nights192
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| 28 May 2012 09:51 PM |
Hello. As everyone was, reluctant, to say the least, to want to do hands on tutoring, I have decided to start a series of roleplays with me emphasizing desirable traits roleplayers must have. For this particular roleplay, I will emphasize character design, as the title states.
In order to show how unique characters can give a boring, generic world life, this shall be a standard high-fantasy world that will be changes dynamically by the players, with me approving ideas and acting as the NPCs. Good luck, learn much, and more importantly, have some fun.
Current Locations: Bairul: The capital. Bairul is surrounded by lush forests and several lakes, which allowed a civilization to form. It is divided into three areas: Market: Located at the center of the town, the market is... well, a giant market. Upper City: Location of the gentry and castle. A fine of 100 gold is instituted as a tax for entry. Lower City: Location of the lower and middle classes. Also known as the slums due to a werewolf infestation in the eastern segment.
Rules: All ideas and/or characters must be approved by me before being implemented. You may kill other characters if the plot demands it. Perfect grammar must be used, as it allows for a sense of professionalism.
Character Sheet: Name: Species: (Anything within reason. I will likely have to make rules as you all dictate.) A.ge: (Above 18, please.) Location: (Must be in the capital, as nothing else exists yet.)
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:08 PM |
| (Genuis Idea my friend, it lets new Roleplayers learn how to RP the right way and how to do it good, and it lets experienced RP'ers to get better at it, I'll make a CS in a bit and see if anybody else joins) |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:09 PM |
| I am ashamed to bump again, however I believe this could be a nice exercise. |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:10 PM |
| (Thank you, KillerBlocks, and nice to meet you.) |
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| 28 May 2012 10:13 PM |
(Nice to meet you too)
Name: Alexander Hemming Species: Human A.ge: 21 Location: Captial |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:14 PM |
| (Alright, that is accepted. May I ask you post your 'starting post'?) |
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VoidHack
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| 28 May 2012 10:20 PM |
(Gladly)
It was a bright, sunny day in Bariul. The birds were churpping, the wind was blowing a nice cool breeze throughout the land, and not a cloud was in sight through out the seemingly endless light blue sky. Down in the market people were buzzing around, trading their goods every which way. Alexander was busy buying some bread from the bakery, a nice fresh smell of dough filled the air around the building. After Alexander had made his purchase, he waved goodbye to the chef, and wandered off towards his house in the Lower City. |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:22 PM |
| (Voidhack, you are accepted. Please watch your spelling, Block.) |
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| 28 May 2012 10:23 PM |
| (Sorry, I'm not good at spelling certain words) |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:23 PM |
| (Also block, may I ask for a brief history of your character?) |
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VoidHack
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| 28 May 2012 10:27 PM |
| Bio: Alexander was born in a Lower-Middle class family in Bariul, but despite the fact his family didn't have much for themselves, he was always a kind and friendly spirit. Helping everyone in anyway he could, he made friends with everybody, and everybody enjoyed his company. Has Alexander grew up his good deeds started to return the favor, people would come by his house and drop off things for his family, food, clothing, and a small amount of currency at times. This let Alexander move to the Upper-Middle class portion of the city, where he currently leads a happy life. |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:29 PM |
(Seems a bit generic, Block. I like the character, Voidhack.)
Block, as you continue through the market you hear the sound of a hammer pounding, and a crowd of people. |
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| 28 May 2012 10:34 PM |
| Alexander looked at the crowd of people all looking in awe at something, he walked over to the crowd, and he heard a hammer continuously pounding on whats sounds like metal, Alexander managed to find a way to get to the front of a crowd, after an "Excuse me" or two, He arrived at the front of the crowd. There was a Dwarf working on smithing something, what it was Alexander was not sure. but he was good at what he was doing, not a single flaw. Alexander says to the Dwarf, "Thats some pretty good Blacksmithing you can do there." |
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VoidHack
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:36 PM |
| (That is a nice bio. Continue, sil vous plait.) |
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VoidHack
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:42 PM |
| (Excellent wordcrafting. I love how you are showing the character's personality in a quick and efficient way: Through indirect personification.) |
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| 28 May 2012 10:44 PM |
| "Hi Tag, my name is Alexander, I work helping the farmers in the field. So what are you smithing right now?" has I ask the question Alexander feels the moisture from the steam. Alexander never really took an interest in blacksmithing because his dad had always said: "Blacksmiths make the very weapons that are used to end the lives of innocent people." But for now he made an exception. |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:45 PM |
| (Could you please remove the pacifistic part? It is a bit cliche.) |
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| 28 May 2012 10:46 PM |
| (Sorry, honestly I'm a little more into the War/Zombie Apocalypse Roleplays and I'm kinda trying to get used to other types) |
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nights192
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| 28 May 2012 10:47 PM |
| (I mean, in this time, most people are hunters.) |
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| 28 May 2012 10:48 PM |
| (Well, Alexander is okay with Animal killing, just not killing people) |
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