|
| 28 May 2012 03:38 PM |
Part 2 Character:Shino (Girl at school) area:school time:present =========================================================(people talking)"Hey Shino,did you hear about that Katashi kid being an orphan?" asked Kimiko,one of my closest friends."No.""Who are you taking to the prom? I'm taking Kazuhiko.Did you know his name means harmonious prince!?"Kimiko was so nosy. When I saw Katashi walk in I knew he was the one,so I replied"I'm taking Katashi,and his name means firmness and strength."I could tell she envied me."Your taking him?!"Before I could say anything the bell rang.I quickly grabbed my books and ran to history class.Katashi sat straight across from me and eyed me every now and then,I just couldn't concentrate.I walked out of class with a grin on my face...until Katsumi bumped me and said"Got a date for the prom yet?"...I was nearly speechless,"Yes,I'm taking Katashi." I said firmly."Your taking that orphan kid?What a loser!"she replied,and walked away.Katsumi was the popular girl. And there is ALWAYS a popular girl.She was taking Kono.He was popular for his skill and dexterity.He was probably the fastest in the school,although I don't think I've ever seen Katashi run. I went into the girl's locker room to change into my PE clothes.I always hated Physical Eduacation.But today we're doing half-mile long races,so I might get to see Katashi run.Katashi was the last in the first team's line and Kono in the second team's. That wasn't good,since there was an even number of people on both sides.I was against Katsumi...speechless I was.They won...they won...they won...they won...until it was finally my turn...I was running my fastest and..I-I WON!!!! Then it was Katashi's turn.He was a rocket!!!But...he didn't win...or lose.It was a tie.I could tell Kono and Katashi would soon be rivals.Definitely not what I expected. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 29 May 2012 07:16 PM |
| Like what? I'm probably much younger than you...So I want you to proofread for me :D ^-^ |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
Catstorm
|
  |
| Joined: 26 Jun 2007 |
| Total Posts: 11015 |
|
|
| 29 May 2012 08:52 PM |
| The Cutie Mark by Gabby Gums, Part 2 |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 29 May 2012 10:32 PM |
| Pretty good. Held my interest, can't wait to hear what happens next. :) |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 30 May 2012 07:11 PM |
| Btw im only 9 ^-^ ....A bit underaged? |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
| |
|
| |
|
| |
|
|
| 16 Jun 2012 01:37 PM |
| BUMP:Remaking page 1 and 2.This will happen in second chapter.I barely made details :( |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|