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Re: [VS] The win for life.

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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:37 PM
Chapter 1: The special surprise

Victoria yawned as the morning trumpet blew loudly, she was about to fall back to sleep until she realized it was her day to be announced the new assistant of General Adpunk. Victoria got up and had a nice hot shower, got changed into her uniform and brushed her hair into a ponytail. She went out and greeted nonhelperbot politely and walked with him to the rally centre. He went down to sit in front row while Victoria went to backstage and sat on a chair next to General adpunk himself. General adpunk greeted Victoria, "Hello there Corporal, you ready for a big long day?!" Victoria replied with a grin, "I sure am sir!" General adpunk gave a smile and continued reading the morning newsletter from the Nexus. Suddenly, the trumpet blew and General adpunk walked out on stage and said into the microphone,"Hello Vortex Security! I am pleased to summon you this morning to announce my new Ally assistant, she is fast and skilled in so many ways. Please welcome to the stage, Corporal Victoria!"

Victoria walked to the stage as Vortex Security clapped and smiled as they saw Victoria. Everyone knew Victoria, she was one of the best combat fighters. She was trained in sword fighting, shooting, kung fu, taekwondo, gymnastics and combat. She passed all the final test in a successful way. Suddenly, the claps stopped and people starting murmuring and running in the crowd and suddenly a massive bomb dropped right next to the building. Victoria ran with general adpunk to the side as nonhelperbot joined them. Luckily, nonhelperbot brought two guns, one for general adpunk and himself. Victoria got her own one out and shot at the plane above in the engine. Suddenly, the plane itself got itself on fire and landed on the rally stage, Victoria ran to it as the soldier came out of the plane. Victoria punched the soldier as he dropped to the ground, she grabbed him with her left hand on his shoulder and kneed him in the face. The soldier fell on the ground, he was knocked out. Victoria looked at his uniform in shock, VAK and NB are working together.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:41 PM
Chapter two will be out later.

Just message me if you want to be in the story.
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jack705 is not online. jack705
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01 Jun 2012 07:42 PM
Sigh.

What has VS come to since I left
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:47 PM
There is really nothing wrong to make a story.

Well, The leadership has changed. New bases and better leaders and more trainings.
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jack705 is not online. jack705
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01 Jun 2012 07:49 PM
"Better leaders"

Aric and Lilly are the only good ones left.

All of the other leaders I either trained, were my apprentice, colonel, and somehow got corrupted

Or they just bought the rank/were given the rank because they were personal friends and don't know how to run a group.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:49 PM
Well,

your opinion.



But I am just making a story, there is no harm in that.
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jack705 is not online. jack705
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01 Jun 2012 07:51 PM
Actually the only good ones left are
Opper
Lilly
Aric
Ttom
JP
Colt


4 of which I trained personally.
I guess I should be proud seeing some of my old apprentices as high ranks.

But obviously victoria, you were not around in the glory days.

And your story has quite a few grammatical errors.

But it's alright.
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Kaden717171 is not online. Kaden717171
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01 Jun 2012 07:52 PM
Hey can I be in your next story?
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:52 PM
Well,

Thank you.


But I do think that adpunk is a very good general.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:53 PM
Sure Kaden.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:54 PM
Kaden,

Are you in VS?

If so, what is your rank?

If not, what would you like to be?
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jack705 is not online. jack705
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01 Jun 2012 07:55 PM
Adpunk I also trained a bit if I remember.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 07:56 PM
Cool.

Would you like to be in the story?

If so, what would you like to be?
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 08:08 PM
Making a new chapter now.
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01 Jun 2012 08:17 PM
Chapter 2: The shock.


4:16 pm - Outside the rally centre.


Victoria was still in shock as she looked at the soldier. How could this possibly happen, she thought. She called in the others and they looked inside the plane, they flashed the torch on someone and it stayed there. Victoria was in even more shock, there was a Vortex Security Private on the plane, he had a injured leg. Ad shook his head sadly, he whispered, "What happened, one minute we were having a fantastic time, 5 minutes later look at us." nonhelperbot carried the private out of the plane and said, "Where is the VS hospital again?" Victoria pointed to North-east and nonhelperbot nodded his head in approval. He said,"I'll be back soon with supplies." Victoria said,"I might as well come with you. This Private might give us information." Adpunk nodded in approval and said, "I will come too." The three walked together to the north-east direction and looked around. The city was deserted, everyone was indoors. On the way the three met a VS soldier called Kaden. He had a shotgun around his neck with dog tags. He saluted to adpunk and said, "Sir, Would you like me to help?" Suddenly, Kaden's face turned red with shock as he saw the soldier. Adpunk said, "Yes, what is the problem?" Kaden replied with a mumble, "That is my friend sir, Private Goku. He was missing for a month."

6:12 pm - Walking to the hospital

Victoria shook her head, "This is private Goku, the man in the newsletter this morning?" Kaden nodded and nonhelperbot said,"He is not dead, he is just injured, we are taking him to the hospital. We found him in the VAK and NB plane." Kaden nodded, he said, "I may as well tell you. He was on a secret mission by Arch General Aric. Noble Blade was getting suspicious so he was sent there. I think they found out who he was and tortured him by the look of it. He was supposed to report a month a go but he never did. Never did since. So we thought he was KIA." Victoria and adpunk nodded, adpunk replied, "KIA?" Victoria said, "Killed in Action." nonhelperbot, "I hate to break up the talk but we better start moving before dawn sets. Look over there. The hospital is only 800 meters away now." Everyone nodded and started walking to the hospital. In no time they arrived and the doctors and nurses took Private Goku straight away.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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01 Jun 2012 08:24 PM
Chapter 3 will be out later.
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RyanParker1167 is not online. RyanParker1167
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01 Jun 2012 10:32 PM
Great stories as usual Victoria. May I be in them? :)
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Kaden717171 is not online. Kaden717171
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01 Jun 2012 11:07 PM
I am a Corp.
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Kaden717171 is not online. Kaden717171
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01 Jun 2012 11:08 PM
Corporal
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Kaden717171 is not online. Kaden717171
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01 Jun 2012 11:10 PM
nice stories hope im in next one
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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02 Jun 2012 12:27 AM
Ok.
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02 Jun 2012 05:01 AM
Chapter 3: Talking with Goku

8:15pm - Waiting room

Victoria, Kaden, Adpunk and Nonhelperbot waited in the waiting room in the hospital. After 2 long hours a doctor came out and gave out some cookies and water. The doctor wasn't smiling and said, " Goku is seriously injured, he is able to talk but he won't be back on the battlefield for a long time, perhaps a year." Kaden replied immediatly, "But hes one of the best on the field!" Adpunk nodded in approval and said, "He is Kaden, but we can't do anything." Victoria and nonhelperbot nodded in approval. The doctor then said, "We have some rooms available if you would like to stay the night." Victoria said, "I think I would love to!" Adpunk, Kaden and nonhelperbot agreed. Victoria quickly asked, "Can we see Goku?" The doctor replied with a grin, "You can indeed. Follow me this way!" The Doctor led them into a room with a man in a bed. The man smiled and said, "Kaden, is that you?"

8:20 pm - Talking to Goku

Kaden replied with a great big smile on his face, "It is me. Look, we need you to tell us what happened?" Goku's smile faded away, "Alright. I was on a missi-" nonhelperbot interrupted, "We know that you were on the mission. But what happened while you were on it?" Goku nodded, he said, "I arrived at 3:15pm and recruited as a soldier, of course I was pretending. I got in there trust until I forgot about the message I had to deliver, sadly, you guys put me on the newsletter and they reconisgned me as the person. They beat me up...." Goku took a breath, "Tortured me for information and I refused. So they tied me up and took me on a plane to see my clan being killed and destroyed. It almost destroyed me watching what was happened." Victoria nodded. She said, "Well were gonna need a plan now, and fast with lot's of members.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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02 Jun 2012 05:02 AM
Apologies, I forgot to put in the last speech marks.


Floodcheck.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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02 Jun 2012 05:20 AM
Hmmm.

What group shall I bring in for the assist?
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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02 Jun 2012 05:21 AM
Perhaps my group?
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