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Re: WIJ Event Story - [Sh'darr - First Contact]

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jijibibi is not online. jijibibi
Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Total Posts: 1458
01 Jun 2012 12:24 PM
It have been 40 years. WIJ have been on the defensive.

Now, it is time to strike back.

On earth, it was different. Billions of people are worried, they cant sleep well evey night, fearing that the Sh'darr would drop a AntiMatter bomb onto earth, erasing all traces of life.

The Sh'darr are bred for war.

They have conqured tens, or not, HUNDREDS of galaxies, and who knows how many planets they have.

In the year 2156, the Chinese Hegamony have dropped 3 small astroids as a weapon, into Washington DC. 2 of the astroids were deflected by the shields of Washington DC but the third fell into the Atlantic Ocean, generating tsunamis that managed to claim 30 million poor souls.

And recently, now in 2405, the Sh'darr dropped a "Crowbar", or Kinetic - Kill bullets, which hit Europe, that destroyed more than $10 trillion worth of infrastructure, health care, buisnesses and industries, generated a magnitude 10 earthquake and sending tsunamis to America. Around 100 million people died that fateful day, and WIJ decided to take the offensive in the war.
The AI in Crossbow's head started speaking.

"Crossbow, you, some Sergeants, along with a handful of Troopers and Operatives are being called into the main assembly hold.
"Argh. Good time to ruin my sleep." Crossbow grunted as he pulled himself out of the sleep tube. He looked around, 5 other people were getting out of their tubes as well.

"Morning, Cross." I said.

"Morning, jiji." Cross said back, with a grumpy look.

The ship WSC Resolute - D suddenly began to vibrate, the alarm went red and eveyone pulled out of their sleep tubes and started gathering in straight, neat rows of 10 infront of Brigadier DizzDazz himself, the 3iC for WIJ. Standing beside him was the leader, the ultimate Chairman of WIJ, SilentSwords.
"All of you listen up! Our ship is nearing the enemy planet! I want you all to arm yourselves up, and get these masks on, incase the planet does not have any oxygen. Turn the side knob to release oxygen into your brain."

The assembled soldiers said in a clear and loud voice ," Sir yes sir!".
Crossbow was infront of me, and everyone lined up in neat rows into the Armory. The weapons, mobile rechargers were plentiful. I grabbed 10 rechargers, put them in my side bag, grabbed 2 Y14's and put them on my side gun holders. I then took a SUF and a couple of grenades. They will come in handy.

Crossbow decided to take the good ol' T11 incase he was fighting CQC. He then took a SKP and a Y14 along with some rechargers.

"Hey there!" I looked up. It was Officer Zangoose.

"Hey there, old friend." I replied and slung the SUF to my back and slid on the safety lock to prevent a accidental misfire.

I slid on my "gas mask" and attached the tubes the the side of my head,where there are 2 connectors, one to get the oxygen in, one to remove the carbon dioxide. I was ready.

"ON THE DOUBLE! FASTER!" Brigadier Super yelled at everyone. The motion quickened and after a few minutes everyone is armed and ready.

"We will attack the planet with 2 objectives, Objective Gold and Objective Diamond. Uploading now."

*blip*

The plan appeared in my head. I thoughtclicked on the file and it opened.

The plan was simple. Eradicate anything that isnt human.

Everyone then proceeded to load onto the Assult Dropships numbered A.DS-101, 102, 103, 104 until 110.

Ten dropships. Perfect.

I followed Crossbow and mentioned for Zangoose to follow me. We then entered Dropship 8, which were filled with alot of Operatives like me.
"Guys, im nervous, anyone got something to drink?" Someone asked.
"Shure, heres your favourite - you know what it is.." Someone else replied and threw a small, metallic bottle at him. He then drank it all in one glup and returned the bottle.

"All dropships, prepare for freefall in 3, 2, 1..."

The artificial blackhole generators in each ship activated, and all ships were freefalling through space for a moment, then regained their balance and started to fly.

The WSC Resoulte - D vibrated, and the outer shield collasped. Everyone watched in horror how technogically advanced the Sh'darr were, and seconds later, a ship that looked like a gigantic meteor floated by, and the WSC Redoulte - D shot it. Clear shot. The beam is a deadly invisible killer. The enemy shielding collasped and the WSC Resolute - D fired a Krait nuclear - tipped missle into the exposed hull, followed by a antimatter beam.
It was beautiful. The ships hull seemed to glow white, before exploding in a dazzling white patch of light. Everyone shielded their eyes as the meteorite ship exploded and after a second, its traces vanished.

We then took a rocky ride to the planet and suddenly found it dizzy, Everyone turned on the knob of their gas mask and set out. We then found a ancient, metalplated structure, that was Objective Gold. Suddenly, the walls began to move, as eight legged spiderlike creature with arms came out and shot at us. 3 people died in a instant with light exploding when they died.

"ANTIMATTER BEAMS! TAKE COVER!" someone yelled as a fourth beam shot just slightly above my hair, burning a hole in it.

"The aliens are going to PAY FOR THIS." I said, and chupping two grenades at them and shot one with the SUF.

They died but the third one remained standing. I then reloaded and let the SUF charge up for a powerful shot that is going to cost me 100% of the laser ammo that is in it.

And as suddenly as ever, the alien dropped dead, on the ground with my SUF burn mark.

=[To be continued.]=
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dizzdazz4 is not online. dizzdazz4
Joined: 01 Dec 2008
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01 Jun 2012 12:28 PM
Please post other chapters of this story on this same thread, as it will make it easier for us, along with posting this threads link on the event thread once done so we can see this story.

-Looking good.
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yenyang4 is not online. yenyang4
Joined: 04 Jun 2008
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01 Jun 2012 01:31 PM
... Im going to fix your gramatical errors.
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yenyang4 is not online. yenyang4
Joined: 04 Jun 2008
Total Posts: 428
01 Jun 2012 02:04 PM
First off.. you have to many tense changes... and I dont know if you know but the word An exists.
I have a cat
I have an Armadillo
I have a dog
I have an Enchalada



It has been 40 years. WIJ has been on the defensive.

Now, it is time to strike back.

On earth, it was different. Billions of people were worried, they couldn’t sleep well at night, fearing that the Sh'darr might drop an Antimatter bomb onto earth, erasing all traces of life.

The Sh'darr are bred for war.

They have conquered tens, if not, HUNDREDS of galaxies, and the countless planets contained in them.

In the year 2156, the Chinese Hegamony dropped 3 small asteroids, onto Washington D.C. Two of the asteroids were deflected by the energy shields, but the third fell into the ocean, generating huge tidal surges that managed to claim 30 million lives.

And recently, in 2405, the Sh'darr dropped a "Crowbar", or Kinetic - Kill bullets, which hit Europe, generating magnitude 10 earthquakes that destroyed more than ten trillion dollars’ worth of infrastructure, health care, businesses and industries. Around 100 million people died from the incident, and WIJ decided to take the offensive in the war.

The AI pinged on in the HUD of Crossbow, a WIJ operative.

"Crossbow, There has been an order for all operatives to head to the assembly hold.”
"Argh. Good time to ruin my sleep." Crossbow grunted as he pulled himself out of his bed. His Barrack members were also responding to the Message.
"Morning, Cross." Said jijibibi a fellow operations specialist

"Morning, jiji." Cross said back, with a grumpy look.

they were traveling aboard the starship WSC Resolute - D suddenly it began to violently shake, an alarm went off and everyone pulled themselves awake and started gathering in straight, neat rows of 10 in front of Brigadier DizzDazz, the 3iC for WIJ. Standing beside him was the leader, and Chairman of WIJ, SilentSwords.
DizzDazz cleared his throat and began to address the crowd that had gathered
"All of you listen up! Our ship is nearing the enemy planet! I want you all to suit up and check your weapons. Make sure that you all have full oxygen tanks!"

The assembled soldiers replied unison," Sir yes sir!".
Crossbow stood in front of jijibibi, and everyone lined up next to Armory. The weapons, and their ammo, mobile rechargers were plentiful. jijibibi grabbed 10 rechargers; put them in his side bag, grabbed 2 Y14's and put them on his side holsters. He then took a SUF and a couple of grenades.
“These will come in handy” he said with a grin.

Crossbow decided to take the good T11 in case he was fighting in close quarters. He then took a SKP and a Y14 along with some rechargers.

"Hey there!" jijibibi looked up. It was Officer Zangoose.

"Hey there, old friend." he replied and slung the SUF to his back and slid on the safety lock to prevent an accidental misfire.

he then slid on his Armor and hemlet and attached the tubes to the oxygen tank.

"ON THE DOUBLE! FASTER!" Brigadier Super yelled at everyone. The motion quickened and after a few minutes everyone is armed and ready.
The AI pinged again
"We will attack the planet with 2 objectives, Alpha and Beta, Uploading now."

*blip*

the outline appeared in the HUD. All of the Operatives spent a few minutes flipping through the files
The plan was simple. Eradicate anything that isn’t human.

Everyone then proceeded to load onto the Assault Drop ships.


jijibibi followed Crossbow and motioned for Zangoose to follow. They then entered Dropship 8, which was filled with several other Operatives.
"Anyone got something to drink?" Someone asked.
"Here,” Someone else replied and threw a small, metallic bottle at him. He took a swig and returned the bottle.

"All drop ships, prepare for launch in ten"

The doors opened and all ships dropped
Then an explosion,
The WSC Resoulte - D vibrated, and the outer shield collapsed. Everyone watched in horror as several explosions racked the ship , and seconds later, a ship that looked like a gigantic meteor floated by, and the WSC Redoulte - D aimed its weapons at it. Clear shot. The beam was a deadly invisible killer. The enemy shielding collapsed and the WSC Resolute - D fired a Krait nuclear tipped missile into the exposed hull, followed by a antimatter beam.
It was beautiful. The ship’s hull seemed to glow white, before exploding in a dazzling white patch of light. Everyone shielded their eyes as the meteorite ship exploded and after a second, its traces vanished.

We then took a rocky ride to the planet and suddenly found it dizzy, everyone turned on the knob of their gas mask and set out. We then found a ancient, metal plated structure, that was Objective alpha. Suddenly, the walls began to move, as eight legged spiderlike creature with arms came out and shot at us. 3 people died in an instant with light exploding when they died.

"ANTIMATTER BEAMS! TAKE COVER!" someone yelled as a fourth beam shot just slightly above my hair, burning a hole in it.

"The aliens are going to PAY FOR THIS." Jiji yelled out throwing, two grenades at them and shooting another with the SUF.

the first two perrished but the third remained standing. He reloaded and let the SUF charge up for a powerful shot that is going to cost me 100% of the laser ammo that is in it.

And as suddenly as ever, the alien dropped dead, on the ground with a SUF burn mark
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bioniclehero is not online. bioniclehero
Joined: 27 Sep 2008
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01 Jun 2012 02:12 PM
How would tubes leading into your brain to fuel it with oxygen, while also taking out carbon dioxide work. You brain isn't the only part of your body that needs oxygen, infact your entire body needs it. A normal mask would've sufficed. However, I thought that the story was still interesting, nice job. Make sure that you use spellcheck/grammarcheck in Word though. :P

-=Sergeant Bio=-
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yenyang4 is not online. yenyang4
Joined: 04 Jun 2008
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01 Jun 2012 06:49 PM
You mean.. Like I did for him
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jijibibi is not online. jijibibi
Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Total Posts: 1458
01 Jun 2012 11:40 PM
:L I WROTE IT WEHN I WAS VERY SLEEPY. :C
y u so bad to me.
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jijibibi is not online. jijibibi
Joined: 10 Oct 2008
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02 Jun 2012 12:20 AM
Bio, the brain is the top piriority, eh.
c:
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jammy101101 is not online. jammy101101
Joined: 26 Sep 2008
Total Posts: 5383
02 Jun 2012 07:41 AM
Nice story c:

Except I wrote mine during the night. I avoided most mistakes by using Opera, for once. It has spell check :)
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roboman26 is not online. roboman26
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08 Jun 2012 08:27 AM
Nice story, but please don't ask me to read anything else :u.
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