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| 19 May 2012 08:39 PM |
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| 19 May 2012 08:53 PM |
| Sofi King, 16. Currently Amity. Divergent with aptitude for Dauntless and Erudite. Smart and calculating, but she never gets along with Erudite kids (or Amity, for that matter). |
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| 19 May 2012 08:59 PM |
| Sydney Moore, 16. Is Erudite, but wants to be Dauntless. Aptitude was Divergent for Dauntless, Erudite, and Abnegation. Is smart but isn't a jerk likes the other Erudites, but is nice and easy to get along with. My father, Kelly Moore, is the Erudite rep and is a very nice but ambitious dude. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:01 PM |
| (Can I join since I joined your old one? It's ok if you say no.) |
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| 19 May 2012 09:01 PM |
Starting... Now! We are on the way to the choosing ceremony.
[Sydney]
I stood in the bus, hanging on to a rail. My brilliant light blue eyes were wide in the dim bus. My sister, Anna Moore, stood beside me, her blue jacket bright in the dull light. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:03 PM |
~Sofi~
I followed the crowd of red-and-yellow Amity towards the Choosing ceremony. Standing in the circle, I stared hard at the huge bowls.
Dauntless. Erudite.
I knew where I was going, of course. I hated Amity. And Erudite wasn't much better. But the thrill seekers in Dauntless...
A quick mind would help there, too. And every other person would underestimate that skinny, 'peace-loving' transfer from Amity.
The Choosing begins, in reverse alphabetical order, and I force myself to pay attention. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:05 PM |
| (Can I just copy and paste my old CS?) |
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| 19 May 2012 09:08 PM |
(Sure.)
[Sydney]
It was a blur, but they finally called my name. I squared my shoulders. I knew what I was going to do. I would be with my father in Erudite. I would be confident.
I stepped forward, in the center of the bowls, and cut my hand. The Erudite water was pink. I was ready to make it red. But as I stepped forward, I caught sight of the Dauntless.
Their spiky hair and tattoos were a mark of arrogance, but in a way, they were... Linked. The Erudite stood stiffly apart, not touching each other. I shook my head. I was Erudite through and through.
I held my hand over the water. I blinked, and then an urge drove me to whip around and drop my blood over the coals. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:09 PM |
Name- Maya Winchester A/ge- (must be 16, if you are older, you need to have a job) 16 G/ender- F Appearance- Long, wavy brown hair and brown eyes. Tall and slim, with pale skin. (http://www.roblox.com/Meg-Masters-item?id=31022073) (P.S. I'm not sure if Candor have a specific outfit like Abnegation, and when she is in Dauntless, just imagine her in normal Dauntless clothes) Birth Faction- (Abnegation, Amity, Candor, Dauntless, Erudite) Candor Faction you'll switch to- (You can stay in your birth faction.) (Abnegation, Amity, Candor, Dauntless, Erudite) Dauntless Skills- (optional) She is very agile and flexible, but she is not the strongest person on Earth. Friends- (optional) None yet Weapon of choice- A dagger and throwing knives. Personality- She is stubborn and determined, but sometimes too reckless. She is also kind and brave. Job- (17 or older only) None Other- I'm not sure if I want to be Divergent or not right now, just so you know.
Eaton |
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| 19 May 2012 09:10 PM |
| (Great, thanks for including the picture. Hop in anytime.) |
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| 19 May 2012 09:12 PM |
(You're before me reverse-alphabetically, so go ahead with your Choosing)
~Sofi~
People muttered as an obviously torn Erudite girl chose Dauntless at the last second. I eyed her silently. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:13 PM |
[Sydney]
I walked shakily to the Dauntless, who hooted and hollered and pounded my on the back. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:14 PM |
(No problem. Thanks for letting me join! Also, I'm getting Insurgent tomorrow. :DDD)
Maya
I stand, trying not to look at the crowd. I was having enough trouble deciding which Faction I was going to join, and I didn't need any pressure. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:15 PM |
| (Awesome! I loved that book :D) |
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| 19 May 2012 09:20 PM |
(You've read it already?! No spoilers please! I want to start reading it tomorrow, on my birthday. :D)
Maya
I squeeze my eyes shut when I hear them call my name. Swallowing and trying to be brave, I walk forward, take the knife, and slice it into my palm. My eyes shift from the glass for Candor (I can't remember what represented Candor. Did I get it right?) and the Coals for Dauntless. With one swift motion, I hear my blood sizzle on the coals. I had done it. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:22 PM |
(Yep!)
[Sydney]
My mouth quirked a smile as I saw Maya. A transfer to go with me. Only five, not counting me and Maya, have transfered. |
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| 19 May 2012 09:26 PM |
Maya
I calmly walk towards the Dauntless, ignoring the stares of the crowd. |
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| 20 May 2012 03:54 PM |
(Sorry, I got kicked off the computer.)
~Sofi~
When my name was called, I walked forward confidently. I took the knife and turned to face the bowls. With a little half-smile, I cut my hand over the coals and joined the Dauntless.
Some of the Dauntless were openly staring at me. I guess it's not common for someone raised in peace-loving Amity to transfer to the generally violent Dauntless.
They'd learn pretty fast that I was NOT a normal peace-loving Amity girl.
I stood near the other two faction transfers. The girl from Erudite that had switched at the last second, and the Candor girl. I nodded politely, but offered no words, either to them or the other Dauntless. |
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| 20 May 2012 06:29 PM |
Maya
I nod back to the Amity girl, but my mind was elsewhere. I was thinking about how much my family hates me right now. |
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| 20 May 2012 08:53 PM |
[Sydney]
I gave a small wave to the Amity girl, knowing how stupid I must look, a speck of blue in a sea of black. I looked up, and saw my father's still-shocked expression, my mother's smiling eyes, encouraging me to do what I thought was right. I clenched my fist. Faction before blood. Faction before blood. |
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| 20 May 2012 09:09 PM |
Maya
I sigh and watch the others choose. |
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| 20 May 2012 09:31 PM |
[Sydney]
After about ten minutes, it was over. The Dauntless spilled from the large room, tumbling down the stairs, one large, mass wave of black, with eleven splashes of color mingled around. |
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| 20 May 2012 09:40 PM |
Maya
Finally, it was over. I shoot my parents a final glance as I begin to walk away. |
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| 20 May 2012 09:48 PM |
[Sydney]
Even then Erudite was great, they were all determined to take their time, to go slow and deliberate. This was all demolished by the Dauntless.
They ran, tripping and howling, with whoops and hollers. |
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