DPvsSJ
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| 19 May 2012 06:06 AM |
This was a rap I had in a dream. I was in a rap battle or something. It's kind of short, and not too good but I still like it. I feel accomplished.
Okay, let’s start with this I don’t listen to you. I listen to myself and others too. But when you insult me and my friends you get on my bad side and that ain’t good I will beat you in something like everybody would We have to many people like you It ends up with Fighting, Killing, Torture, and war Insults, Depression, Sadness and more So after i’m done beatin’ you with this rap How ’bout you go home and take a little nap and dream about where you make the right choice and your life isnt like this where you didn’t insult my friends and lose all yours too. (Needs a better ending. Suggestions?) |
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DPvsSJ
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| 19 May 2012 06:11 AM |
| Please comment if you like it or dont like it |
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CzarGames
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| 19 May 2012 06:15 AM |
Pretty good. And I like it even more because it isn't rap that's like:
Swear Swear Racial slur Swear Adult content Swear Long line of swearing More adult content More racial slurs
Like most rap. |
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DPvsSJ
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| 19 May 2012 07:16 AM |
| Thanks and thats a good one! |
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Anvandare
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| 19 May 2012 07:18 AM |
| I don't really see a beat too it... |
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DPvsSJ
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| 19 May 2012 08:48 AM |
| Yeah it indove one of those things that someone would have to say for it to work. |
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| 19 May 2012 08:59 AM |
I'm blow your mind, on the side line, feelin' fine, This is a rhyme, so get out of the way before you lose time, Like new fresh lyrics with a fillin', I smell some grillin' in here! So the time is mere, to end this rap right here, but i'm not done yet, so don't give a threat, nothing's gonna get betta, like getting sweaty in a sweater, Uh. Did you see what I did there? At least I don't swear, cause it's not nice having people being boiled like rice, and, this is the last line, of this really epic rhyme.
Word. |
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DPvsSJ
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koopaNGC
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| 25 May 2012 07:44 PM |
My favorite part was:
"Fighting, Killing, Torture, and war Insults, Depression, Sadness and more" |
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| 25 May 2012 07:49 PM |
@Dp: Did you say that bout' my rap? |
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DPvsSJ
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Axew5
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| 26 May 2012 07:42 AM |
| I'd rather rap than take a nap. |
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DPvsSJ
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| 26 May 2012 07:43 AM |
| Yeah That part is were I started to forget it. |
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| 26 May 2012 08:33 AM |
| What kind of god damn username is that? |
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DPvsSJ
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| 26 May 2012 03:15 PM |
| It stands for Dill Pickle vrs. Slim Jim. Those are people I made up when I was 8. Dont be creepy Made in China |
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