can spread peace. You are not one of peace."
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Thought of naming it 'The Wiseman', but decided against it.
Any suggestions for the name? |
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| 06 Jun 2012 12:21 PM |
Mm, I have no suggestions.
But the poem is good! |
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Riku1257
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| 06 Jun 2012 12:29 PM |
| The poem speaks true. The Wiseman is a good name. |
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| 06 Jun 2012 12:55 PM |
| Very good, poem, I look up to people like you, I leave a Haiku of the week on my bio and continually leave poems lying around and I really like your more than a lot of the poems I wrote, NICE WORK! |
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| 06 Jun 2012 03:09 PM |
Thank you, Creative. I've been writing poetry for awhile and I have about 28(?) pieces written.
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| 06 Jun 2012 07:56 PM |
| Can you make a poem describing an explosion's beauty? |
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