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| 25 May 2012 08:50 PM |
It was suppose to be a normal summer but they found out there is a new god. He is the son of Zeus and Hera but he has all there powers. He uses them for good but he can get angry and kill. Rules. 1. No trolling 2. Put in other NiNjA 3.You have to be accepted by me Cs. Name Age: Gender: Bio: Appearance: Godly parent: Born where?: Weapon: Magical item?: Other |
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| 25 May 2012 08:52 PM |
| Sorry, mate, this isn't that good. |
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| 25 May 2012 08:54 PM |
| sorry for doing something I love jerk |
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| 25 May 2012 08:55 PM |
| Why are you calling me a jerk? I'm just saying that theirs not that much plot, and it isn't that good. |
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| 25 May 2012 08:57 PM |
| i can't make plots thats the best i could do so get over it. |
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| 25 May 2012 08:57 PM |
| *Sigh* Oh the sensitive people. |
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| 25 May 2012 08:58 PM |
| I suggest working on some other threads before making your own. |
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| 25 May 2012 08:59 PM |
| Other threads should give you a good idea what to expect. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:00 PM |
| Their needs to be more than 3 sentences of plot. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:00 PM |
| Keep looking, obviously you haven't looked enough. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:01 PM |
It needs more 'beef'. Add more to the story. Don't be lazy.
If you take this as an insult: This is constructive criticism.
If you still think it's an insult: You will not survive the Role-Playing Forum. Go to a corner and cry. Don't come back. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:01 PM |
| I have looked for 6 months idiot. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:02 PM |
| Stop calling us idiots, we are the roleplay elite. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:02 PM |
| I looked for two weeks, and my first thread got over about 100 posts. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:04 PM |
| You know no body will like you three just go bother someone else. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:06 PM |
Alot of people like us, and still do.
Nobody is going to join this unless you add more BEEF. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:06 PM |
| Oh? So now he's trying to go for self esteem? Nice try, but you've failed. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:07 PM |
| I suck at every plot i made so unless you help go away and shut up. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:08 PM |
We are helping.
Help: Add more plot. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:10 PM |
| No and shut up You JerKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK |
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| 25 May 2012 09:12 PM |
| This is how the Roleplay forum is, DEAL WITH IT. |
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| 25 May 2012 09:13 PM |
| Why are you calling me a jerk? I'm not doing anything bad, and your downright refusing to improve. |
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